Demon/good demon(is it possible to had a good demon? In this story it is.)
Thought/people talk just see if there are quotes for dialogue.
Darkness gripping at my dreams. In the center a man with hair the color of fire and slitted red eyes stares at me. Those eye don't just see me, they see my soul, my life, the torment the villagers give me. Night after night, day after day. They never see the love given to me by ji-ji or ichiraiku. The man always whispers to me to take his power to get revenge for those who hurt me, those who beat me, who set my house in flames, who taunted me, who called me names; no matter how hard I try to overcome those who hate, the world attempts to destroy me for absolutely no reason. I realize they fear me. Hopefully by acting like an idiot, they will not hurt me. Only a few people accept me; Hokage ji-ji, Ayame, old man ichiraiku, and the other shunned child living in the forest and protecting Kohona from invaders. I am hated. I am Naruto.
Far away in the forest of Kohona a young girl steps lightly towards Kohona……
I lightly walk towards the Hokage tower my hanging haggardly around my eyes. The gifts my parents have given me are well hidden in the ragged clothing ji-ji has given me. I groaned loudly in frustration. When will he realize the clothes he gives me just won't last the way I live. "Child", a rough wolf like voice said patiently "you have just given out your hiding place." "SO RUN THE HELL AWAY!" shrieked a voice in my head like a broken bells. Life's like that with a Juuichi no Fenikusu and a Juuni no Iki Urufu sealed in your stomach. "Did you hear that!" yelled one of the animal gore covered hunters. "I bet it was the demon child. A strand of her hair alone is worth a fortune!" yelled another. I started sprinting faster than myself, faster than the forest, faster than the two tenants in my body. I ran and ran and ran. Suddenly the ground underneath me disappeared. A huge pit trap loomed in front of me. "Turn left," bothvoices birdlike and wolf like calmly say as if their host wasn't being chased by murdering hunters trying to skin my body for some coins. How thoughtful. huh. "Demon" voices cackle behind me. "Soon we'll burn your pretty little forest to the ground" they cackled with glee. A soft swooping sound hit my ears. I immediately sprang up. "No" the voices shrieked. "Get away! Hurry!" My head turns, my eyes easily seeing the net thrown behind me. I try to dodge but the weighted net pins me to the ground. I struggle to get out. Men from all sides creep up towards me. One brings a knife level to my face. I close my eyes and await the pain, my ears hearing the whistling sound the knife makes before connecting with my throat and then…………
evil hunter pov
Ha! That demon is finally gonna die! It deserves to die for what it did.
third person
a nano second before the dagger connected with the young girl's throat, bright light erupted from the girl enveloping everything and then ..................................................................................................................................
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Translator
Juuichi no fenikusu:eleven tailed phoenix
Juuni no iki Urufu; 12 tailed spirit wolf
