N/D: Hey there. Although this story has been around for about a few months this is a new version of chapter 1 because it was so short and boring and so on and so forth. So I'm rewriting it.

The beginning (The rewritten version)

It was a warm July day, every one would be out playing and having fun and hanging out with their friends. Some would go to camp like Camp Blue Moon and stay there for the summer. This summer would change the lives of eight people for ever.

At this camp every one was having fun like they should be, well almost every one. People would often see a person dressed in all black and ask who is that or why does he dress that way. He would always be seen at the same tree every day wearing the same colours he would always wear, black. He would wear black jeans, a black jacket over a black T-shirt, black trainers and a black bandana round his head. The only thing that wasn't black was his hair, but it was close to it. He had long dark brown hair which would sway in the wind like the back of his bandana which hung out of the back. He would stand there in the same way every day, with his arms folded.

It was well into the summer break at camp blue moon and almost every one was having fun. And yet the same person stood at the base of the same tree he always did but this time he wasn't alone, there was a faint sound of snoring coming from above him, as he looked up he saw some one that he once would have called his friend,

"Hmph Tai" But he wasn't expecting him to be awake,

"yeah…..what? Oh its you Will" As he said this he was only just waking up.

"Huh? Oh its you…..the prince of darkness…..why are you so dark any way?"

"That's for me to know and its better then being a jerk!"

"Huh?…..did you just call me a jerk?"

"Did I say you were a jerk?"

"No but….."

"There you go then……..still dumb" The last bit was whispered

"What did you call me?"

"I didn't say anything!" But Tai hadn't herd what he said so he wasn't sure if Will had even said any thing at all. The two just stood there in silence noting could be herd but the sounds of the others working.

After a while and very body had gone back to their cabins, the pair were still at the tree saying nothing, but Tai hated silence,

"You know back when you were still normal you were a good friend and now your just a……"

But before Tai could say anything a snow flake had landed on Will and Tai making them look up. They saw the sky was turning white as the fall of the snow was getting heavier and soon the gentle wind became a strong storm. Tai had jumped out of the tree and began running to the log cabin marked C,

"Will come on you'll die out there!" Will still standing at the base of the tree began to slowly walk towards the cabin. When he finally reached it and stepped inside and stood in a corner whilst a member of staff was going through their names he was left with his thoughts,

"This is the boring thing that's ever happened to me although I hope some thing happens like Tai getting crushed"

The staff member was still going thorough the names when he reached Will and all he said was,

"Yeah I'm here"

N/D definitely a better beginning then last time but still I want to know what your new impressions are. And please review!