Dragon Ball Super (If Goten and Trunks has actual character development)

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Goku stood in the field. Looking down at his youngest son and youngest super Saiyan ever! He thought to himself, 'Goten must be almost as strong as Krillin... I should train him!!!'

"Hey, Goten, buddy?" Goten eyes wandered up towards his father. His expression not reading confusion as Goku spoke towards Goten yet again

"How about I train you to be as strong as me?!?" Goten's eyes widened and he smiled widely.

"YESYESYE——"

"Shhhhhhh." Spoke Goku as he suddenly smiled and grabbed onto Goten. Hurling him across the ground and forming a crater where he landed.

Goten yelped. Getting slammed as he looked up at his father "HEY THAT HURT!!!!"

Goku did his usual son grin and rubbed the back of his head with his eyes closed

Goten took this to advantage. Sending his body flying towards Goku's body with his fist

The ground shook as Goku's eyes widened at the impact and of the strength behind the massive fist by his own son 'W-What is this power...'

Suddenly Goten's body blasted into a golden power and his hair flared up in the Saiyan way

Goku's eyes widened as he was forced to power up to SSJ2 against his own son. His body shook as he screamed and sent Goten flying into the floor yet again.

Goten was showing no sign of getting up — his shirt torn from the top left to the bottom right as his body exploded in a mass of white light energy. His eyes flowed with red brightness suddenly. As his hair threatened to flare the same colour

"I'VE HAD ENOUGHHHHHHHH!!!!!!"

Goku was sent flying back by the yell. Goten charging at him as Goku powered up to SSJ3. His boy roared with pure energy as Goten began to whisper under his breath during Goku's screaming.

"Kaaaaaaaaaaa..."

Goku charged at his son with rapid pace

"Meeeeeeeeeeeee"

Goku powered all of his energy into his fist. Swinging forward towards the younger Saiyan

"HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAMEEEEEEEEEE"

Goku's fist flared with the golden energy as Goten's hair flared bright red then back to black.

Goku swung — but with incredible speed Goten spun around the side of Goku and around to his back —

Goku's world went in slow motion as he felt energy engulf into his back.

"HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!"

With that - Goten's Kamehameha wave turned into a blood red colour. Engulfing his fathers back. His eyes went back to their normal colour as his power level dropped down to 1.0

Goku was sent flinging over towards the mountains. His mind blank as SSJ3 ran out and he fell down out of the Kamehameha wave due to it not being released anymore. His body hit the ground in the near- destroyed field as Satan arrived in a limo and looked at the chaos. He decided not to get out and threw a briefcase on the floor. Before speeding off.

And that's that — hope you enjoy it!!!!

JustInRhyme signing out

KAMEHAMEHAAAAAA!