Welcome to Total Drama Island: Makeover!
Basically, I will be rewriting the whole total drama series from start to finish.
However, it will be my way. I choose new plots, elimination orders, winners etc.
I have lots of plans for this series. It will be filled with blindsides, surprises, and of course, as the name suggests, drama.
I plan to update this every week. Every SATURDAY, to be exact. Keep in mind, I'm busy sometimes and I may miss a day and update a day late or something, but I'll try to avoid that by writing a few chapters ahead of time so if I skip writing for a week, I still have a chapter to post.
Anyways, as you can see, I put a lot of work into planning and writing. I hope you enjoy!
I know some parts of the Episode may be the same, but I tried to change most of the dialogue to keep it new and original.
ENJOY!
It was a beautiful day with gorgeous weather outside. A sign that read "Camp Wawanakwa" was protruding off a dock with sparkling blue waters and tall trees in the background. Suddenly, a man popped up into the camera's view. He wore a blue shirt with brown cargo pants. He had stubble on his face and black hair. "Yo, it's Chris McLean, out here on location at Camp Wawanakwa! At this summer camp, 22 campers will compete for a chance to win one million dollars! The campers will be placed onto two teams, and they will compete in challenges to win safety. Every three days, the losing team will be sent to the dreaded bonfire ceremony where they MUST vote off one of their own. The safe players wil receive marshmallows, but the voted out loser will walk away empty handed, get on the loser boat, and leave Total Drama Island, for good! So who will come out on top? Who will be voted off first? This is the only place to find out, right here on Total. Drama. Island!" He shouted excitedly.
*THEME SONG*
Chris stood on the dock. "Before we can get to our first challenge, we must meet our contestants first." Chris smiled. "So please give a warm welcome to our first Camper, DJ!"
A tall and strong black teenager stood at the end of the dock. He wore a white cap, green shirt, shorts, and sandals. He looked around confused.
The camera zoomed in on Chris. "Yeah we told everyone that we were staying at a fancy resort. Instead, they are staying at this crappy summer camp."
"So, uh, this is Camp Wawanakwa?" DJ asked, confused.
"Yeah! You feel honored to be here man?" Chris asked.
"I mean I guess. I'm glad I got picked but I expected this place too look a little nicer, you know what I mean?" DJ responded.
"I do know what you mean, but I don't care." Chris snickered, and rushed DJ along. "Anyways, next camper is: Courtney!"
A girl with tanned skin and short brown hair waved to Chris and DJ. She wore a white shirt with a gray sweater over it, and green cargo pants.
Chris assisted her in stepping off the boat.
"So, is this the place...?" Courtney questioned.
Chris shook his head yes. "Is this what you were expecting?"
"Not at all," She answered honestly. "I was hoping for something a little nicer."
"Well, if it's too much for you, then we can just send you packing right now," Chris threatened.
Courtney crossed her arms. "Oh, that won't be happening. I intend to stay, and win."
"We'll see about that." Chris challenged. "Alright, next up is Owen!"
A very large and round white male wrapped his arms around Chris, choking him. He had blond hair, green shorts, and a white tee shirt with a teal Canadian maple leaf on it.
"C-could yo-ou let..go...!" Chris choked out.
Owen laughed and released him. "Sorry for overwhelming you, dude. I'm just a little starstruck right now."
"Suck up," Courtney rolled her eyes as Owen walked over and high-fived DJ.
Chris brushed himself off as the next camper arrived. "Everyone, say Hello to Harold..." Chris said in a bored tone.
A red headed skinny nerd walked up next, wearing a blue graphic t-shirt, green pants and blocky shoes, and glasses to finish off the nerd look.
"Is this the place we have to stay at? This crappy summer camp." Harold deadpanned.
"Well, the place you stay. I live in luxury somewhere else." Chris responded.
"Cool!" Harold said excitedly. "I've been to so many training camps to hone my wicked skills."
"There's a difference between summer camp and whatever nerd camp you attended." Courtney snapped.
"Math camp was fillled with some rad people!" Harold yelled obliviously.
"Contestants number five and six, Katie and Sadie!" Chris announced.
Two girls, one white and overweight, the other skinny and tan, jumped off the boat with their pink luggage in tow. They wore matching black and white striped topped and pink booty shorts. Their dark hair was styled in the same way.
"Sadie, we are gonna be on TV!" Katie, the skinnier girl, shouted happily.
"I know, I'm gonna be famous after this!" Sadie, the wider girl squealed.
