This is my first fanfic so I hope you all like it. Please review and tell me any improvements. It's probably quite rubbish but I still hope you like it. I wrote just the 1st chapter from Rosalie's point of view. Hope you enjoy!
PS: For those who know nothing about Twilight, Ness is short for Renesmee. She is Edward and Bella's half human, half vampire child. Rosalie is Edward's sister. Finally, Renesmee is seven in human years but she grows a lot quicker so at that age she is the equivalent of eighteen and at around that age she will stop growing and live without aging like normal vampires (they can live as long as they want until someone kills them). Also, Jacob (used to be in love with Bella) imprinted (look it up in twilight wiki too long to explain) on Renesmee and in the books it says he will "get with her" when she is fully mature (i.e. eighteen, stops growing).
"Auntie Rose!" I could hear Renesmee calling my name from the other side of the woods.
"I'm coming hon!" I hurried off in her direction. Renesmee was six years old and her seventh birthday was in only two days. I was taking her out hunting for the first time - of course, she had gone with Bella and Edward once or twice before, but this was the first time I had accompanied her. Her parents thought it would be a good birthday present for her, and quite frankly, I was more than happy to oblige.
Finally I found her, and to my delight, I saw she had bitten a deer.
"Look at this! Dad taught me!" She gave me her beautiful smile, which rendered me at any of her requests. The only other person who had that effect on me was Emmett (and that was expected, what with him being the "love of my life").
"Amazing Ness, well done! Let's eat!" We both ate together and once our appetites were appeased, went back to Bella and Edward's cottage.
"Mum! Dad! I'm back!" I heard footsteps and the next thing I knew, Bella hurried towards her daughter and hugging her tight in her arms.
"I missed you! How was it? Fun? You liked it?" she smiled.
"Yeah!" answered Ness, but I could see something was still troubling her. "I just wish Jacob would come with me." That was understandable: Ness loved Jacob and not a day had passed without him by her side, but when it came to hunting… he lost his temper. Jacob disapproved of Renesmee's vampire side. That was the only thing, she had told me, that annoyed her with Jacob; she loved being half vampire as much as half human. The fact that he wouldn't accept that infuriated me, but there was no use trying to make him see sense.
"It's okay hon." Bella sympathized, "I'm sure he'll come next time."
"I don't think so mum." Renesmee mumbled, saddened by the thought. It's not as if I liked the wolf part of him, but Ness didn't deserve this feeling of betrayal.
"I need to go now Renesmee. Emmett's waiting for me. But you call me or come over if you have any trouble." I hugged her, before leaving the cottage.
"See you Rosalie." my brother called.
"Bye" whispered Ness.