Haunted Toast

by Kallie- Daughter of Aphrodite

English assignment I had to write. 1st grade plot. I can write much better but I didn't know how to upload stories so I practiced with this. Anyways, this short story is about a girl named Carmin who finds a sinister discovery in a popular breakfast food.

HAUNTED TOAST

I've never done this before, so I'm doing a test run with this crappy English assignment I was damned into writing, so I hope this works.

'Thump'. Carmin's eyes sprung to life and she sat up, still in a fog. The POS television spewed colors of SNL. She was wrapped in a blanket that was striped with deep hues of orange and brown. The trailer was a filthy mess of clothes and paper, magazines and… that might be a bottle under those daisy dukes. Carmin observed these god awful surroundings, made some sort of groan-sigh combination sound, and slumped back down into the down pillow when 'Thump'.

This time Carmin's green blood-shot eyes zapped awake. Feeling her heart rate increase, she sat up and looked to the only room in her trailer that had a door. It was supposed to be a bedroom, but her and her mom just used it for storage for all their crap. That's where it's coming from. The little voice whispered to her, as if whatever was on the other side of that door was to possibly hear it.

SOOOOOOOOOO WHATDYA THINK? YEAH? WELL YOUR A BIGGER ONE! Sorry… Anyways tune in next time for the latest installment of 'HAUNTED TOAST'…..

WILL YOU EVER KNOW WHAT THE THUMP WAS? WILL CARMIN EVER CLEAN UP THE TRAILER? WILL THE STORY GET LESS CRAPPY? PROBABLY NOT! BUT TUNE IN ANYWAYS FOR

'HAUNTED TOAST'

OK So not exactly writing gold, but you should have seen some of the things people wrote about with the instructions we needed to follow! Swedish clowns dancing to polka music, fat guys puking (*shudders*)... It wasn't pretty.