Yeah I pulled down the old story. There was so much wrong with it and it was WAY too fast paced so here is the rebooted Stronger than Bones. I will do my best to fix things up and post. Keep a few things in mind like the original.
Wrex survived the Virmire Mission
Ashley was saved
Everybody survived the suicide mission, however Mordin, Legion, and Thane passed in ME3
Zaeed, Kasumi, and Javik will NOT make appearances. Why you might ask? Because I have no clue what they are like, I might change my mind if i watch videos about them and what not and spend many hours learning about them.
No more Garrus x OC, he's old when Becca is 18 so, no.
Alright, here's the prologue just like before, a few small changes, I might update if I find mistakes, however I have gotten better with my writing so it might be ok for now.
Feel free to correct any mistakes I overlook. Enjoy!
A woman walked into her apartment, her face beaming. "Harry? Harry!" she called out to her husband. They had been married for three months now. A man appeared from the back room.
"Linda? Everything alright?" he asked and she wrapped her arms around him.
"I'm pregnant," she said and Harry's face beamed with his wife's. He pulled back and knelt down, pressing his lips to his wife's stomach.
"We'll have the perfect little one," Harry said.
~oOo~
Linda laid on the couch with her hand at her ear. "I see...thank you...goodbye." Linda hung up and tears started to slide down her face. Harry walked in.
"Linda I just about finished up the nursery, come ch- honey? What's wrong? What's the matter?" Harry sat down next to Linda and wrapped an arm around her.
"Good and bad things...We're having a girl but...she has type 4 Vrolik Syndrome," Linda said.
"Brittle Bone disease? Oh Linda," Harry hugged her tightly, minding her slightly enlarged stomach.
"They already saw broken bones in the scans, there hasn't been a case since..."
"Since the Normandy's helmsmen was born, maybe we should get her onto the Normandy or see if we can get in contact with Shepard about her."
"We'll have to try and see if it'll work out."
~oOo~
Linda and Harry stood in the Citadel in the hospitable area. It was quiet today, they were there for a check on the baby and to see if Shepard had docked on the Citadel yet.
"Any news?" Linda asked. Harry had his fingers to his earpiece listening for news. He shook his head.
"The Commander hasn't docked yet honey," Harry responded then listened carefully to his earpiece. "I stand corrected, he just docked."
"Then we need to go meet him," Linda said and they headed for the docking bay the Normandy always docked at. They managed to catch him before he passed them.
"Commander, my wife and I were wanting to speak with you..."
~oOo~
The cries of a baby filled the room, cries for her mother. Harry held his daughter, standing and bouncing his arms and swaying on his feet. Linda had complications during the baby's birth, she didn't survive sadly.
"Harry?" Shepard stood at the door of the room, Joker next to him.
"This better be good Commander," Joker warned and he gimped over to Harry, seeing the baby girl.
"They said she has a case about as bad as yours Joker, its worth it," Shepard assured him.
"She's cute, I'll give her that," Joker said, he reached out to take the baby and he sat down on the couch in the room.
~oOo~
Shepard shoved flaming bits of the ceiling out of the way, towards the sound of a crying baby. He saw Rebecca safe under a table.
"Joker I got her, her father wasn't so lucky," Shepard said and saw the remains of Harry laying nearby, his clothes burning.
"Shit...What are we going to do about her, Shepard?" Joker asked over the com. Shepard picked Rebecca up and she quieted down.
"I don't know, right now we have to save anybody we can from the colony, hang tight, I'll be back soon." Shepard stood with Rebecca cradled in one arm and his pistol in his other hand and he made a run for it back to the shuttle.
~oOo~
"We did all we could Joker, at least Rebecca is safe now," Shepard said. Joker was holding Rebecca in his arms while he sat in the flight chair.
"She needs medical care for her bones, its all focused in her legs, kinda ironic if you ask me. I bet she and I will be great friends when she gets older. I can teach her all the tricks about dealing with creaky legs," Joker chuckled a little and smiled down at Rebecca.
"You seem to have a bit of fondness for her Joker. Going soft are ya?" Shepard teased.
"Hey! When you can't walk without worrying about breaking a bone then we'll talk. All that matters is that Becca is safe and we do something about it. The only threats right now are raiders and slavers. Shouldn't be too hard to take care of her right?"
"That depends Joker, you have the Normandy to take care of as well as Becca."
"Hey I got this, and Dr. Chakwas can help me out. She went through med school, she knows a thing or two about babies and kids. Can we make a stop at the Citadel before going anywhere else Commander? I need to talk to Chakwas about what to get for Becca."
Soon as I finish chapter 1 I'll post it. Please review!
