Howdy! So I am a fairly new writer, currently working on a My Candy Love fanfic and I wanted to do another one, and Ouran is one of my all time favas so YEAH! This story is about Kaoru because I feel his brother kinda overshadows him at points! ENJOY!


" .Lordy."

So here I am, standing outside of Ouran Private Highschool.

OURAN FREAKING PRIVATE HIGHSCHOOL.

"ok Chiyaki, breathe. Just breathe. You can do anything you set your mind to. If you want to. Do I want to?" I thought, staring blankly in front of me. Do I want this? I mean yeah, this school is good but... Am I making a horrible mistake here? I shouldn't have transferred shouldn't I? OH MY GOD I CAN'T DO THIS!

"What are you doing?"

WHY AM I HERE?!

"Can you hear me?"

OH MY GOD I CAN'T BREATHE

"...Hello?"

I snapped out of my coma, was someone talking to me? All of a sudden I felt a hand on my shoulder

"excu-"

"aaaargh!" I screamed, turning to the mystery human and slapping them, causing them to fall to their knees in pain.

"you hit me! Oh my god you hit me!" The boy screeched in pain, I took a good look at him. He was about my age, maybe a bit older. He had pale skin, and scruffy ginger hair, I couldn't see his face as his hands were covering it.

"I-I'm so sorry!, you just grabbed my shoulder an-"

"KAORU!"

I turned to my left to see another ginger haired boy running toward us, a look of panic across his face.

"Oh god Kaoru!" The other boy said, he knelt next to 'Kaoru' and patted his back, I could hear him sobbing, "sh-she hit me Hikaru! Really hard for no reason!" Kaoru whimpered, the other boy (Hikaru I guess his name is) stood up and glared at me, he was slightly taller than me, so we were about nose to nose, he was very handsome. Hisah hair was an orangey brown colour, he had large golden eyes and pale skin. Damn. Awkward moment when the guy is prettier than you.

"hey! What give you the right to hurt my brother?!" Hikaru asks,providing my shoulder, his pretty face screwed up tight.

I took a couple of steps back and bowed down low, "I'm so sorry, I was in a daze and your brother put his hand on my arm, It was just a reaction. Terribly sorry please forgive me!" I said, trying to sound formal. I looked up, Hikaru still looked pissed, I kept my head down, "I'm so sor-"

"it's ok."

I looked up, Kaoru had finally looked up. HOLY CRAP ARE THEY IDENTICAL. THEY ARE THE SAME PERSON. OH MY GOD.

"Kaoru! She hit you! You can't just forgive her! We should report it to boss!" Hikaru protested, helping Kaoru up.

"She didn't mean it, she was just spooked. Like a horse!" Kaoru says, smiling brightly at me.

Did he just call me a horse? Is that a compliment?

"oh, um I should introduce myself, I'm Chiyaki Nakamura. I just transferred into first year" I said, smiling at them, I received another blinding smile from Kaoand but a very sour look from Hikaru.

"I'm Kaoru Hitachin and this is my older twin brother Hikaru" Kaoru said, patting Hikaru's shoulder.

"Whatever, come on Hikaru, we don't want to be late for the club meeting." Hikaru said, dragging Kaoru off.

He's nice.

I watched them stride away, Kaoru... Kinda seems like Hikaru's bitch. In a way. I sighed and smiled to myself.

It's all uphill from here I guess!


Well that's chapter 1, I made it fairly short just so I can introduce the three main characters, Sorry if I made Hikaru a bit mean, he'll be nice later on!

NEXT CHAPTER- CHIYAKI'S FIRST DAY! HIKARU HAS A PUNISHMENT IN STORE FOR HER (that sounds dirty... Heehee.) SO YAY RATE AND REVIEW?!