hello people there were some guys saying that i should try to get everything in one chapter so i tried it and here it is pleas comment in the section bellow oke ^^
this is quite connected to Coeus the guardian of peace so guys pleas read that to its made by a friend
skills: night vision
speaking: "I want to..."
thinking: 'keep writing'
well let me know what you think about the story thanks guys
I was running.
I had been running for almost three hours, but I kept going because it was the only way to escape the truth, the truth that I could never go back home again.
While I kept running I began to doubt myself. Why was I so fixated on the game, if I wasn't so stupid and would have just go on with my life I would have been happy. In a wheelchair and going back to school but still, I would have had a good life. I ran past a few monsters but because I was running so fast they just looked after me and decided to ignore. Why did Kayaba Akihio had to do something so evil as locking a fifty thousand players in this game. Why did he make my world of freedom into a cage.
Before I knew I was out of stamina and had to walk slower before stopping. I walked to a tree, breathing heavily and sat down beside it. One look at the map told me I ran quite a bit and at the looks of it I was almost at the edge of the dungeon.
As I doubted it became later and later, and before I noticed it became dark. Even then I only noticed there was a monster because of the danger sign, wich meant i was in the monster his territory. You could see the monster was waiting for me to do something when it noticed i saw it and it began to growl. I looked at the monster: it was a werewolf-type and at the looks of it, it didn't call its friends yet. I sighted: 'I should make a camp here and sleep a bit.' I kneeled down and began to load one of my skills: Safety first. It was one of the beginner spells people could use, when you where in a dungeon and you were to far to get back home you could use it and make a little safety zone in the dungeon where you could sleep without being killed by a monster.
After loading (it took a while to do it) I laid down on the grass while using the tree as a pillow and looked at the sky. Even though this world was fake and even though I could die any minute, the moment I laid down and saw all the stars I was astonished. The stars were made out of pictures that Kayaba took in the real world and then edited the pictures so that they looked like they were real. And no matter how much I saw them, I was always stunned by their beauty and while laying down on the ground and staring at sky, I began to dream about the life I had left behind me.
*Flashback*
My parents and sister were going to the market to buy food when it finally came out. The first VRMMORPG that was ever created by humankind. The whole world was talking about it, everywhere people were standing in a line to get one of the first copies that would be sold. Everyone wanted the first 'second reality game' that wich released today, and I was one of the 50.000 people who were lucky enough to get one of the copies. The reason I didn't have to stand in the long lines was because of a good friend of mine was a beta-tester. He asked the company to make one for me to so I could play it and strange enough the company accepted the request and gave me a copy of Sword Art Online aka SAO. My friend also told me that this was an upgraded version of the beta-game because in the beta version, people could only use swords to fight. At the end of the beta test, because almost every beta-tester asked it the game masters (GM) changed the game so that it was possible to use a bow. Most people would still go for the sword because it was much more fun and it gave some bonuses, plus if you activated a sword-skill, the system would make sure it connected, when using a bow it was all about accuracy if the shot connected or not.
My best-friend came by. I asked him to come so we could talk about SAO, and because I couldn't move very well with my wheelchair he always came to my house. I was watching the clock, he said he would be at my house at 2 o'clock and he was never to late, not even one second. So as I saw the clock ticking I began to think what we would talk about. Were you could find good drops? What the best place would be to level? …
Time passed by and it finally became 2 o'clock, and there it was: the ring of the bell. Because I sat right besides the door I opened immediately and there he was: Kiragaya Kayzuto the beta tester who called himself Kirito in-game. Among the beta testers he was called a Beater for the reason he was the one who got the best score of the game, he was the one who reached the second zone and discovered many secrets and above all he was my best friend.
"Hey Kage-kun" He never called me by my real name but always by my in-game name, for the simple reason he knew that I pas bullied because of my name. I never understood why my parents gave me the name Inu Kira, but I know that bullies always pestered me with it, there were even some people who were afraid of me because of my name.
I smiled : "Hey Kirito-kun, how are you?" Because he always called me by my game name, when the two of us were alone I called him by his character name to, just for the fun.
His eyes began to shine. "Well actually I got a surprise for you"
"A surprise? Well, let me see?!" if it would be possible his eyes began to shine even more.
"Well close your eyes: tada!" in his hands he held one of the first additions of the game I longed so for: Sword Art Online.
"Whaaat, how did you get it so fast?"
"I don't know, the moment the beta test finished they gave it to me." Kirito shrugged: "Well what do you say? Want to try?"
I didn't have to think about it: "Yes!"
*End flashback*
When I woke up I noticed the birds like monsters who were chirping. It was such a natural feeling that it seemed as yesterday didn't happen at all but the moment I opened my eyes all the horror came back. The sight of people who jumped off the buildings and killed themselves, the girls who were crying that they could make a river with their tears if it would be possible, the guys who just sat their going all mad and then you had the players like me, they did go out in the field and began to work on surviving. Well except for me as I just had run for the biggest part of the day. I stood up and canceled the safety zone, after this happened I began to walk back to the Town of beginnings.
