ok now thanks to my reviewer on my
last version of my story (witch sucked and i knew it would)
i am
re-writing it and gonna try to use spell check so anyway thank you
Mercury's Serenity for pointing this obvious stuff out to me.
disclaimer: i don't own naruto i only own (changing the name) akane
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'BRRIIIINNNGGGGG' Akane's alarm clock went off at its normal time six o'clock AM and akane was awake in a second getting dressed and ready for school.
hmmm... what should I wear?she thought to herself and picked out a Tye-dye tee-shirt with her normal blue jeans. Brushed her short brown hair and put a Tye-dye hair band in her hair and headed down for breakfast.
"M mm...mom that smells delicious" She informed her mother as she smelled the eggs frying and set the table for her brother, father, and her.
"Okay akane so your going to talk to your math teacher about brining that grade up right?" Her mother asked as she sat down.
"Yes but I don't think he'll listen" She told her mom, "He's a bit mean when it comes to grading extra papers" just as akane said that her brother Akito came downstairs.
"Ha ha ha", He laughed, "You have Mr.Takuya don't you onii-san?" she nodded and Akito laughed some more "That guy needs to take a chill pill he's so uptight all the time." As he laughed he went to grab a piece of bacon off Akane's plate but akane caught him and slapped his hand.
"OOOOOWWWWW" He yelled as akane laughed and ruffled her brothers short black hair.
"Okay you two stop the fights and akane you have to go to catch the bus" She smiled as she left out the big oak door at the end of the hallway and took off to the end of her driveway. She stopped suddenly and realized she forgot her backpack so she whirled around and took off twards her door and found her mother there with her backpack in one hand and her lunch money in the other. "thanks" she muttered and walked back to the end of the long white driveway.
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"good morning" the cheery bus driver greeted her as she climbed the stairs to the bus.
"good morning" She replied as she got into a seat at the front of the bus and took out a Naruto graphic novel and started reading it.
About halfway through the bus ride the bus came to a sudden stop sending her flying face first into the seat in front of her.
"oof!" She said as she looked up to green eyes, " AHH!" akane jumped and flew backwards hitting her head on the metal wall of the bus. Shaking her head a little bit to regain sense.
"Hello" Said the girl she had pink hair and she looked to be fourteen and she had a red shirt on and a tan thing covering her blue shorts and she had boots on, "I am Haruno, Sakura from The Village Hidden in the Leaves." she had a bit of and accent but all in all she did really good with her English.
"And theses are my team members Uzumaki, Naruto and Sai" she pointed to the two boys one akane assumed to be Naruto was wearing an orange and black jumpsuit and a leaf forehead protector like Sakura and the other boy who must have been Sai was wearing what looked like to be a black belly-shirt type thing and black pants with also a leaf forehead protector. Akanes eyes went wide as she realized who these people were they were leaf shinobi from her manga!
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okay thats where i'll stop i feel im improving (spell check really works!!) but yeah I'll pick it up in the next chapter. later!