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Chapter One

As I wake up I feel something next to me. I look over and see Jason on the ground still knocked out.

There a snap of a twig and the sound of rustling leaves. Jason is waking back up and I do not know what is happening.

"Jason are you awake. Something is in the bush's I think." There is no responses. "Jason" She said as she moved to

shake him a little. As she shaked him he stirred a little. "Charlie what happened. Were is everyone?" Charlie swiftly

turned around as a figure appeared out from the bushes. "So what do we have here." The voice sounded familiar. As

lighting striked nere by she got a glimpse of the figures face. "Who are you?" Just as she says that Jason turns and

see the person standing over them. "Nobody you need to know little girl. How's the boy here. And where are your

parents." Jason looked over at me as if saying 'Do we answer him or gang up on him.' "Answer my question boy."

As he says this he looks at us weird and says "Are you to two a lone." He moves closer to us and I realize how he is.

"Aaron what are you doing here." The figure moves a little closer as if trying to get a better view of us and realize how

I am and says "Charlie what are you doing here. And how is this boy. What where is Miles and Nora," "First this is

Jason and I don't know are Miles and Nora are." Suddenly Jason's eyes grow wide and he grips his side and winces

in pain. "Jason are you all right." I get up and move to his right side that he is griping. As I look at it I see blood covering

his side. "Charlie is it bad." He looks up at me with pain in his eyes. "I cannot tell. But I do know that we have to find

Miles and Nora and get you to a river." I look up at Aaron. "Aron is there a river near by." "Yes but we have to hurry and get your friend to there."

As he says this I start to worry. What did he mean. I look at Jason "Can you walk or at least get up."

"Maybe let me try." As he trys to sit up he winces. "Jason just lay back down. Aron can you help me left him and get him to

the river. So I can see how bad his wound is." Aaron just nodes. I stand up and start to help pick him up and Aaron joins me.

With a little effort we get him to the bank of the river. As I left up his shirt I see the wound. "Jason we are going have to cut

your shirt off ok." He justs nodes his head. "Aron hand me your knife." He hands me his knife and I start to cut of Jason's

shirt so I can see the wound better. It looks very bad. but i see that he is looking at me so i force my lips into a smile.

"Does it look bad." "No..." I start to choke up. He look concerned and but his clean hand on my cheek and cups it.

My eyes start to water up. And he see this. "Charlie go and find Miles and Nora. I will be all right." As he says this I get

an idea. "Ok I will go get Miles and Nora they will know what to do." I get up and start back and realize that Aaron is still

there. "Aaron you stay here with Jason why I go find Miles and Nora." And I start off in a random direction. I look back and

see Aaron siting by Jason saying something. I whisper to myself "I hope they will be all right." And start walking again.

Hi I know I stink at ending chapters but I will work on it. Please review and write suggestions please. If i do not get at

least three reviews I will not do another chapter. Thank you for reading this. O and please tell me if there is any misspelling.