Powerful new pirates enter the race for the 'One piece'. This new crew travels across the one piece world and intertwines with some story arcs, along with the straw hats. The crew reach an unsurpassed level of power as they triumph through the nations. Warning: This is mainly about the new crew and doesn't focus on the actual straw hats. However does not exclude them. Just be aware that this is a story in the one piece world. May turn into a large multi-crossover story towards the end or middle!
DISCLAIMER: I do not own anything from one piece or any other future use of other anime/manga.
This is my first real attempt at a fanfiction so please be gentle but i would like feedback on my grammar or spelling issues. It would be nice to help get my writing skills up to par!
The Immortals: Chapter 1-Captains?
"I said stand mongrel." Said a tall sturdy man. He was staring down into a another man who was sitting at a table eating a small meal. "You think this is a joke kid?" The man questioned the man as he drew a small hidden blade from his long coat. He was wearing a large black trench coat and a dumbled pair of hammy-down boots. His shirt was dark and had a insignia of a penguin. The man was still eating when he stopped and wiped his mouth with a small cloth he held in his lap. After a moment in silence he stood and spoke. "I'm sorry. Was I in your seat sir?". The man gestured towards the table with confidence. "Yeh! Yeh, you were sitting in my seat and now you're going to pay. Thats my seat where I rule over this meaningless town." The man growled back at him.
"Well then my apologies, but last I heard this town belonged to the king." The man bowed his head revealing his chest behind his coat. "W-what you're part of the...Oh god no!" Screamed the man as he threw his knife and gathered his thugs towards the door. All of his men were stupefied by this rash change in mood. "Sir whats the matter? Hes just some little brat you can handle him." A subordinate called to him.
As the men were pouring into the street outside the small bar the thugs were harassing, a knife went flying through the crowd straight across to the opposite building. It had landed straight into a large poster that read: The king- Power unknwn, strength unknown and very dangerous. Bounty one hundred thousand million. The picture on the poster was of a tall slender man wearing a dark trench coat covering most of his face and a large scythe made of a beautiful sapphire blue draped across his back. As the men screamed and gathered their composer they all read the poster and one by one the jaws slammed heavy on the cold ground. "C-captain we should retreat while we still can." A man cried to his master who had started another argument with the man. "Who do you think you are coming here to face off the powerful Penguin crew? I don't care how 'strong' they say you are won't let bounty like that slip away from us." The man growled as he drew a long sleek blade from his side. Reluctantly drew their swords, all of them shaking at the knees. The man was still standing in the doorway of the bar and was watching, observing the men as they pondered if they should flee and leave to pillage another day.
The man reached deep into his coat pocket and dragged out a hefty bag of gold and tossed it to the bar tender. "This should cover the damages." He spoke with with a smile on his face as he began laughing wickedly. "Let me show you just how much you underestimate me lowlifes." He roared as he launched forward into the crowd sending men flying in every direction. A few slammed into the bar crushing the wall to dust, others fly up into surrounding buildings and through windows. As they all attacked the man shrugged through blades dodging and maneuvering his way through the crowd leaving them around the corner of the block towards the docks. AS he ran the men began shooting bullets at him which he dodged like in the matrix and jumped over a man slashing towards his chest. He slammed his hand into his back and grabbed the man, then threw him at the oncoming attackers.
When they finally reached the docks shore the man was perfectly calm and seemingly at peace, while the chasseurs were out of breath and hunched over gasping for air. "We have you cornered rat." Sneered the man as he placed his pistol back into its holster and reached for his trusty sword. "Or is it you who have be trapped friends?" The man spoke before a large gust of smoke flooded the area blinding the men and disorienting them. "Captin!" they all shouted while searching for each other.
As the captain sucked in air and clapped his hands together releasing a immense gust of wind pushing the smoke out over the water and away from the crew. "Is that all boy?" the man questioned while searching for his target which disappeared when to smoke rolled in. AS he was looking around his sensed a large object moving towards him at an incredible speed. He launched himself into the air just barely dodging the projectile. It turned out to be the man with a large scythe in his right hand. They were both staring at each other as the crew fell back from the force treading behind the man. The captain was hovering in the air on his feet and looked down with puzzled look. "What is your weapon crafted from?" He asked quizzically.
"Now thats a secret friend." He said jokingly. He began to swing the scythe around his body faster and faster until it looked as if he wasn't moving at all and the weapon disappeared into nothingness. He pounced at the man in the air only to be redirected by a large current of air slamming him deep into a near by boat. The owner looking at the hole in astonishment and began bowing and crying. "Why my boat. Why mine..." He murdered as he flew away as a little ghost. As the man rose from the hole his scythe was gone and he looked up with a sinister smile.
