READ THIS BEFORE YOU READ THE REST OF THE STORY:
Okay so some people have called this a Mary-sue type deal… I personally do not feel this way but to each their own. The Prologue is an Optional Read, I don't even like it I was suggested to include it because my friends kept bitching about back story. It's not a bad story… I personally feel that it get better as it goes on… I don't even like the Prologue So yes… You have been warned.
Addition because I am sick of everyone posting the same thing in reviews…
Okay popular opinion is that my character is a "Mary Sue" but have you ever read ANY real books or seen any movies? Most fantasy Sci-fi Characters start off that way... until they are humbled... Have you ever watched Star wars or Lord of the rings? Aragorn from Lord of the rings seems indestructible... and don't get me started on Anakin Skywalker...and it's first person... So my point is... we are all indestructible in our own eyes until of course someone else shows us different... so read or don't read...hehe all my characters start out as god in my original fiction too...and as for it being a stupid name... Seraphim is a kind of angel, and Cloud isn't exactly Nom de Sophisticate...I don't care whether you like it or not... I want to be critiqued I do not want a bunch of people dwelling on a single point. That Seraphim's "Mary sue"… oh joy this has been covered by 3 people already time to move on folks and if you can't get past that then don't write the review because I've heard it before and it's not going to change the way I write. There my point has been made