Not necessarily a rewrite, but a few tweaks were added. (9-21-17) Welcome to Cruise of Hope and Despair!


Hope's Peak Academy, Chiari thought. I never thought I'd ever be here. An ordinary teenager like me…

Chiari was accepted to Hope's Peak Academy because she was picked from a lottery of ordinary students to come here, and called her the, "SHSL Lucky Student".

Her light mahogany hair was put into a low, messy bun, along with dull green eyes, and pale skin. She wore a normal light gray T-shirt with an olive colored hoodie, which hid the the fact that she had large breasts. She also wore boot cut jeans and hiking boots. A yellow hair bow tie was attached to her hair, and she had glasses to see well. At least, that's what she usually wears.

It was said that, "if you come here, you'll be set for life". At least that is what has been going around. Chiari leaned against the gates, trying to calm herself down from nervousness. Even when she was prepared.

"Wow, I didn't know so many people were talented with a variety of weird talents!" Chiari's younger brother, Eiji said, as they were looking at student's information on a thread. The computer made rumbling noises as usual as Chiari selected and clicked numerous times with the mouse, as she wanted to get to know as many SHSL students as possible.

"I know right? And I'm going there soon!" Chiari said, not meaning to brag. She looked down at her little brother, and gave a warm smile.

"So, will you miss me?" Eiji asked, twirling his thumbs and looked up at her with sad puppy dog eyes.

Chiari giggled and said, "Of course! I'll miss you too! You're also going to school soon!" Eiji smiled and jumped on her.

"Promise?" Eiji asked as he sat on Chiari's lap.

"Pinky promise," Chiari said as they crossed their pinkies together.


"Well, looks like nobody's coming. I guess either they're late or early," Chiari sighed, as she picked up her bag full of books, and walked through the gates, looking for a new hope. Little did she know, she was about to experience pure despair.

She opened the doors of the well-kept school. Huh, Chiari thought. Guess I'm too early. Well, that's what I get for getting too anxious. As she took the first step inside, her vision blurred, her head throbbed, and then… darkness. Well, in a simpler term, she collapsed. After a few minutes, which seemed like forever, Chiari started to wake up. Her vision was still blurry, her head still throbbed, and was still lying on what seemed like a wooden floor.

What- what's happening?

Why am I…?

Why do I hear waves?

Why is it so bright and sunny?

Chiari snapped out of her daze suddenly, and screamed softly as she scooted rapidly to a wall. The reason for that is because of a sudden, loud ding in her pocket. She wildly searched her pockets to find a weird tablet the size of a whole hand. She turned it on. The Hope's Peak Academy crest shined on the blue screen, and on the corner, it said "e Handbook". After the crest was there for a while, Chiari saw her personal information and a variety of menu options.

"What? Where did they find my information? Why was this in my pocket? And… I don't remember taking this photo!" Chiari mumbled surprisingly.

Chiari Yamamoto

SHSL: Lucky Student

Age: 15

Gender: Female

Birth Date: October 30th (Libra)

Height: 5'5 ft. (165 cm)

Weight: 120 lbs. (54.5 kg)

Blood Type: O+

Handedness: Right Handed

Likes: Food, Video Games, Friends, French Macarons

Dislikes: Being Lonely, Dishonest People, Meat (She's a vegetarian)

Chiari shook her head and looked up, she apparently was on the deck of a cruise boat. A humungous cruise boat in fact. Maybe an estimate of 5 floors and a basement. The endless blue waves crashed onto the bright, white boat, and the sun was beaming onto her skin. It felt… peaceful.

"Guess I'd better find some people," she said as she weakly stood up. She held her throbbing head as she walked on the isolated deck, only to find a person collapsed next to the cruise waterslide.


I've seen a lot of SYOC's lately, and now I'm inspired and I want to make one of my own. Do not enter if you're impatient because updates will be slow. (I'm lazy XD) Bear with me because this is my first fanfic, and I'm going to type as I go. Now, for the application. Here is some rules.

1. First come is first served, but only if you put effort into your application. Detail is key! Please take at least thirty minutes on typing it up.

2. You are not allowed to reserve spots unless you want your OC to have a twin, sibling, or close relationship. But you'll need my permission.

3. No Gary or Mary Sue. They're too annoying.

4. Reviews are not acceptable. Only PM me. Review applications will either be ignored or deleted.

5. Japanese OC's are preferred, but other nationalities are okay as long as you give a reason. (Ex: Moved, studying aboard)

6. Lastly, later in the SYOC, I'll be asking for more detail about your character as we go further into this killing game. So be prepared for that. Have fun!

Name:

SHSL (Ultimate):

Age:

Nationality:

Gender: (Trans genders and cross dressers are allowed. But only one or two person(s) can have that spot)

Birth Date/Sign:

Height:

Weight:

Blood Type:

Handedness: (It would be nice if more people are right handed because left handed people are less common. You'll see why this will be important later. Fun Fact: I'm actually left handed)

Appearance and Physical Build:

Clothing:

Personality: (Details!)

History: (And how he/she got their talent. It doesn't have to be tragic! Your OC can have a normal life. I see too many people with sad lives)

Secrets: (Again, doesn't have to be tragic!)

Strengths:

Weaknesses:

Family and Relationships:

Likes:

Dislikes:

Fears:

Survivor/Culprit/Victim: (Not everyone is going to survive, so I might change this. Don't be furious if you die or murder)

Method of Murder:

Reaction to Body Discovery:

Role in Investigation:

Role in Trial:

Reaction if Innocent:

Reaction if Guilty:

Reaction in Execution: (Include both if they're watching someone get executed and if they're the ones being executed)

Examples of Speech: (Include introduction, and examples of what they would say)

Other: (Did I forget something?)


(9-21-17) The only things that I changed is Chiari's weight, and some format tweaks. Previously, she was 110 lbs, which was WAY to skinny for a busty 15 year old. I hope you understand. XD