So I redid this, because the first one was a peice of crap. I am going to redo all of the other chapters, and hopefully make them longer, then I will add new chapters.
Kris POV
Okay, right now I am in the most PISSED OFF state I can be. I was going to KILL Anesia. I mean really, why did she have to bring me to that party last night? I am not the kind of girl who sings a concert and does a few encores for her fans. No, that's not me. I had to stay and drink, and then I had to dance and stay until 2 A.M. and now, I had a raging hangover, I was going to kill her.
Now, I might as well get out of bed. Why else would I be awake? I unwillingly opened my eyes to find none other than, John Lennon in front of me. Ok, hallucinations I thought, I'm going back to bed. Wait just a minute...
John POV
A random bird in my bed, this is not unusual. Maybe I can get another shag out of her. She has to be a fan of mine to be sleeping soundly in my bed right? I hoped she was. I leaned on my side and stared at her face, she is really pretty. I stared and started humming, and then she started to wake up.
Kris POV
I opened my eyes and I was still face to face with John Lennon, I mean THE John Lennon. It had to be a dream right? I closed my eyes tight and opened them again slowly. DARN IT! he was still there. He crawled right on top of me, "Hey luv, are you awake now?" he asked me.
"No Sh*t Sherlock" I replied.
"So, how far did we go last night?" he asked. I scoffed and rolled my eyes.
"Oh come on nice little gag but seriously get off me now or I will bite." I snapped.
"Awww come on lighten up luv" 'John' said kissing me.
"NO GET THE F-CK OFF ME LENNON LOOK-ALIKE!" I slapped him across the face, got up, opened the door, and stomped off.
And That my dear readers, if there are any, is the first chapter of my first story here on Fan Fiction, now redone. Did you like it? Hate it? Want me to jump off a cliff because of bad writing? Tell me :) Is it better now?