I do not own Final Fantasy 7 or X2. I do own the plot for this story though!

I have decided to revise and edit this because the original made it look like a child wrote it and I have improved my writing since writing this.

Revised and edited:4/5/2012


The three girls stared down in to the black bottomless hole swarming with Pyreflies, dread filling every pore in there bodies as the continued to look down the hole. They did not want to go down into the pit that had unknown dangers inside, but they knew in order to restore peace and order in there world so that the eternal calm would remain that they had to go down there, putting there safety last and Spira's first. Shuyin needed to be stopped and Vagnagun needed to be destroyed so no one else could ever attempt to use the monstrous machina ever again.

Rikku crouched near the edge of the hole looking in she gave a loud whimper before asking the question she already knew the answer too,"Yunie, Do we really have to go down there?"

Paine smirked and said in a smug voice,"What are you scared of a little hole?"

That earned her a withering glare and a punch in the shoulder, ignoring all that was going on around her Yuna looked around the underground passage in Bevelle as she thought to herself,'Can we stop Shuyin? Will I be able to put Lenne to rest? If anyone is going to die.. This time I would like it to be me. Tidus sacrificed himself for me last time and i will not let anyone do that for me ever again! I am not going to let the ones I love die for my sake anymore.'

Yuna stood up from her crouching position putting a smile on her face as she said in a forced happy voice,"We might as well get going, It's not like Spira is going to save itself!"

They knew that it would be just too convenient if Spira saved itself, the planet was determined to make there lives hell and so far it was doing a pretty good job. Yuna held her hand out and said,"Y."

Rikku reached over with a small smile on her face and shouted,"R."

After a brief pause Paine's leather gloved hand joined there's as the girl said,"P."

Yuna looked at her friends with a grin on her she asked,"Ready?"

They then jumped up giving each other a high five as they said together,"Let do it!"

The girls turned and jumped down the black abyss the happiness and comfort they had moments ago replaced with dread and fear over what is to come. Half way down the hole the girls were swept up by some unknown force. It beat them against everything they had no clue what had them or what was going on as it beat there small bodies mercilessly and when Yuna was about to see if her friends were alright, she was knocked unconscious as her head hit something solid.

Some time later Yuna woke up to find Rikku and Paine crouched around a small fire, Rikku's green eyes were wide and full of fear and worry, Paine's face showed no expression but her eyes said everything she was worried as well.

She winced while getting up, her sore muscles protesting against moving after all the abuse she had went through, She looked over to her friends asking,"You two look worried, what's wrong?"

Rikku whispered her voice filled with as much fear as her eyes were,"Yunie, haven't you noticed we aren't in the Farplane but a forest?"

The brown haired girl looked around seeing trees that were just beginning to get there leaves, in the distance she heard screams, swords striking, and guns. By how long the sounds were going on she concluded that the area was a war zone.

She groaned in frustration putting a hand to her head and whined,"Not only are we in an unfamiliar place, but it sounds like there is also a war going on! Can't we ever catch a break?"

She didn't know why she was griping about how they never could catch a break, it wouldn't change anything it wouldn't take them back to where they came from. Though she wanted to know where in Spira were they.

Yuna turned back towards her friends with a determined look on her face and said,"Lets check our Garment Grids, so we can go see where we are and what is going on around here."

After they confirmed that there most prized possessions worked they set off to find out where they were, how they got there and why they where there of all places.


Hope the rewrite was much better than the original. I am going to rewrite all of the chapters and make them better^.^ The Sequel is called The Rise Of Cerberus. Review and Favorite.