Thank you for all your support Anime Lover 77777 and GundamGirlie456. And for support in real life, thank you GarraRose.
Now, since I have writer's block, I decided to write another story, and I'd like as many opinions as I can get on it to see if I should post it. If I do the storyline is copyrighted!
Ok, it's a yaoi between Jade and Luke, and Sync and Guy so here's the basic storyline:
Jade Curtiss is a very powerful vampire lord. Never before has he been denied what he wants, without punishing those who defy him. (Until he meets Luke.) When he attacks Duke Fabre's Manor to get the Duke's promised payment for his services 17 years ago, he kidnaps one of the Duke's sons, Luke. (He was promised the Duke's second son as payment, hence why Luke is confined to the manor when the story takes place.) Guy, enraged that his best friend has been kidnapped, seeks out the vampire's castle. Along the way, he stumbles upon another vampire's castle, Sync's, and he has an interest in Guy.
Guy enters the castle and Sync seals off all exits, so Guy can't escape.
Acsh hears about his twin brother's kidnapping and Guy's being captured by another notorious vampire and sets out to save them both with the help of Natalia, Tear, Dist, Van, and Legretta.