This is my first story so I tried my hardest and I hope you like it.
Hi I'm Re'em my mom bought me this "diary" I call it a journal. I usually write in this just when I am bored but then I think when I grow up my children will ask me to tell them stories like I once asked my dad. I write in this so I will have something to tell them. Something amazing happened at school today, but first I think I should tell you a little about myself. I am 16 years old, I was born in Natanya, Israel then I moved to America. I live with my brother and sister and my mom in Valdez, Alaska. My dad died when I was 12 by a murderer. From then I swore when I'm old enough I will find that murderer and kill him. I am a skinny boy even though I eat 24/7,and I have black hair. I love to play sports. I am on the football team, baseball team and the lacrosse team.
Back to the most amazing thing ever, today at school I met the most amazing girl I ever saw she had beautiful long blond hair, she had the most astonishing eyes. She is in three of my classes. Her eyes are so amazing it even changes colors like from this golden color to this dark blue type of color. Her name is Emily, Emily Cassel. One day I'm talking to my friends Mike and Ian. Mike is not one of those athletic people but still very popular. Ian is an athlete but very nerdy. They are my friends. So that day I told my friends about her and I showed them who she was. They told me to go ask her on a date, but I refused. The bell rang and I quickly went to my fifth period math class where I will see Emily. At math Mrs. Locke decided that it was time to switch seats. I prayed that I would be able to sit next to Emily. Believe it or not I actually am sitting next to her. When Emily came to sit next to me she looked away and started clasping her pencil.
The next day she did it again. In seventh period science I finally got the nerve to ask her on a date. The whole period I wasn't even paying attention to Mr. Liebow, I was thinking how I could ask her. After school Mike asked me if I wanted to go hang out at his house and study for the science test that is on Friday. "um……..no" I think tomorrow would be better" I said barely paying attention to him. Then I realized that when I was thinking how to ask Emily out, Mr. Liebow is giving a test on Friday. Then it hit me I could ask Emily to come and study with me for the science test. I suddenly saw her talking with her friends I started walking her way my hands started sweating. I was so nervous by the time I thought I was half way there I was already there she asked me what do you want in a voice so sweet, so soft but so powerful. Then I spit it out, "Doyouwanttocomehangoutatmyhouseandstudyforthesciencetetest?" I said it so fast she didn't understand me. Confused she asked my "what?" and i ran away. I thought to myself "you dumb ass! why didn't you ask her?" The next day in math she actually looked at me. I wrote a note to her asking her to, come hang out at my place and study. I waited almost the whole freaking period then she finally passed back and it said yes with a little heart next to it.
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