Both of them blew past Chris and introduced themselves to the other campers.
"Contestant 7, Gwen!" Chris welcomed a pasty white girl with a noticeable frown on her face. She wore a black corset and she had bluish green hair with black in it, which matched her sleeves and skirt. "You're telling me that this is where we have to stay for this show?" The goth remarked, outraged.
Chris grinned. "Not liking the accommodations?" He asked sarcastically.
"You should have been honest about the 'resort' we were saying in when we signed up for this." Gwen said angrily.
"And YOU should have read your contract." Chris shot back.
Gwen muttered something under her breath and turned away from the host.
A boy with a cowboy hat covering his blond hair did a flip off the boat. He wore an open pink shirt that showed most of his body, and he wore board shorts as well. He had a large grin on his face.
"Dude, Nice to meet ya man." The boy said as he walked up to Chris. The two shared a fist bump.
"Geoff, welcome to the Island." Chris greeted.
"Thanks man," Geoff replied and took his luggage to the end of the dock with the other campers. "Who's ready to party?" Geoff shouted enthusiastically.
DJ and Owen gave Geoff a high five, while Katie and Sadie smiled at him. Courtney looked annoyed, as did Gwen. Harold was too busy picking his nose to pay attention.
"Contestant #9, Trent!" Chris welcomed.
A white boy with long black hair stepped off the boat. He had on a green t-shirt with a black handprint on it, dark pants with a belt and green shoes. He also had a guitar case with him.
"Hey Chris, it's a pleasure to be here." Trent said politely.
Harold look towards Trent. "You play Guitar?"
"Uh, yeah," Trent said.
"I learned to play the Guitar at Music Steves Music Camp. It was wicked," Harold bragged.
Loud pop music played as a black girl waved to everyone on the next boat. She had on jeans and a pale shirt with orange circle designs on it. She wore her dark hair in a ponytail.
"What's up Y'all, Leshawna in the house!" The girl shouted. "What's up baby, how you doin'?" Leshawna said as she greeted Chris. She soon walked up to the other contestants, dragging her luggage behind her.
"I've never seen a girl like you in real life before," Harold remarked as Leshawna stood by him.
Leshawna turned toward him. "Excuse me?"
"Oh yeah. You're real big. And loud." Harold said.
"What did you just say to me?" Leshawna replied angrily. As she took a step toward Harold, DJ went up to Leshawna and grabbed her arms, restraining her from attacking Harold for his comment.
"Your lucky he stopped you. You'd stand no chance against my karate skills." Harold warned.
"Well come on then!" Leshawna beckoned.
"Settle down everyone." Chris reprimanded as a Blonde girl with jean shorts and a blue sweatshirt arrived next. "Our surfer chick, Bridgette, is here."
She carried a large surfboard and her bag over to the other participants after saying hello to Chris.
"Surfing?" Katie started to say.
"Surfing is so cool!" Sadie gushed, finishing Katie's sentence."
"Thanks." Bridgette replied.
Geoff walked up behind her. "Yeah, that's a pretty sweet board."
Bridgette turned around. "Do you surf?" She asked.
"No, but maybe you can teach me," Geoff said with a wink.
A small boy with brown hair and a striped polo shirt and navy blue pants arrived.
"What's hangin' Cody?" Chris said, pointing both fingers at him.
"Happy to be here man!" Cody smiled. He then began to walk towards the other campers. He stood near the girls. "What's up ladies?" He said loudly so all the girls could hear.
None of the girls responded, but the next contestant did. "I think I see a bird," the new boy said.
Everyone laughed at his oblivious answer to the question he wasn't even asked.
The boy had brown hair covered by a blue cap. He wore pants similar to Cody's, and a green sweatshirt.
"Alright, listen up Ezekiel," Chris said, grabbing him by the shoulders. "I know this place is very different from farm life. But try to keep your mouth shut and don't get kicked off early.
"Yes sir!" Ezekiel answered.
"Alright now that's over, lets bring in our next contestant." Chris said.
A blonde girl with a blue bandanna, brown boots, a brown skirt, and a red top with bright blue eyes walked onto the dock.
All of the male contestants stared at her in awe.
"Not too shabby," Chris whispered to the camera with a grin.
"Hi!" Lindsay said happily. She looked around. "Wait, we are staying at a summer camp?"
"Yeah." Chris said.
"Summer camps have showers, right?" Lindsay asked.
"Of course they do!" Chris said with a grin as the camera cut over to a shot of the bathrooms, which were covered with dirt and grime.