"You must have eaten a devil fruit, friend? It seems to me you're a loggia with a wind type fruit." He spoke before bursting into a psychotic laughter that spooked the crew members watching in awe at their captain. As his laughter rose louder and louder the sky began to darken and his arms began to twitch lively in place. He rocked his body back sending his coat back off onto the ground. As the collar lightly landed on the ground he exploded with a horrific scream that sent wind rushing around everyone and everything. The captain put a protective barrier around his crew and threw himself out at the man in his distant trance. He roared as a void of air formed around his thin sword. He slung the blade forcefully at the man. As the blade reached the mans chest he was thrown back by an unknown force. He was sent flying through boat after boat and finally resting at a near by fishing shack. He had blacked out from the initial impact. As he rose from the ground his head beating intensely down his body he looked out to see the man wielding a large claymore with only one hand. His right hand. He saw the blade and watched it as it crushed through a smaller blade and sliced a man in front of him in half.
As the body fell he say that is was one of his crew men, and as he began to fill with grief he looked wider and found that all but three of his men had been slain but this accursed man. "I'm sorry men I dragged you into this." He spoke solemnly as he drew his sword up and rushed at the enemy. He was merely swatted away by the side of the large and dull blade. The impact shattered his left shoulder and broke six of his ribs. He caught himself before he was sent flying again and prepared for another strike. As he drew back his blade and began to launch at the man that was a few yards back he was interrupted by a large blade piercing his lower torso. As the blade lifted him up he turned his head slowly in a mystified manner to see boy behind him with a saddened expression and a deep laugh from the pits of hell as he dropped the boy on the ground. When he landed it splashed blood from the wound into his face. The blood ran down his face warm and full of life dripping softly from his nose and cheek onto the ground forming a small crismon puddle. He quickly created a pressured vacuum around the wound with wind to stop the bleeding and pushed himself back with wind and began running away. He looked back to see the man lickign his blade with his tounge his eyes pulsing with excitement. The boy had again traded his weapon for another. He was now carrying a long slim katana that had a dragon engraved on the hilt and blade.
As the captain reached the far side of the docks and hid inside a small shack he peaked out to see the final demise of his crew. The man had soullessly cut down the men and stood there staring at the ground laughing softly to himself as it began to rain. Blood had been spattered all around the docks covering the boats and walls of shacks a dark red velvet. The man jerked around and faced the captain meeting his gaze. "A real red carpet huh." He chuckled to himself as he drew his blade out in front of himself and ran two fingers down to blade. "Awaked paradox. Devour this insolent fool." He spoke quietly.
AS the blade shook and shined a dark purple-ish glow a black portal opened behind him. The man stopped and clasped his right hand destroying the blade from the hilt dropping the blade to the ground only to fade away into the nothingness before landing. As the blade disappeared a large clawed foot reached out of the portal behind him and sliced the ground before grasping a firm grip and pulling out a large beast with fierce eyes and large fangs. It was a dragon about the size of a large horse the was composed of dark seamless purple scales with large dark eyes that seized pure terror over the captain's body. The captain couldn't move his body gave in and he fell out from behind the shack onto the docks loading port. The beast shook and flexed its body and jumped up onto the wall and launched itself at eh man. He quickly caught himself and threw up a weak guard.
The beast crippled the guard and clasped its large jaws around the man's lower body ripping and impaling his legs. The dragon ran back to its master holding the man who was screaming and pounding his fists into the dragon's eyes pitifully trying to free himself. Only to be interrupted half way through a strike by a fist that traveled into his jaw ripping him in half as he went soaring into the ocean. The beast dropped the legs and torso and climbed back into its hole. The portal closed and the man stopped laughing and began to tear up as he walked away slowly through the streets...
"I'm sorry..." He kept muttering as he walked out of town and began walking towards the next town.
4 days later out in sea of the towns coast-
"Seven it seems the storms dissipated should we approach shore?" Clare asked her captain curiously. A tall man in a black coat with long dark pants and a concealing hat looked down at her in surprise. His stare was long and cold before he finally responded. "Do you want to head to shore already? Its a nice day out I'm sure your dad can wait a bit longer? He spoke with a dark tone.
"Yes! I won't to go home so badly. Please 'cap'? Shiny doesn't need to know he never comes up anyway." She chirped loudly excitement present in her voice.
"Yeh, I could use some dry land myself 'cap'." Yawned Akatski as he stood from his hammock. It was laced from the mast to the head of the ship. he was a tall stout man with pride and a heart of a bull. He walked over to seven( Thats the name of the captain just incase sense its a number) and placed his arm around him. A smile drawn across his face and his eyes closed. He only earned himself a dark demonic stare that sent chills up his spine. "Ugh, jazz 'cap' calm down would you its just a joke." He said as he walked into the cabin of the ship. Seven's stars lessened as he stood and followed him into the ship's kitchen.
Next to the ship's kitchen there was a stairwell that lead down about 10 feet to the sleeping quarters. As Seven approached the entrance to the steps a dark portal open and he walked inside it and walked out the other side in another dimension of sorts. He now standing at the throne room of a large crystalline castle in a dark empty world. He sat on his luxurious throne and peered out the window to his left and say a large but distant forest the would occasionally shake and rumble with movement of creatures and monsters. He soon dozed off, he never slept anymore and rarely talks to anyone except Clare and his brother Shini. Although the rest of the crew has become accustomed to reading his looks and body movement for his coat and hat lide his face. When he woke it was to people talking loudly in another room of the castle. He jumped up for no one had access to this dimension except him and his brother. He stealthily creeped out of the room and peered down the hallway. "Good its clear" he thought to himself before crouching out and walking down the hall to the doorway of the room that the mysterious people were talking in. The door was open and the room was dark and grew silent as he neared.
