Snow Reads 'The kit of Fallen Leaves and Hollyleaf'

by Snowcrystal of Thunderclan

Hello! Silverflash of ThunderClan asked me to do a commentary on her story so here we are! Updates will be whenever Silverflash gets me her chapters and I have time! Ratings and Gene reasoning are because that's what she has for hers. Check her out! {Discontinued}

1. Prolouge

Hey guys! Silverflash of Thunderclan (A fellow Thunderclaner! XP ) asked me to do a commentary of her story 'The Kit of Fallen Leaves and Hollyleaf' and I decided to do it. ^.^ The words underlined are from me. :D Now let's get to it!

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I know there are a lot of Hollyleaf and her second chance stories, (And I love them soooo much! :) ) so this one focuses on her kit with Fallen Leaves in Starclan. Please review some names and fur colors, and eye colors. (I'm to late for this. *cries*) I will choose the gender. So please review, as I can't continue. The winner will be specially regconized, and their reviews will have a whole lot of power in the story. Waiting for your reviews! (I reviewed! I promise!) And Guess That Warrior (I love these. :3 )

Guess That Warrior

I was lost, then found

by the Cloud

I was attacked,

and saved by the Cloud

I had his kit, the Wing White

Who had the Dove and Ivy

Who am I?

(It's Brightheart!)