I do not own Maximum Ride. James Patterson does. I hope that I did not copy anyone, because I know that lots of people write about Max's daughter. Also, I would like it if people would tell me if they don't like something

Hi my name is Danielle, but I like to be called Danny. My mom is Max. You might have heard of her. My mom always told me about her life before she married Fang. I always wished that I had her life. I defiantly could be her though. I looked like her, and dad always said that I acted like her. My Aunt Angel always said that I was a small version of Max. Well she really is not my Aunt, but mom said that everybody from the flock was like family.

I sat in my chair waiting for it to turn 9:00. My parents said that I couldn't fly until then because people could see me. Yes, it was finally 9:00! I swooped out of my chair and opened the window. My wings flared out. I loved the look of my wings. They were partly black from my dad's wings but then they faded into white with some speckles from my mom. I jumped out the window, and fell a couple feet, but snapped right back up. I loved the feel of the wind blowing across my face. I just loved the feeling of flying, but once in a while I would forget to flap my wings. Mom is trying to help me with that. She says that some day I will be as good as her, but my dad says that I am already as good as her and that she just likes to brag.

What is that, I thought as I saw something flying in the distance. I flew over to get a closer look. Oh my gosh! I saw two erasers talking to each other. My mom told me about them, and about how they were mean flying idiots. I flew to the top of a tree.

"Come on, why can't we kill them tonight", one of the erasers asked? "Because, Capricorn told us to wait till tomorrow", one of the other erasers said.

I flew as fast as I could home. I was only about two feet away from my window. OW, I screamed as my foot hit the bottom of my window. I fell down the wind hitting me against the house. It all happened so fast that I couldn't flap my wings. I hit the ground with a big force and twisted my wing. I was tough like my mom so I didn't scream, but my mom heard the crash anyway and ran out the door.

"Are you all right sweetie", my mom asked? "I am fine I just twisted my wing", I replied. It doesn't look that bad, but still we should put something on it", she said in great concern. "Yea I'm sure that they have petroleum jelly for wings in all the local stores", I said. "Well can you fly on it", she replied. "No I don't think so .but mom. I saw something on my flight", I said. "What was it? Are you okay", my mom said back. "There was two erasers talking, and they said that they were going to kill us", I said softly so my little brother wouldn't be frightened. My mom just stood in front of the door for a couple seconds. Then she ordered me inside and yelled for everybody to go into the living room.

I walked inside to hear my brother telling me to go upstairs, and get his night light since we were camping in the living room. "Why don't you get it yourself", I asked? "Because I'm scared to go up by my self", he replied. "Fine I'll go", I said.

I ran up stairs, and felt someone throw a bag over my body. I screamed, and my mom darted up the stairs, but it was too late. I was gone!

I hope you guys liked it. I will update soon!