hi...
ok, so i KNOW i haven't updated The Clan Of Love n a while, and im sorry... schools started, so yeah...im still alive!
this is just a small oneshot of the pack pack kill kill thing from swiftpaw's POV
How could Bluestar do this to me? Forced to watch Cloudtail become a warrior while I was perfectly capable as well, actually, even more, since that lazy piece of fox-dung (1) actually missed some of his training when he was taken by twolegs! I'll show them...
I was running through the forest, Brightpaw running beside me. We were going Sunningrocks to find what was stealing our prey. The Bluestar will have to make us warriors!
Suddenly, I saw dull gray rocks looming ahead of me.
"There they are" I whispered to the ginger and white she-cat next to me. Her fear-scent was strong, but determination was in her eyes.
"Let's go."
I nodded and led the way, crouching and sliding through a break in the brambles. The clearing was completely empty, the rocks glaring menacingly down on us. A foul stench filled the air.
"What's that?" I asked out loud.
Brightpaw frowned, then opened her mouth and tasted the air, eyes filled with concentration. Suddenly, her pupils widened and her fear scent grew stronger.
"Dog!"
At that moment, a huge brown form slammed into my side. I shrieked in surprise and rolled away, flinching every time my injured side touched the ground. A horrified screech told me Brightpaw was in trouble. I jumped up, ready to race to her rescue, when I saw that two dogs were on either side of me, their eyes filled with horrible glee. I growled and jumped on the back of one, but the other simply bit my tail and pulled me off. I heard a snap as it pulled, and knew my tail was broken. The rest was a bloody haze, nothing but screeching and growls and shouts of "help me, Swiftpaw!" Eventually, the shouts ceased, and I saw her on the ground, mangled and broken, with half her face torn away. I fought for my life-I even tore the leader's ear!- but I knew this was where I was going to end, I was going to die. But I fought, and fought, until my leg was broken and my vision was filled with stars. I was pinned by a very annoyed looking leader. I struggled, but it was useless.
Growls of 'pack, pack, kill, kill!' surrounded me, draining me of hope. My last sight was of my friend, Brightpaw. Just lying there, motionless, broken. I'm sorry. Then the dogs closed in and all was black.
isnt it so lame and short?
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