I've thought about writing this story for a long time now, (and I hope to write more stories for other animes and so on) but, to be quite frank, I've never written stories for other people to read before. I used to think up these stories when I couldn't get to sleep at night. And since this is my first time writing, I would love to get some reviews, including constructive reviews, to see how I'm doing! I would love to hear if you have any ideas.
-Sadly, the only thing I own is some DragonBall Z DVDs and memories... and my Character Anna. DBZ was created, and is owned by another.
-Bows to Akira Toriyama, and those at Funimation-
Begin Story-
She was so excited... finally, she'd arrived! Looking at the half crumpled letter in her hands, she read eagerly as she walked down the packed city side-walk, "Anna, I'm so excited to hear that you're graduating, and at the top of your class too! That's a great accomplishment!" She smiled, coming dangerously close to wandering into the occasional pedestrian as she read on, "I always thought that you had a real gift, you remind me of myself when I was younger. Not to sound stuck up, but that is a BIG compliment coming from me, chick!"
She chuckled to herself, "nope, she hasn't changed one bit."
"Ever since I met you at the university when I was giving my lectures on Robotics, I've kept my ears and eyes open..."
"HEY!!!! LOOK OUT YOU!!!"
Looking up from her letter, Anna realized she was walking into the middle of a crosswalk, and the "walk" light wasn't exactly green. "Oh Cra-,"
Half spinning, half diving out of the way of an oncoming delivery truck, she made it to the other side of the street.. just barely...
"Look where the hell you're goin' lady!" the truck driver shook his fist out the window at her, skidding down the road nearly slamming into a car. "You first asshole!" she screamed back at him at the top of her lungs, from the safety of the other side of the sidewalk... and it was at about this time that she realized that everyone was staring at her... "Uh, heh heh.. sorry!" And with that she quickly darted up the sidewalk as fast as she could to get away from the astonished crowd that had managed to come together in that infinitesimal amount of time.
"Hey mommy," the little boy tugged on his mother's skirt. "What is it sweetie," she asked him, still watching the retreating back of the foul mouthed young woman that had nearly caused an accident, as she dissipated up the street, headed towards the business section of Satan City. "Mommy, that lady made the lights blow up!" he said excitedly, pointing to the street light above them, just ten feet away. "That's silly she didn't..." she began to say as she looked up, but then.. wait... "no sweetheart, she didn't break the lights." Scooping her son up into her arms, she quickly walked away from the intersection, and onwards to her home, refusing to look back. Indeed, every street light on that side of the road had somehow exploded! Why hadn't she noticed, surely she'd have heard it? No, it wasn't possible. "Freaky stuff like that doesn't happen, it must have already been broken.. a bad power surge that hadn't yet been fixed..." she tried to convince herself, "yeah that's it..."
"Come on Anna, get yourself together!" she thought angrily to herself, "stop being a klutz." That had been way to close. She'd only just gotten into town, and was already making a nuisance of herself to the locals... "And..." she thought sullenly, "on top of that, I let myself get caught off guard, and destroyed the freakin' lights...I've got to be more careful." Too much was riding on this. She had a real chance at a promising future, she couldn't screw it up this soon in the game.
After she'd managed to walk a few more city blocks, with the occasional check of the city map, (good lord this city was huge!), she decided that she could take another look at her letter, but this time she would pay attention to where she was walking!
"Ever since I met you at the university when I was giving my lectures on Robotics, I've kept my ears and eyes open..."
-Quickly looks up to make sure there aren't any trucks.. and then continues to read-
"And I have an exciting proposal for you, how would you like to come and work for me at my company?"
"Is, heck yeah, a good enough answer," she answered out loud, to no one in particular. "Please say yes, because if you do, I have a lot of opportunities opening up for you, and one in particular seems to be perfect for you. (And a relief for me if you accept)
-She looks up again.. nope no cars-
"So here are some plain tickets from Chicago to Japan if you're interested (which I really hope you are!) , just look me up when you reach town, my place is pretty hard to miss. Hope to see you soon!"
"Signed, Bulma Briefs," Anna read excitedly, President and CEO of.. "
Looking up, a wide grin blazed on her face, she was here!
There, sitting on it's own city block, was a huge, rounded white building, and a couple smaller ones besides, surrounded by beautiful green lawns, trees, gardens, and a huge fountain. And to top it off, the entire impressive display was guarded by a tall gate, and the only way in or out, was through a single guarded gateway facing the road.
"Capsule Corp.!"
