I don't own any of the characters of "Pride and Prejudice", Jane Austen owns them! I own only the new characters (that aren't in the book)..
I've changed some of the names... Enjoy!
Three girls wearing short-shorts and high heels arrived at the Red Moon with a cab; as soon as they stepped out of the car Lizzy knew she didn't like them. These girls were the usual bimbos who thought they were super cool. The girls came to the usher and tried get in smiling and sweet talking, but it was to no avail because the usher had a policy about the people to let in. One of the rules was to not let in people that were clearly drunk; the three girls were quite drunk. The usher, who's name was Robbie, saw Lizzy laughing her ass off as the girls went away angry.
"Lizzy! Why didn't you tell me you were coming?!"
"Oh hi Robbie! I thought I'd be a good girl this time and besides I would have missed the show outside here.." Lizzy was walking towards Robbie, still laughing.
"Lizzy!" this time it was Jane, Elizabeth's sister who was talking.
Jane was a 23 years old girl with straight blond hair, she had a light blue top with black little pearls at the bottom and at the neckline, and she was also wearing a black satin skirt that was just above the knees. Her sister Marilyn was there as well, she was just wearing brown trousers and an orange-yellow t-shirt with the name of a heavy metal band's name. Her hair was black and the make up was quite heavy. Jane and Elizabeth had decided to take Marilyn out for the night; she was the outcast of the family… Elizabeth instead was wearing a red top with a black belt at the waist, she was also wearing a dress but the dress was white, as for shoes she's wearing red high heels.
"Oh hi Jane… Mary… What are you doing here?" Robbie asked as if he didn't know the answer. He saw Marilyn and guessed that the eldest Bennett girls were going out to cheer up Marilyn.
"Well, we thought we might come here and just hang out in front of this line. I think it's funny! Look these people behind us, they're not happy we're wasting our time here.. So please let us in Robbie!"
"Maladies'!" a very gentleman gesture followed the words.
"Thank you!" Jane was happy to get in, also because she felt that the people behind her would start a riot quite soon…
"Thank you Robbie! What a gentleman you are! Be careful not to reveal this to Maggie, you're wife would kill us if she knew we inspired this behaviour in public…" Lizzy smiled and as she was stepping inside she heard Robbie's answer.
"I won't! See you later inside Lizzy. Have a nice time Marilyn!"
"Grrhmnmmmm" although Marilyn said something no one understood her answer.
The music inside was playing, thanks to Robbie the place wasn't even full, there were still places where to seat. So Robbie did know Lizzy was coming that night, otherwise the place would have been a little bit crowded and it wouldn't have been possible to find a place. The girls chose the furthest corner from the entrance and sat down.
"So Jane, Mary what do you want to drink? I'll go and order.."
"I'll take something without alcohol. Don't you dare take me another time the Cosmopolitan… I have to drive and unlike you, I'm a responsible adult!"
"Jane! You offend me!" Elizabeth put a face, but you knew right away that she wasn't serious.
"I'll take a beer"
"Ok! Jane a Cosmo… Oh sorry I meant the Pineapple Dream and for Mary a beer. Okey. I'm coming right away.."
She walked to the counter and greeted the bartender, who was a friend of hers. After she ordered the drinks she waited at the counter, at her left there were some girls talking, at her right there was a free seat, which was soon occupied by a guy, who looked quite drunk.
"Hey yooooooooooouuuuuu! Watz your naaame you preeeeatty one?" asked the man
""Listen, I'm not interested, why don't you go back to your girlfriend or wife and make peace… Instead of wasting my time and your money… Or just take a cab and go home, in the morning you call your sweetheart and apologize!" Elizabeth got the drinks and went off.
Lizzy had the capacity of guessing people's problems, so when they harassed her she just gave them the solution to their problems leaving them quite surprised.
Elizabeth went back to her table and gave her sisters their drinks… Some minutes later Lizzy's and Jane's favourite song started to play. They stood up and started to sing and dance! Seeing that the two girls were quite good the crowd cheered and joined them; some guys who thought they knew the words joined the singing session, only to end up outside of the club by one of the bartenders. As soon as the song finished a huge clapping wave started and Jane noticed only then the crowd. The girl turned red, while her sister Elizabeth was enjoying the moment.
The crowd "went away" and started to talk, while the girls sat down.
"Lizzy! You should have told me there were people watching us!" Jane was still red and mortified.
"Come on Jane… It wouldn't have been possible… When I sing I want to sing all the song!" after a pause she continued " and besides it was fun!" Lizzy finished with a laugh.
At that moment Robbie came inside, instead of having the usual usher black clothes, he had some light blue jeans with a red Rock 'n' Roll themed t-shirt. He had just finished to work, so he got in the workers area where there was a shower, he took a shower and changed clothes. Robbie was now ready to have some fun!
"Tree-bomb!" he shouted from the workers' door.
"Robbie! Finally you finished! I was just wondering whether you'd finish or not? By the way where's Maggie?"
"Oh, she's coming! She just called me, and she was meeting with my cousin and a friend of his. They're coming here tonight…"
"Oh I didn't know you had a cousin! What does he do?" asked an interested Jane
"I bet he's some kind of secret agent, who's saving the world from all the bad guys!" it was the dreamer Lizzy who spoke.
"I'm sorry Lizzy to disappoint you! But I won't tell you anything; I want to see if you can guess it. I bet a vacation at your lake house that you won't be able…" Robbie stayed quite seriously.
"Ok! I accept, but if I guess it right I want a vacation at your Colorado House."
"It's a deal!" Robbie said, then he shook hands with her.
You have to know that Robbie and Lizzy had known each other since childhood and since then started to bet on everything, once they were older they started to bet on their vacancy houses. Lizzy had as well the capacity of guessing people's job.
So Robbie, Jane, Marilyn and Lizzy spent the next 15 minutes chatting. Suddenly the whole club fell silent, at the entrance there were four people standing in the shadow. The first one was a man, who was dressed in a very casual but elegant way. He came forward.
"Lizzy! This is my cousin, William Darcy!"...
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I've added the new part to the chap. cuz I needed to introduce Darcy and I need to story to go on...
Sorry it took so long, but I've been on vacation, so I wasn't able to update.
