Pls read and review after you read cuz idk if im continuing this story the idea was just sitting in my head and i finally decided to write it. So if some of you like this story please review and tell me so i can continue it. Also check out my two other stories my DBZ one is the on that ive really been working on but im going to try and get back on my Naruto one.


In the East Blue, on a cruise ship.


"A barrel on the port side!" the lookout shouted

"I got it, just throw me a rope." A sailor said as he jumped over board and swam towards the barrel

"Is it hooked up?" another crew men asked

"Yea just hoist us up." The swimming sailor said

"Dam this is heavy it better be rum at least" one of the three sailors said as they hoisted up the barrel

"Ahh guys we got a problem…" the lookout shouted

"Well what is it?" the sailor that was in the water asked as he was just getting back on the ship.

"PIRATES!" The lookout shout as he pointed to the right side of the ship

The rest of the crew looked in that direction and realized that that wasn't just a small island but also the pirates cover

"Shit, go tell the captain! I'll go get everyone ready, you take that barrel to the kitchen" the wet sailor ordered as he left for the sailor's quarters


Below the deck in the ballroom


The passengers and the captain where enjoying the festivities on the ship's ballroom deck. The deck was filled with the chatter of conversations and the melodies of the orchestra as many passengers danced in the formal affair

"Captain we have a problem!" the sailor shout half out of breath from running

"What's wrong?" the captain asked seriousness in his voice

"Pirates! Starboard sir" the sailor managed to get out

No sooner than the words left the sailor's mouth then the noise of cannon fire filled the air. The ship bobbed hard to the left as two shots missed the ship but landed close to the ship


On the pirate ship


"It hard being this beautiful. Coby who is the most beautiful woman in all the world's oceans?" the large female pirate asked

"You are Lady Alvida, ma'am" the pink haired Coby responded

The lady just tilted her head back and let out a witch like cackle for a laugh

"Alright boys I know its been a while so try not to screw anything up." Alvida says to her crew. "That means you Coby. Now pull us beside her and prepare to board!"

The pink ship pulls just beside the cruise ship before numerous grappling hooks come from her decks to the other ships. Once the lines were secured the Alvida pirates rushed the ship some running along the grappling hook lines others swinging from the masts.

"Get your ass in gear" Alvida says as she tosses Coby onto the other ship

Hitting the deck hard and rolling the pink haired boy soon falls down the stairs leading below the deck

"Oh that hurt , but at least it got me to where I'm alone." Coby says as he gets up rubbing his head. "This must be the kitchen" he said as he walked through the door with a fork and spoon crossed on it.

Inside of the kitchen was nothing special just some seasoning canisters on the counter, a fridge, and a table in the center of the room

"So this is where you're hiding Coby" a short pirate says

"No I just thought they might have some exotic foods here" Coby says off the top of his head

"Damn that barrel is huge. I bet there is rum in it." A second pirate says as he walks in with a third

"Nothing like other people's rum" The biggest of the trio said as he readied he barrel to be open

"Release." A voice from inside the barrel said

Once the words were said the two metal rings holding the barrel feel to the floor. The sides to the barrel fell outward and there sat a young black man holding the top.

"Man that was a rough ride" the young man said as he stretched his neck

"Who the hell are you?" the tallest of the pirates asked looking at the black kid with dreads down to his chest

"Black D. Jay, future king of the pirates." the dreadlock wearing kid said as he stood up and stretched his legs

"Give us what's in the bag and you can live" the shortest of the three said referring to the backpack the kid had on him

"Is that so?" Jay said tossing the barrel top on the floor "How about what you can take from me is what you can have"

"Get him!" the short one shouted as all three

"Tetsu fist!" Jay said as his hand turned a shiny black color right before he punched the tallest of pirates in the stomach knocking him out cold

"You're gonna pay for that" the shortest of the pirates says as he unsheathes his sword

"Doubt it" Jay said with a smirk

The short pirate charged for the boy, going with the wood splitting swing

"Iron Hide" the young man said as h just stood there

The pirate's swing met with the top of the boys head, not moving for his blade had bent

"What they hell?" The pirate said not entirely sure he was seeing what he was thinking he was seeing

"Crappy ass sword. Tetsu Fist" Jay said as his fist again turned metallic this time hitting the short pirate in the face, no doubt breaking his face and sending him into unconsciousness "One more to go" Jay said as he looked at the medium sized pirate

"N-n-o not me" The pirate said as he dropped his sword and fell on his ass.

Jay took a step closer

"No stay back" the pirate shouted as he scooted back the the wall

"You should be more aware of your environment" Jay said with a light chuckle

"Wha?" the pirate said looking around just seeing a regular kitchen

"Look up" Jay replied

The pirate looked up, to his horror he saw a set of kitchen knives right above him

Pointing his index and middle fingers at he knives the young man lets out a light chuckle "Two knocked out, one dead, I'm really losing my touch."

