Talen's
Fate, Chapter 1:
The wedding
Disclaimer: I unfortunately own nothing you could write a fan fiction about. I wish I did but I don't. I just read the books. So I don't own the tamuli or the elenium.
Talen walked out of the
chapterhouse, feeling relieved to finally be able to get Sparhawk to
leave him alone. After 9 years of training, he was finally a fully
fledged Pandion Knight. Perhaps the best part, at least for him, was
that he could go back to being a thief... in his spare time and
behind the churches back, of course. Also, he might finally be able
to escape from Sparhawk's 15 year old daughter, princess Danae. But
he decided not to try that last year.
FLASHBACK
"Talen,
why? Why do you always avoid me when I try to visit you," Danae
cried as she turned to leave. It was a cold, rainy day and she had
showed up, like she did every month, to say hi and check on Talen. As
usual, he tried to escape, and as usual, she caught him. But this was
the first time she had burst into tears while talking with him. "Uh,
I, well, I just…..." Talen trailed off as Danae sunk to the floor
sobbing. "Danae, I just can't forget what you said 8 years ago,
Danae. I'm sorry but I don't want to marry you!" I guess
marrying me wasn't a little girl whim after all, Talen thought. "I
know you d-d-d-don't, but could you at least try getting to know
me?! Every t-t-time I visit you, you try to push out the nearest
door!" Danae said as she stopped crying. Talen felt sure she ran
out of tears, forcing her to stop, despite her obvious efforts to
calm down. "Danae, I'm 9 years older than you, and I'm sorry,
but I won't let you trap me into marriage!" As Talen looked down
at Danae, she seemed to finally calm down. "Fine Talen, if you want
me to leave you alone then I will. But you should know that I love
you, and I just wanted to be with you. Goodbye," she said as she
stood up and turned to go. Talen was thunderstruck as he realized she
was telling the truth. She didn't have enough experience lying to
trick him. He realized that he had, in fact fallen in love with the
young princess that had chased him for so long. "Wait! Danae!"
Her hand stopped on the doorknob and she turned her head to look at
him. "I think that, well, Iloveyoutoo." He said it quickly and
was surprised when he found Danae nearly knocking him over in a
fierce, tight hug. "Really?" she asked looking up at him. "Well
yeah. I mean, I… I love you more every day, I just, well, don't
want to admit it," he said, blushing furiously. "Does this mean
that you'll marry me when you're a real Knight?" she asked with
hope gleaming in her eyes. "…..Yes, Danae, I will." He said,
and so his fate was sealed.
PRESENT
Danae popped up right
behind him and grabbed his arm. "TALEN! YAY! You're finally a
Pandion. Now I can make you my future Prince Consort." "Oh
no," Talen groaned as she dragged him to the palace. Danae
laughed as she walked, feeling happier than she had in 9 years, when
Talen had first started his training. As Talen saw Stragen, Melidere,
Kring, Mirtai, Berit and all his other friends standing in the throne
room, he wondered what Danae was planning. That is, until he saw
Dolmant, the Sarathi and Archprelate himself, standing in between to
Khalad and Mirtai, in front of the thrones, and holding a silver
crown in one hand and a smile on his face. Once they reached the
Archprelate, Dolmant began the ceremony. Talen could barely hear
Dolmant as he realized what was going on. She is trying to marry me
today. Well, I suppose if you are going to be part of two religious
ceremonies eventually, may as well do them on the same day, Talen
thought, remembering his knighting ceremony and the Pandion vows he
uttered a mere hour ago. "Do you, Sir Talen, take this woman to be
your wife," Dolmant Asked, shaking him out of his reverie. "I
do!" Talen replied immediately. "And do you, Princess Danae, take
this man to be your husband?" Dolmant's question was answered by
a thrilled "I DO!" from Danae. "Then may your lives be blessed,
and now you two are married," Dolmant said with a wave of his hand.
Talen kissed Danae and then went to be congratulated by about 20-50
different people (most of whom he knew) and after a long reception,
he went to enjoy his wedding night with the woman he loved more than
anyone else.
The next morning he awoke next to Danae, his new wife, and dressed quickly. He gently woke her, ignoring her attempts to shrug him off, and together they went to greet the two families that they had joined into one.
This was my first fanfic; I hope you David Eddings fans enjoyed it. Please send me reviews, and don't be afraid to criticize or SEND ME A REVEIW i have 4 more chapters ready
