I took the liberty of writing this story a long time ago. And since I have no idea how to continue as of now, I will show it to you, for hope that you will inspire me with your crazy reviews. I have wrote down a few chapters for this story, so I will start with the first one, and see how everyone likes it.
Kagura's POV
Five year old Samantha Letch was in her best party dress. Light pink with white flowers at the hem. Her hair was golden yellow. Samantha was half American, half Japanese. She was attending her friend, Chihiro's, birthday party. In her hand was a small, box shaped present. Wrapped in sky blue paper, it held a pink Power Ranger. (A/N: Remind you of someone?" Her mother, Kagura, was dressed in normal clothes. Kagura rang the doorbell. A few seconds later, Chihiro's mother, Kami, opened the door. Kagura ushered Samantha inside.
The little girl rushed off to play with her friends. Making sure to keep an eye on her, Kagura sat down with the other parents.
Samantha was a know coward. She was scared of everything. The party went on and soon, it was cake time. The children gathered round. Chihiro's older sister was cutting the cake. Samantha was right behind the birthday girl, when inline to get cake and ice-cream. As Chihiro moved away so Samantha could get some, Samantha smiled up at Saki. Saki handed her a plate of cake and pointed where to go to get ice-cream. Kagura smiled. Her daughter was happy. She turned away to help a child, but spun around at the screaming. Just in time to see the plate of cake hit the ground, and her daughter disappear into thin air.
"Samantha!"
Wow. Looking at it and typing it, I changed a few things. But it was only to add compound sentences, and to take out a lot of unnecessary commas. I can't understand why, I can't write descriptive chapters now, but this one only had one speaking part. It's incomprehensible! Well, off to write the next chapter. Happy reading.