Hello, I'm brand new as a author of fan fictions but I've been reading for so long. My name is Austin and you can either refer to me as that, or just call me by my handle, "Dragii". I'm not too great at writing, but I wish to improve. I make many small mistakes all the time, and even some large ones sometimes. I'm doing this to gain constructive criticism on my work so later on in life I can actually be good. My dream's to become a part time author.. I know it seems like it's impossible for me but I just love the idea of being an author. So I ask of you, to anyone who reads my work please leave behind a review. Even if it's just "this fanfic suk git gud m8" I'll take it. Thank you all to whoever had the patience to read this intro. Now.. Onto the story!
I do not claim anything I write about. All rights go to the creator of what I write about.
~Crimson Sky~
Red.. Everything is so.. red. I open my eyes to see a field of red.
"NAT.."
I hear something off in the distance.. that voice.. It's so familiar.. Who's is it..
"Natsu! Get up Natsu!"
This time the voice is clearly a girls voice.. the voice of someone who I truly care about. Why can't I remember her name! I try to respond to the voice but my body.. it just won't respond. Who's voice is that?!
"Lucy! No, Don't get near him!"
Lucy..? Is that her name.. Wait a minute.. Was that Gray just now?!
"Gray, hold her back!"
Erza! What's going on? I try to move, I try to open my mouth and ask what's happening but it's like the button that turns me off and on is off.
"Lucy he's to far gone! Stay away from him, that's no longer Natsu!"
Wait.. what do you mean Gray?! I'm still here, why keep Lucy from me you bastard! I try to move more but the strain is to much. It's like my body is made out of lead.
"No! I know he's still in there!"
Just hearing Lucy say that calmed me down a bit.. I'm glad she still believes in me. I now was able to see things around me other than just the red hue that was constantly blocking my vision.. but to my dismay the first thing I saw was more red.. dark.. red. All around me was blood. I was covered in it. I tried to move away but I still couldn't control my body. All I could do was sit and stare down at the blood I was covered in.
"Lucy.. He's gone.. Please just stay away from him, I don't want you to turn out like them.. as well."
Erza.. What do you mean.. I would never hurt Lucy.. And turn out like who? I've never hurt anyone unless it was for my family.. for you guys! What's going on here!
"Lucy, look away! I know you don't want to see this.."
The sound of footsteps and Gray's voice approach me.. What's going to happen.. Is ice queen going to try and help me..?
"Natsu.. If you even are still there.. For all that's it worth, you were like a brother to me. Please.. Understand why I have to do this."
For the first time in my life.. I heard the one person I thought who was nothing but a douche bag cry over me.. I don't understand what he's talking about but .. I wanted to tell him I was okay, that there was no reason for him to be sad over me. As he neared me I could clearly see his face, and that's when I was shocked.. His left eye was gone. Three long claw marks down the left side of his face, and his entire left side of his body.. Scorched. He looked like he was in pain.. His right eye had tears running down his face, but it also showed the fear he had just by looking at me. It couldn't be.. No.. I did not do that to him! .. Did I?..
"Good bye.. my old friend.. I wish it did not have to end like this.."
The next thing I see is him forming a sword out of ice and closing the gap between us. I tried to yell, I needed for him to know that I'm still here, but my voice just wouldn't project. He was on top of me raising the sword, about to strike when... I lose conciseness.
~End Chap. 1~
Alright guys! How was it? This is just the first chapter.. I know it's short but.. I'm kinda ify about this. If it's not good I shouldn't continue a crappy project. Also should I use this format for dialogue or should I go with the normal? Like could you understand the plot and how it was each character speaking? Again please leave a review, I need help to become better! And if you could, if you liked, spread this around to people. I want this to have as much popularity as it can get. Thank you guys for reading! I'll have chapter two out once I have some feedback. And trust me it'll be ten times longer. Again the first chapter is only short because I don't know if this project will fall through or not. The more feedback I get, the better I get and the better content you guys get!