"Cool," Lindsay replied as she walked toward the other side of the dock.
A girl with bright orange hair and a leaf colored two piece bathing suit rode in on the next boat. "Hi Guys! Hi Everyone! I'm so happy to-" The girl spoke quickly, shouting off the boat. Her sentence was interrupted as she jumped off the boat and missed the dock, slamming her head into the dock and falling into the water.
Courtney ran over to the area of water that the girl fell in. She reached her hand into the lake and pulled the girl out. "I know this is a competition, but she could of been seriously hurt!" Courtney reprimanded Chris for doing nothing after the girl fell in.
"Don't worry I'm fine!" The redhead assured as she shook her head back and forth, trying to dry her hair off. "But I'm hungry! Can we have lunch?"
"Yeah, that's a good question!" Owen agreed.
"No! We still have plenty of campers to meet!" Chris answered.
Izzy ignored him and ran up to Gwen and Trent, wildly shaking their hands. "I'm Izzy, nice to meet you guys!"
"What is she, some kind of freak?" Gwen asked Trent. He just shrugged.
A girl with long legs, pale skin, and long black hair stepped off the boat. She wore green booty shorts and a red halter top, along with high heel wedges. The intimidated looks on Cody, Owen, DJ, and Lindsay's faces reflected off of her sunglasses.
"Heather." Chris acknowledged as she walked past him, completely ignoring his presence despite his 'celebrity' status.
She looked unimpressed with both the other campers and the camp. "You cannot make me stay here." Heather said as she crossed her arms.
"Remember, this competition is for a million bucks." Chris reminded.
Heather glared at him but didn't say anything as the next camper stepped off. It was a short, pudgy girl with large glasses and braces. Her brown hair was put into a side ponytail, and she wore pink pants, a green shirt, and a vest with badges on it.
"Welcome Beth!" Chris said. The girl dropped her bag and ran up to Chris.
"I can't believe that I'm meeting Chris McLean!" Beth said happily, accidentally spitting on Chris when she said his name. She spoke with a lisp to due her braces.
Beth walked up to the other contestants. "Looks like I'm your new friend!" She said as she stood in front of Heather, accidentally spitting on her.
Heather looked disgusted, and walked to the other end of the dock to avoid her.
Rock music blared out of the speakers on the deck of the boat. All of the campers looked to see a boy with white skin. He looked dangerous due to his green mowhawk, skull shirt, and multiple piercings.
As he looked at the grimy cabins, he cracked his knuckles. "I don't like surprises."
"Yeah I know that, Duncan. Your parole officer warned me of that." Chris retorted. Duncan smirked. "He also told me that if you act up, he'll come here and drag you right back to Juvy."
Duncan dismissed the threat and walked past Heather. "Meet you by the campfire gorgeous." He said with a wink.
She simply rolled her eyes. "Drop dead," she added, as he walked away.
The next boat was still pulling in. However, nobody was on the deck. Instead, a boy was attached to the boat and water skiing behind it. Unfortunately for him, he hit a rock that she him fly through the air.
He landed in the pile of luggage, sending one of the suitcases splashing into the water, which shot out of the lake and covered Heather with water.
"My shoes!" Heather yelled in anger. Her clothes were soaked.
"Epic wipeout Tyler!" Chris yelled to him, who was still in the pile of luggage.
"He stood up, revealing himself to the other campers. He wore a red tracksuit and a red and white headband. He had white skin and brown hair and eyes.
He walked up and greeted Lindsay, and they both smiled at eachother. A few feet away, Heather glared at them, fuming at Tyler for ruiningher clothes.
A lanky boy with tan skin stepped off the boat next. He had long brown hair, and a white long sleeve shirt on, which was covered by a blue and red sweater vest. He also had on khaki shorts.
"Noah, welcome to Camp Wawanakwa." Chris said.
"Did you get my memo about my life threatening allergies?" asked Noah.
"I'm sure someone did." Chris said.
Noah walked up to Duncan. "Nice piercings original, do them yourself?" Noah questioned the punk.
Duncan pulled out a needle and grabbed Noah's lip. "Yeah, you want one?"
"I'll pass. Now can I have my lip back please?" Noah said sarcastically, not feeling threatened by the stronger punk.
Duncan released him, and Noah walked away.
A girl wearing a blue tank top with matching shorts arrived next. She wore her black hair in a ponytail and had a blank expression on her face.
However, the most notable thing about her was her giant muscles. She looked as if she could crush anyone.