When I came to the part were you could find boars (these monster where the same as slimes in older games) I noticed that there was a player killing them. As i stood still and looked I noticed that he was using a shield and a one hand sword, I also noticed that he had it a little difficult with activating sword skills but because he was a higher level than the slimes, he could kill them when he landed one hit. As I was watching him, I began to look at his clothing, the player was wearing a long cloak in a colour that would be described as red-brown and beneath the cloak I could see that he was wearing black-red clothes. he had red-brown hair and had a fairly white skin, he had a slender face with deep brown eyes wich looked calm while he was killing the boars.
He killed one more boar and then turned around and looked at me: "If you don't move I might think you're an NPC you know" he said while he smiled, this made his face even more friendly.
I realized I was being rude so I walked a little closer and said: "hey sorry man I didn't mean to be rude."
The guy smiled again: "Doesn't matter mate, but hey can you tell me, why someone like you has come so far from the city? Most of the people are still in the city hoping for someone to shut the system down."
I hesitated, could I trust this guy? While i was hesitating I looked at his face again and seeing his friendly face I began to feel calm. I smiled: "I just took a stroll around the dungeon, how about you?"
The guys shrugged, he did it in a way that I began to smile, "Same as you I think, I didn't want to do nothing so I did go out to ease my mind. Although im probably the only one who does it like this."
I began to laugh silently: " what sort of person eases his pain while he is killing monsters." I said while holding my laughter in. He
looked embarrassed "Well, I...I... I don't know okay I just feel better when I can kill these monsters.
I took a little more distance: "Hey I need to go okay? Ow and do me a pleasure: don't die on me okay." It may sounded friendly but I knew that he would take it seriously, 'strange, I don't know this guy for long and still I trust him so much.'
He looked at me and when he saw the serious look is his eyes he smiled: "Okay I wont die so you do your best to do the same." And with these words we parted, with neither of us knowing that I would see him again in a little while.
I turned around and began to run towards the city.
When I entered the city the first thing I saw was a big sturdy guy standing on a platform, he was shouting something like: "Let us join forces so we can get stronger, stronger so we wont die." Although it sounded nice, I knew that it would take a huge amount of work to get most of the people in the city moving.
The guy kept talking. As I headed to the place I walked straight past the group and for some reason I had the feeling that he was looking at me... maybe it was imagination.
A little further I came at the plaza and even with a single glance you saw that there was nobody here. I shivered, I couldn't understand how he could stay there, if it was me I would try to evade this place as much as possible. Just standing here made me think about that faithful moment were Kayaba revealed the truth about the game...
I began to slowly walk to the middle of the plaza and as I came closer I noticed that a person was sitting in the shadow of the statue that stood in the middle of the plaza. He looked like a girl: he had a delicate face with high cheekbones and a small body. But the most outstanding part about him were the eyes and the hair: it was a deeper black then the night, it looked like all the colours mixed together to form one colour: darker than black.
I was relieved when I saw the face of my best friend. I knew he was still alive because the sign in my friend list said to but because I didn't know how he was doing I was happy to see him.
When he noticed me a smile broke through: "Hello there Kage-kun. how are you doing?" he was probably worried about me because I stayed in the dungeon for a whole night.
I tried to sound courageous: "If Kayaba think im going to die so fast he will be disappointed. How are you?"
He probably heard that I was worried about him but he just shrugged and while he smiled he said: "Well I'm alright but there is something I'm curious about."
I looked up, surprised, "Whats wrong?"
"There is a rumor about a guy who saves everyone in need. The game just started but i heard he already saved a party of 30 newbies and he saved some girls from being picked on. The rumors say he is a red shadow who appears and then disappears."
At this part I began to get interested could it be.. "Say Kirito-kun the party he save when and where was it?"
"I think it was about 9 AM today, why? you sound like you know something."
As i was thinking I began to talk "Yes I think I know him I met him around 9:30 AM at the fields of beginners. he was killing some boars and he was totally in brown-red."
Kirito looked at me like I was dreaming "You're serious..."
"Yes totally, I even talked to him he looked like a nice guy"
Kirito began to laugh "haha well that's something suprising. Say, you want to go for some hunting? we need to level fast and reach Tolbana. If we get there we can get some new stuff."
It was such a natural reaction that I began to laugh 'That's the Kirito I know' i thought to myself and to him i said: "Let's go if we want to do some hunting we need to hurry otherwise the newbies are going to hunt the fields clean."
This was the feeling I wanted to have without being caught in the game. I wanted to see my sister, to see my parents, to go to school and get bored because of the lessons, heck I would even hug the bullies if that meant I could go back to the real world.
'But right now I should enjoy the game and try to survive.' and with this thought We began to walk in the dirction of the hunting fields while the sun stood high and Kayaba was looking at us from somewhere.
well guys that was chapter one it took a huge ammount of stress so pleas give some comments and ill see what i can change thanks a lot people
