This is my first story and I don't get how this works so the story might be messed up... Review if you like it so I know to update.
Caitlyn VO
I died.
My life was never the best life ever. My mom left me when I was 10 and my dad committed suicide a few months after. There was never anyone who really cared about me. I didn't know whether I should've been happy or sad about dying. My whole life flashed in front of my eyes. I was on a walk when I died; well I was always on walks since I didn't belong anywhere. On the other side of the road, I saw a pretty lady with a guy and a person stalking them. I thought, "Maybe that person wants to kill them!" I looked closer at the stalker and saw he or she had a knife in their hand.
I jumped out immediately. I didn't care if I died or not, it wasn't like I even liked my life. But the woman and the man looked like a couple and were smiling at each other like they were the only people in the world. I would risk my life for a stranger who seemed to love life more than me; wouldn't anyone? But I did feel like it was a bit unfair. I didn't do anything wrong so why did I have to have such bad luck? I continued charging at the stalker and then he or she spotted me.
I didn't know there was another person on the stalkers side when I took the one with the knife down. I glanced at the couple running away. I hoped they were gonna call the police. I was about ask why he or she was stalking them when something hit me. I looked at my arm. Blood trickled down the sides. I realized I had been hit with a bullet. Pain shot up my arm. While I was processing that I had gotten shot with a gun, the second one came.
This time, it hit my back. I was pretty sure I was gonna die. But eh, at least the last thing I ate was pie. Then I remembered what I had practiced many times over to say when I died. I whispered/ wheezed/ coughed out, "I...like..pie." Then I thought, "Now I can die with no regrets."
Is this how it feels to die? Is this it? It was like all the warmth of my body was trickling away. (which probably was the case) "Configuration accepted. Skill (Cold Resistance) learned."
Now there was a random voice in my head; great! Then I remembered my dreams like flying and having wings that could change at will-
"Configuration accepted. Ability to fly and shape shift different parts of the body."
I also wanted to be able to hold a bunch of stuff without needing to hold it; like an invisible pouch that I don't need to carry-
"Configuration accepted. Skill (Consume) learned."
STOP CUTTING ME OFF YOU STUPID VOICE-
"Configuration accepted. Ability to command others."
I also wanted to look really awesome and be really amazing at everything-
"Configuration accepted. Charm and sharper senses, better looks, smartness, etc."
and more.
"Configuration accepted. Skill adding and leveling up."
But still be human; or at least look the part.
"Configuration accepted. Race; unknown with human looks."
And that's when my "life" changed.
And that's it! I hope you all like it. And review if you want faster updates or to point out mistakes!
