Splash, a naruto fanfic

Authors Note:

Okay, so I wrote this for a project in English class and thought that it could work as a fair representation of what death might have felt like for Naruto if the villagers had been able to kill him. Not that they would have been able to with the Kyuubi inside him but . . .

.:I:.

Splash

Waves against the rocks

The Ocean

Salt-water

Which tastes like the tears

Running down my face

Tears remind me

Of the despair stabbing my heart

Like the knife in my chest

My despair dwarfs its hatred

And lust

For the red liquid

Flowing from my body

Splash

Splash upon the floor

My red lifeblood

Glows

In my darkening vision

Reminding me of the eyes

Reaching for my pain

Splash

Splat…

My vision darkens

Drip…

Death

.:I:.

So what did you think? I guess it's kinda dark. Same with my other poem 'Father!'. I was just feeling kinda emo when I wrote this I guess. No offense to Emos