Makachan557: welcome, to my first soul eater fan fic :D

soul: why am I here again?

Makachan557: (hits soul in the head with a book) because I wanted to do that, maka, will you do the discaimer?

Maka: sure, makachan557 does not own and never will own soul eater... what are you doing?

Makachan557: sulking in the corner, enjoy the story

chapter 1

Maka's POV:

I was walking home from the library like usual, but somthing felt odd, I felt like someone was watching me, but I pushed the feeling away.

I wish i didn't...

there weren't that many people around, so no one saw what happened, the person that was following me came up from behind me, put a cloth over my mouth, I then smelled a scent, chaloform, everything went black.

Soul's POV:

Maka didnt come home and it worried me, then I told myself, Maka's able to take care of herself , I went to order some pizza, but stopped myself, I then just went straight to bed without having dinner, I fell into a restless sleep, wondering why she hasn't come home.

Maka's POV:

I woke up to find that I was magicually floting in the air, I tried to reach down to fix my hair in my signiture pigtails when I found that I had shackles on my wrists holding me up in the air, I tried to break free but the shackles were tight around my wrists, digging into my skin, I let a quite scream because the pain was too much to bear.

"so, your awake" said a strange voice "don't try to break free, it wont work, the more you try the tighter the shakles will get"

"who. are. you?" I asked with a stern look

"so, you decided to fight back, I guess it cant be helped, the strange man walked over to me and slapped me in the face, everything went blurry, I then heard a door shut, I then said something I thought I would never say "Soul, help me" I started to cry

Soul's POV:

I woke up this morning, but, I didnt hear Maka telling me that breakfest was ready, I went out into the living room to find a letter, I looked at it suspicually, walked over to it and almost fell at what I read.

Letter: dear Soul,
I have your friend and if you want her back you have to find her fast, or the other girls in your group will disappear like your friend, oh, and if you don't hurry, by the time you do see her, she might just be a dead body.
from, X

who is X and what does he want from Maka? yeah, she is pretty...

{time skip}

"so, let me get this right, this pearson named X kidnapped Maka and is turning it into a game? Then your god will be the one to save her" black*star yelled, at least he started out serious.

"black*star! sit down this is no time for jokes" tsubaki screamed, black*star stopped yelling and looked at tsubaki surprised that she could get so angry, thought, black*star wasn't the only one surprised, most people that were walking by stopped on there way out of school and stared at the usually shy girl, I was even surprised.

"I don't like this kind of game, especially with Maka's life in danger" Liz said with a sad look in her eyes "then, lets get her back" Patty said with a look a seriousness

"how? we dont even know ware to look first, we dont even know if she's still alive" kid said

"stop talking like that!" tsubaki screamed at kid then stormed off to the death room

"I have never seen tsubaki mad before, I also never seen patty so serious" black*star pointed out, after staring at tsubaki for a little bit black*star ran after her, we then followed as black*star stared to run faster and yelled "TUBASKI!" we knew that she was now gone...

tsubaki's POV:

I woke up in a room with no windows, when I looked up, I found my wrists chained to the table I was lying on, I tried to move my feet, but my ankles were also chained to the table, I then heard a scream, the first word that popped into my head was, maka...

{TIME SKIP}

a strange man walked into the room, he had on a suit with blood stains on it, the lights dimmed so I couldn't see his face, but I knew he had on one of the most sadistic smiles, he then climbed ontop of me and I knew something bad was going to happend, he then reached up to unbutton my shirt, which I never noticed but changed from my usual wear, he then whispered into my ear "let the fun begin" all I could do was lay there, I couldn't stop any of it,I started to cry and the last thing I thought was: black*star, help me

{DEATH ROOM}

black*star's POV:

DAMIT! why didn't I do anything! she just stared at me with pleading eyes as she started to disappear, all I did was watch her being taken away from me, when she needed her god the most, I wasn't there.

"shimigami-chop!" lord death yelled as he slammed his hand ontop of my head, not causing a dent but hard enought to get my attention

"what! your god is thinking!" I yelled back

"were you even listening to what I just said?" lord death asked

"no! I was too busy thinking!" I answerd while I started to pace back and forth

"so, the monkey can think" liz said sarcasticyally

crona came walking in and asked "wh-whares maka-chan?"