"Wait no!" the pirate shouts panic all in his voice

Flicking his fingers down the knives follow suit and rained on the pirate on cutting his neck, another piercing his heart, and the rest lodged in his chest and abdomen

"Oh Kami" Coby said as he ran over to the trash can and emptied his stomach

"Come on kid this cant be your first time seeing someone die. Hell he went peaceful compared to others" Jay said he looked at the puking kid

"But I knew him" The boy said still hovering over the trash can

"So your with them?" Jay asked an air of tension suddenly filled the room

"Kinda" Coby said not sure if he wanted to answer

"What you mean kinda" Jay asked as he walked to the fridge and got some meat out

"I'm kinda apart of their crew but it's just because their captain has me as a slave" Coby said hoping he wouldn't end up like the other three

"That's fucked up. By the way whats your name?" Jay asked

"Its Coby" the pink haired boy replied

"Well nice to meet you, you did catch my name when the those guys asked right?" Jay inquired

"Yea its Jay" Coby said with a smile

"Yep, now where is this captain at so I can give him a piece of my mind, damn pedophile." Jay says as begins to walk out of the kitchen area

"Well the captain is actually a woman" Coby says as he follows him out the door and on the deck with the rest of the Alvida pirates

"Well damn. Hold on I'll ask this dude where the captain" Jay says as he walks up to the widest body on the deck "Excuse me sir where's your captain?"

"What did you say?" the person asked anger in their voice

"Man, chill I'm just trying to find you captain" Jay says

"I'm Iron Club Alvida, the most beautiful pirate on all the seas!" the troll like woman yelled at the boy

"Damn bitch you ugly" Jay said looking at the mountain built bitch

"Jay that's the captain" Coby said shaking

"You brat!" The fat woman shouted as she swung her mace like a baseball batter at the young man

Holding his hand out Jay easily caught the mace

"This is iron" Jay said with a smile

Suddenly Jays hand turns the same color as the mace

"Why is it getting lighter!?" Alvida shout as she could feel the mace losing weight fast

"I ate the Kinzoku Kinzoku (Metal Metal) devil fruit." Jay says as he finished absorbing the mace.

"What the hell his arm it's huge!" One of Alvida's the crew shouted

The young devil fruit user's arm was now the size of the mace

"Kinzoku Piston" Jay said as his metal arm rocketed into the ogre like woman. The punch his with such force it made her body bent into a letter c. "Launch!" Jay shouted as all the metal left his arm into a massive metal bullet, sending the mammoth woman soaring into the sky

"Give me and Coby a boat. He's joining the marines, any problems with that?" Jay says to the Alvida pirates

"Whatever you say" the crew shouted back scared of what the boy was capable of

The crew disappeared for a moment before they come back with a small 12 foot boat with a sail.

Cannon balls suddenly flew into the area of the ships luckily not hitting either ship.

"Fuck it's the navy!" Jay said looking at three navy ships "Well Coby, that's you future."

"You can't expect me to just swim over there they will treat me like a pirate." Coby said

"Well shit looks like you're coming with me." Jay replied

Grabbing the pink haired boy the metal pirate jumps down to the boat

"Toss down some rum and a month worth of food!" Jay shouts at the other pirates. Looking over he see an orange haired girl in her own small boat. "You're cute whats your name?"

A round from the navy lands directly in between the two small boats.

"Shit! Coby you steer I got the sail" Jay orders as he unties the ropes holding the sails and catches the food and rum barrels

"Gotcha" Coby replied as he grabbed the boat's rudder and steered away from the ships


45 mins later


"I think we're clear" Coby says looking around and seeing nothing but blue waters and clear skies

"Just a beautiful day at sea" Jay says as he lays back and opens the rum barrel

"It is just a nice breeze and a clear sky" Coby said as he looked up at the sky

"So you're gonna be King of the pirates?" Coby ask

"Yeah I'ma be the next Gol D. Rodger, well except for the whole getting caught and executed part." Jay says as he drinks from the barrel

"Even sail the Grand Line?" Coby asked

"Of course how else am I supposed to find One Piece" Jay replies "Have to go meet this pirate hunter first though."

"Why would you want to meet a pirate hunter?" Coby asked not sure what the boy was thinking

"To ask him to join my crew. I heard he was in a navy base so I'm pretty sure if I can free him he will join my crew, if not then it's never a better time to work on my bounty. Bigger my bounty the more pirates will notice me, then I can start attracting strong crew members.

"I heard that rumor too" Coby replied

When you heard it did the pirate hunter have a name?" Jay asked as he kicked back and drank some more rum

"Its Roronoa Zoro if I remember correctly." Cody said as he stared into the sky

"Seeing as it the East Blue I have an idea of which base he is at. Set sail for the north east" Jay says as he tossed the boy a compass

"Jay, can I ask you a question?" Coby asked

"Sure" Jay said

"You said you ate a devil fruit, what was it?" Coby asked

"The Metal Metal fruit." Jay replied

"What does it do?" Coby intrigued asked

"Well so far I can control metals, absorb, produce, and become metal." Jay explained

"So you absorbed Alvida's mace?" Coby asked

"Yea it's my favorite ability too." Jay stated

"When you absorb the metal where does it go?" Coby asked

"That's where the magic happens, when I absorb the metal there are two things I can do with it: either absorb it into my body making myself bigger in the process or I can coat it around my body" Jay said with a smile

"Wait so you can get bigger is there a limit?" Coby asked thinking how great this fruit is

"I have no clue the most I've ever absorbed was that mace" Jay said thinking of his history. "Word of advice if you ever eat one hold your nose these things are horrible!"

"How would I know?" Coby asked having never seen one

"It just looks like a weird textured fruit." Jay replied "Mine looked like a metallic mango but tasted like coin money and the smell of copper."

"That sounds horrible" Coby replied nausea building in his own stomach

"It was." Jay said with a shiver "Ima take a nap so wake me up when we get there."


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