My second fanfic! YAY! :inserthappilygaydancinghere:. I feel so happy writing....even though I suck at grammar and all that jazz. I need some criticism on my writing so I very much appreciate people reading and reviewing. If you would also like to be a beta reader for me just send me a PM. I will feel so happy if someone reviews this.
Disclaimer: I do not own Inuyasha. I swear I have no idea where that manga draft came from.
…...I do WISH I owned Bankotsu....I would hide him in my closet...Just stating the facts here.
Amarante briskly walked out of her hut and into the clear sky day, breathing in the fine air. She smiled, thinking that nothing would ruin her small home village tucked into the mountain with a peaceful little stream next to it. This is home, this is beautiful,but a fragile existents it is.
Taking one step down into the meadow surrounding her cute little village, an ear piercing cry silences, and a explosion of sounds erupts.
Panicked she ran towards the the heart of the village. Villagers screamed and ran in chaos. They run and fall. Lying dead on the ground. Blood soaks the flowers and everything else in reach.
RUN! RUN! She tries but her legs won't move. She just stares at the bodies in a daze. Something grabs her by the waist and throws her motionless body over their shoulder. Another explosion. Fire scorches the meadow and the houses. Amarante wants to cry, but they never leave her eyes. It got harder to breath as the smoke from the fire surrounded them. She closes her eyes. 'Its just a dream' she thinks to herself.
With a thud, her captor drops her to the ground. She opens her eyes to meet the distressed gaze of her childhood friend Daiki.
"Stay here. I'll bring back the other survivors. Ok?" he said looking at her then at the entrance to the hide out. He stared at her for a second and then jogged out of the room without waiting for an answer.
"....ok....." she whispers to nobody.
Many hours pass without his return. She was getting restless.
Finally after the moon appeared and vanished she couldn't hold in the urge to get out of the room. It got the best of her.
As she opened the door, gruesome smells filled her nose. She suppressed the uproar in her stomach. A rumble shakes the ground and she takes cover over by a partly burned down hut.
"Gersh."
"Looks like we killed everyone. Haaaaaaaaa. Now I can just relax."
"Gersh."
Amarante stole a glance around the hut. Six men total stood in front of the ruins. Six men took out an entire village? Amarante thought it would have been impossible. As she stares at the six men a shiver climbs up her spine and a shadow forms in front of her.
"Well look at here. I found a little mouse." Quickly her gaze is directed to a man standing behind her. He smirked licking the metal claws on his hand. Wide eyed and horrified instinct kicks in to high gear propelling her up off the ground and out into the open. In front of the now seven men that took her village.
Sorry if its boring or anything....I'm just trying to see if my stories are crap or not. Sorry for all the mistakes that there might be. Also sorry that it's so short and that I don't really go into detail of what Amarante is like. I swear I will in the second chapter. This is more like the learning how to add step before the learning how to multiply step. You know?