"should we tell him dad?" kid asked

"tell me what? what happend?!" crona asked worried

"go ahead kiddo" lord death answered

"don't call me kiddo! anyways, maka, and tsubaki have been kidnapped by a mystrious person, and were trying to find them" kid said in the most serious voice I ever herd

{TIME SKIP}

liz said she herd something of couse no one was listening so she walked out of the room I followed her, and there he was, pinning liz against the wall, with a knife on her neck, he had a sadistic smile on his face, he leaned in and whispered something in liz ear and she then had a scared look on her face, thats when I came in in.

"hey you, back away from my friend! what are you doing? LIZ!" I yelled, as the person took the knife moved it away from her kneck and stabbed her right in the stomach and vanished laughting. I ran over to liz.

"liz, this is going to hurt, ok" I noted to her

"it already hurts! just get it out!" liz screamed at me, I noticed her pained look, so as fast as I could go I ripped the knife and liz screamed in pain,she then fell forwords and I cought her before she hit the ground, thats when kid came out and saw liz, he looked at me with a question on mind, but I just shrugged, he kneed next to me, I looked up at kid and saw that a tear fell down his face, thats when it dawned on me, "kid, I need to talk to you guys, I think I know how to find maka and tubaski." kid looked at me and nodded. when we walked in patty had a very scared look on her face, she then rushed over to liz .

"I think I know what this person is trying to do, he's going after the people we care about the most, or love, and ripping them away from us, he's trying to cause pain to both of us, the girls, and us...

NARATOR: MENWILE AT SOMEPLACE WARE MAKA AND TsUBAKI ARE, MR.X APPEARS

maka's POV:

I have bruses and cuts all over my body, the shackls are cutting into my skin from many faild attempts to escape while he was beating me up with a whip, its been a week and the,person is surprised that I survived this long, he told me that he had another girl here, the first name I thought of was liz, but then relized, that with liz it would be hard to keep her quite, then the name tsubaki popped into my head, he asked me to guess, and this was my answer "tsubaki" he smiled the creepy smile of his "yes, wow you know your friends so well, in my opinion, her skin is so soft..." "if you hurt tsubaki! I swear i'll kill you!" I screamed relizing that tsubaki was also getting hurt.

"dont worry, by the time I'm done with you to, you wont let anyone near you" he laughted as he started to walk to the mystry door "wait! please leave tsubaki alone! i'll take part of whatever pain your giving her! just dont hurt my best friend! I cried out "your a very dumb girl, but fine" he answered as he pulled back out the whip but for the fist time he took off my shirt and underneath was a shirt that just coverd the chest area, he then hit me with the whip and it hurt a lot more then it did with my shirt on, I screamed so loud that it actually hurt his ears...

tsubaki's POV:

I waited for him to come in, my bare skin ( exept the shirt that coverd my chest and the very small shorts that protected me only a little bit more) it felt so cold, a few minutes passed and he didn't come, I thought maybe he got cought, but then I heard his laugh, then maka screaming something I couldnt understand, his laughter stoped, then I heard his foot steps dissapear, but then I heard maka scream so loud that I could hear all the pain and sadness she was feeling, then it downed on me, maka protected me by taking my punishment, and forcing it onto herself.

"black*star, soul, kid, liz, patti, we need you right now, maka needs you, I...I need you" I started to cry, knowing black*star, he would probably tell me to stop crying and be strong, but I cant anymore, I just cant anymore "maka! why, maka, why!" I screamed, why maka, why take my punishment? why?...

NARATOR: BACK WITH THE OTHERS, THEY GET TO SEE WHATS GOING ON WITH THE GIRLS WHEN MR.X SENDS THEM A RECORDING...

kid's POV:

it was in the middle of class when we were called to deaths room, when we walked into my dads room, I looked at his expression and new automatically that something was wrong.

"father? whats wrong" I asked "have you seen liz, I didn't see her come home last night"

"just watch, and you will see..." father answered he moved away from the mirror and we all cringed when we saw what was on the other side, we saw maka, chaind up, blood all over her face...

makachan557: i'm going to be evil, and leave it off there, leave a review for me to continue the story

soul, kid,black*star: dont worry guys, well save you for sure

maka, tubaski, Liz: please hurry.