Disclaimer: I do not own Naruto SADLY IF I DID WELL LETS JUST SAY NARUTO WOULD NOT BE A SHOW FOR KIDS... HEHE RATED M FOR MATURE FOR A REASON, YAOI, LEMON, SASU X NARU, etc. Okay so this is my actual first story so dont flame please. >> >> >> >> >> >> >> >> >> >> >> >> >> >> >> >> >> >> >> >> >> >> >> >> >> >>
I would like good reviews on how to improve.
Hope you enjoy I know its short but I cant overdo my computer.
Chapter 1
He lay asleep on his bed; the sun rays were passing trough the cracks in the window's curtain. His yellow spiky hair was down covering his eyes. Naruto had just come back from a mission with Sai, Sakura, and Kakashi, he longed for the sleep. He hadn't slept for the last couple of days since he was on 24/7 guard duty. Sai didn't help at all throughout the mission he sat next to where Naruto would stand and start asking him questions about his Penis. Naruto would just start to scream about what a gay perv he was. Sai would just laugh. But Naruto was glad to sleep again.
The dark haired boy that was sleeping on the floor next to Naruto's bed was tossing and turning "Ow, Shit that hurt!" Sasuke hit his head. When he was awake he looked at the clock, it marked 12:01 A.M. He looked up at Naruto, smiled and tried to drift back to sleep.
Well thats the End Reviews Appriciated and once again please dont Flame.
Me: goes to bed where sasuke is waiting for me
