*sigh* If I become the next Hamohamster for this then I swear to god I will retire fanfiction. Anyway, I have written AVGN fanfiction before. I have written Nostalgia Critic fanfiction before. I have never wrote anything shippy. I ship it. My bookmarks are filled with Nerd/Critic fanfiction. I've had ideas but I've never put my thoughts into actions.
There's a reason for this. There's a beautiful little fic called "A Special Truce" where beautiful things happen. I will not go into too much detail. The problems this fic faces is
1. It seemed more like a gay cringy high school romancey fic then anything
2. AVGN is waaaay to whiney and womanly (not that it's a bad thing but it is very out of character) and
3. Critic was cringy to read.
4. A lot of people who write them as a pairing give them amazing chemistry, they argue and don't admit their feelings but we know they're there for eachother. The author of this fanfic neglects that and forgets that they are enemies and need to have that chemistry or else the paring is flat. I know that the author was trying to have Nostalgia Critic be all like "awh i was just joking lol" but it didn't work.
5. The grammer could have been a lot worse, there were some typos but it was readable at least.
6. Some lines were cringy
7. Never ever ever ever call the Nerd James. The Nerd and James are two different beings. I mean, at least she didn't call Critic Doug but still. Never ever use real names as Nerd and Critic are fictional while Doug and James are real people.
8. E.L James writes better sex scenes
(I reviewed it at watch?v=P5M_cn4ImWw)
So, if this fic is bad, please tell me and we can forget this disaster ever happened. If it is not, I will be continuing this 30 day OTP challenge. May god have mercy on my soul. Completely SFW (I'm not that ready for embracing this otp yet)