"Eva. Nice." Chris said with an uncertain look on his face, slightly scared of her.
She was wordless as she stood near the other campers. She dropped her bag onto the dock, where it crashed onto Cody's foot on accident. Cody grabbed his foot in pain.
"What's in there, dumbbells?" Cody joked, trying to pretend as if his foot didn't hurt.
"Yes." Eva responded.
"Alright. Please welcome our final camper, Justin!"
All of the girls (and Owen) looked dreamily at the final camper. He had tan skin and messy black hair, with a green shirt and tattered jeans.
"What's up Chris?" He greeted.
"Not much man!" Chris replied. "I hope your okay with the fact that we picked you solely because of your looks."
"I can live with that." Justin responded.
Owen ran up to Justin. "Where did you get those jeans? They look cool!"
"I don't know. They're pretty old." Justin answered back.
"So hot..." Owen said absentmindedly to the model. Justin gave him a puzzled look. "I meant so hot. As in, it's so hot outside!" Justin walked away after Owen gave his pathetic excuse.
"Dangit." Owen muttered under his breath.
"Okay campers, everyone gather here." Chris announced. "I need to take a group photo for the promotional advertisements. Everyone pose on this side of the dock!" Chris instructed.
The campers took their sweet time getting into their poses. Chris grew annoyed, but they eventually finished getting ready. Chris stood aback on got ready to take the picture, camera ready. "Alright, everyone say Wawanakwa!"
"Wawanakwa!" The campers repeated.
Chris attempted to take the photo, but something was wrong. "Oops, the card is full. One sec,"
The campers waited. Once Chris was ready, he attempted to take the picture again. "Wait, lens cap is closed."
"Come on man, my face is starting to freeze!" Leshawna said through gritted teeth.
"Okay, for real this time." Chris promised. He did indeed get a good picture. Unfortunately for the campers, the dock fell into the water, failing to support the 22 individuals' weights. The camera showed a few photos of the campers struggling to get out of the water.
"Alright, everyone dry off and meet me at the campfire pit in ten!" Chris said.
The campers all sat on the logs at the campfire pit. "This is Camp Wawanakwa. Your home for the next eight weeks. The campers sitting around you will be your cabin mates, your Competiton, and maybe even your friends." Chris stated as the campers all looked at one another, sizing up their competion. "The camper who manages to stay on Total Drama Island the longest without getting voted off will win one million dollars!"
"Hey, what will the sleeping arrangements be? 'Cuz I'd rather be sleeping in a room of guys instead of girls." Said Owen. Noah gave him an unsure glance. "Wait, I didn't mean it like that! I love chicks!" Owen claimed.
Heather, who was sitting nearby, rolled her eyes at them. "They aren't co-ed, right?"
"Girls get one side, dudes get the other." Chris explained.
Lindsay raised her hand. "Excuse me, Kyle, can I have the cabin with the lake view since I'm the prettiest?"
"Okay, you are, but that's not how it works around here. And my name is Chris." The host corrected.
"I have to live with Sadie, or I'll die!" Katie shouted.
"And I'll break out in hives!" Sadie claimed.
Chris ignored them. "Alright, it's time to divide you guys into teams. Our first team will be Gwen, Trent, Heather, Cody, Lindsay, Beth, Katie, Owen, Leshawna, Justin, and Noah. From this moment on, you are now known as the Screaming Gophers!"
"Yeah! I'm a gopher!" Owen shouted excitedly.
"Wait!" Katie piped up. "What about Sadie?"
"The rest of you over here," Chris said, ignoring Katie. "Geoff, Bridgette, DJ, Tyler, Sadie, Izzy, Courtney, Ezekiel, Duncan, Eva, and Harold. You guys will officially be know as the Killer Bass."
"That's awesome," Harold commented.
"What about Katie! Katie is a Gopher! I have to be a Gopher!" Sadie protested.
"Sadie, is it? Come on, It'll be okay." Courtney comforted her and lead her over to the team.
"This is so unfair!" Sadie cried. "I miss you Katie!"
"I miss you too!" Katie shouted back.
"Alright campers, you and your team will be on camera in all public areas during this competition."
The scene suddenly cut to him in a grimy bathroom. "You will also be able to share your innermost thoughts on tape with video diaries anytime you want. Let the audience at home know what you are really thinking. Or just get something off your chest."
*CONFESSIONAL*
Lindsay: "I don't get it. Where's the camera guy?" (She didnt realize that she was looking in the opposite direction of the camera)
Leshawna: "Man, it smells in here. When was the last time this place got cleaned?"
