Hey so this is just the beginning.
I don't know if this is any good and if i should continue this.
It is my first story after all so please tell me what you think!
Ugh. Summer vacation. I know, most kids love it. I like it too, but every year my family goes on vacation together and it's beginning to bother me. I mean come on, I'm already 17! I want to go do my own stuff! Not like there's much for me to do in my new town. Ya, I just moved. It's this little town called Forks, in Washington. My dad used to live here until he met my mom and moved to be with her. The town was gracious enough to give him his old job back as chief of police.
Now back to my predicament. We're here in Cancun, Mexico. We got this nice hotel that was all inclusive. But still, all I'm doing is sitting by the beach and reading my book. I'm not really into sports, considering I'm so clumsy I'm almost disabled. It's sad really, but I've gotten used to it. I just happen to trip over air, but it's all good.
I look out into the waves. I love the sound of the ocean. It's so soothing. All of a sudden, I heard a shout. "WATCH OUT!!" someone yelled. I didn't have time to move, and then I felt a sharp pain in my head.
Everything went black.
So how do you guys like it so far?
I'm wondering if i should continue so i need feedback! =]