He prepared for battle and forged a large scythe form crystal and jumped into the room. When he landed he was caught off guard by Akatski and Clare standing there in the dark. They both turned around spooked by their captain as he crushed his weapon into oblivion. "How did you two get in here" He bellowed as he marched up and checked what they were looking at. "W-we uh well we uh... asked Shini if we could visit your home 'cap'. Clare said shaken by the outraged captain. As he neared the table that they were standing in front of of Akatski kept getting in his way and preventing him from seeing the object laid across the table. As Clare turned away to think of a way out a small portal appeared above the table and two gloved hands reached out and grabbed the object pulling it in and sealing itself in one go. She tapped Akatski on the shoulder and nodded towards the table. He noticed what she was implying and moved out of the way from Seven who was becoming very pissed off at his intruding crew.
He thoroughly inspected his table before opening a portal and motioned for them to exit through it. As the Akatski followed Clare through the portal he turned and said "Its nice here if only you wouldn't keep alone in here. Its like a prison and you're its only inmate.". his words was spoken with sadness as he walked through the portal he came out next to Shini a average sized man with shoulder length black hair he was dressed up in his usual attire. He was wearing pitch black gloves on each hand and a suit without the jacket and his sleeves scrunched up. His right arm was also bandaged up s always. "So did he notice anything?" He question Akatski who gave a surprised look. "Its been a while 'cap'. Thanks for the help back there. No he hasn't noticed anything but why did you send us there to make it?" He asked.
"To spike interest in my brother. Hes not usually a people person you know." Shini responded and they all three began to laugh until interrupted by a dark presence in the doorway.
"Shini where you've been? Its been like a week dude?" Stated an interesting looking fellow in a fuzzy winter coat and black jeans. He had light white hair that resembled snow and a discolored eye. His left eye was brown while the other was a light hazel green.
"Preparing for Seven. He has forgotten again." He responded
"Or he wanted to forget." Pecked back Hitoru. The question stung Shiny and Clare causing a small flinch as if being burnt by a small fire in the chest. "Sorry. I didn't mean it like that. I'm sure he just forgot. Hes probably been busy training in his fortress of solitude or whatever he calls it." He instantly comforted the pair as Akatski picked him up by his collar and dragged him out onto the deck and threw him out a fair distance away from the boat. "Katski, Whyyyy..." He shouted while he went flying. "That should take care of him for a while" Akatski told Shini as smiled.
After about five minutes Hitoru came back aboard the ship he had used his move move fruit to levitate himself back to the ship. "That damn mino..." He was cut off there by a large reptile crawling out of a portal on the ship's deck and walked up to the door frame. Its nose was large and wide. It had opened his wide and daring mouth and waited patiently. "Oh hey Twilight. Here for dinner I see." Akatski said while tossing a large slice of meat towards the beast who quickly swallowed the food and burned happily at the crew. Who just laughed at his cuteness.
The stairs began to creek and Shini told everyone to hide. As a portal opened and out walked Seven who was covered in sweat from an exhausting training period. He took his coat off and revealed his left arm which was bandaged up more than Shini's right arm however neither were in casts or splints. He looked around then back to Twilight. He walked to him and began playing with him like a dog the created large discs of crystal and threw them out of the sea like frisbees. The small beast ran and jumped over the edge and mid fall his back erupted into wings as he flew like a speeding bullet collecting the discs in mere seconds. Shini and the rest of the crew was watching in awe at the rare sight of happiness across Sevens face. Yet only his mouth and the tip of his nose shown past his hat's brim. He stood and walked back into the kitchen after a few moments and put his coat back on and sat in the dark.
Suddenly the lights came on and the crew jumped out of their hiding places and surprised the captain. He was sitting and dumbfounded why they were hiding and surprised him. They all cheered "Happy Birth-day!" over and over and Shini opened a portal and out dropped the cake that Clare and Akatski were making in his castle. He was overwhelmed by the excitement and took off his hat and coat revealing his long dark hair and two vibrant snake like eyes that would periodically gaze upon you with happiness, however he still didn't speak the entire night. When the crew was passed out from the party Akatski was sprawled out over the table with sake in his hands and Clare was sleeping bundled up with Twilight while Hitoru was in the corner dreaming of girls as he often did talking in his sleep. They all brought a smile to Shini's face as he followed Seven back through the portal to their private dimension. They both stepped out into a clearing between the castle and the great forest and a large mossy crystalline tombstone lay staked in the ground. It read: Four-mentor, mother, and sister to all the dates were covered by moss and the crystal had worn away so to dissuade the numbers. Both Shini and Seven were silent until Seven began to quietly weep and began walking towards his castle and Shini do the same as he began to walk towards his great jungle.
AN: Whoo! Hope you enjoy I know its kinda short for the first chapter but I will post chapter quite frequently. Expect about one every week or so maybe two. I would love feedback so private message my account and ill respond. It would be great for suggestions or the help me edit these chapters.