Trent: "Everyone here seems pretty cool. Hopefully I'll make some good memories here."
*END CONFESSIONAL*
"Alright, any questions?" Chris asked. "Cool, lets find your cabins." He said after nobody raised their hand. "Gophers, your in the east cabin. Bass, your in the west."
The Gopher boys opened the door to their cabin. "Bunk beds." Trent started. "That's cool."
The boys quickly claimed their beds. Owen and Justin claimed bottom bunks. Trent went to the bunk above Justin, while Cody claimed the bunk above Owen. Noah took a bottom bunk.
On the girls side of the cabin, some campers struggled to settle in.
"Do I really have to share a bunk with one you?" Heather complained.
Gwen pushed her aside and claimed a bunk above Leshawna.
"Hey, watch where you are going, weird Goth Girl." Heather snapped.
Meanwhile, Katie was on the top of another bunk, with Lindsay below her. Beth claimed the last bottom bunk. Heather saw that the only remaining bunk was the one with Beth.
"Looks like we are sharing a bunk!" Beth said, spitting more saliva onto Heather.
"Great," Heather said sarcastically.
Outside of the Bass Cabin, Geoff turned towards Chris. "So, are there any chaperones here?"
"You're all sixteen. As old as a councilor in training at a regular summer camp. So you guys can take care of yourselves."
"I know all about camp life. I was a CIT!" Courtney bragged as she walked into the girls side of the cabin. Suddenly, a loud whaling was heard from the room. She walked into see Bridgette comforting Sadie.
"I just wanted to be on the same team as Katie!" She complained. Courtney noticed Izzy claim a top bunk. After calming Sadie down, Bridgette took a bottom bed, and Courtney took the place above her. Sadie went to the bed below Izzy, leaving Eva with a bunk to herself.
On the boys side, Geoff and DJ took top beds. Duncan crashed onto the bed below Geoff, while Tyler went beneath DJ's bunk. Tyler took the final top bed, leaving Harold with the bunk below him.
Outside, over the loudspeaker, Chris announced for everyone to meet in the dining hall.
The camper cut to the dining hall. The campers all stood in line while holding trays. A large, intimidating dark skinned man with a chef's outfit on stood in the kitchen, ready to serve food to the teenagers.
"Everyone, this is Chef Hatchet. I hope your hungry, because he serves all meals here." Chris informed the campers as Chef Hatchet scooped some brown slop onto Bridgette's tray.
"That looks disgusting." Duncan commented. "Even prison food looks better than this,"
Chef Hatchet grabbed Duncan by the collar. "Listen up, Tiny. You may think your a tough guy, but I could BREAK YOU IN HALF IF I WANTED!" Chef yelled at Duncan.
"Whatever, just let me go." Duncan complained. Chef Hatchet set Duncan down.
Gwen was the next in line. "Is the food supposed to move?" She asked Chef.
"That doesn't look right," Leshawna commented from behind her.
"YOU DON'T LOOK RIGHT!" Chef screamed at the two girls. He grabbed a hammer and smashed it onto Gwen's food. It stopped moving, but the red slop had went everywhere.
Beth was the next in line. Her and Cody gulped as they say the towering frame of Chef.
As they got their trays, they walked toward's their teams' table. "You think I can eat this with braces on?" Beth asked.
Cody shrugged.
"Hey can we order a pizza?" Geoff asked from his seat. Suddenly, a cleaver went flying passed Geoff's head, barely missing him.
Chef stood in the kitchen, fuming over Geoff's comment. "WOAH! Chill dude!" Geoff shouted in fear. "It's cool man! Brown slop is cool!"
"Well now that everyone has been introduced to Chef, it's time for your first challenge. Everyone get their swimsuits on and go meet me at the cliff!" Chris announced. He then turned and walked out of the dining hall.
"Swimsuits and a cliff? That's our challenge?" Katie asked aloud.
"That certainly doesn't sound like a good combination," Bridgette commented.
"It's our first challenge. How bad can it be?" DJ said.
The shot cut to the campers on top of the cliff in their bathing suits, all peeking over the edge of the cliff. "Oh S***," DJ swore as the episode ended.
I hope you enjoyed the episode! It was a little similar to the actual first episode, but I changed a lot of the dialogue so hopefully that kept it fresh.
I'm so excited for this story. Hopefully you guys enjoyed!
Who's your prediction for first boot? Sound off in the Reviews!
Thanks for reading!
-Pierana