Alternative part to scandalous muffins ' " cliché " . Tell me what you think !
"Okay . Well , I ' ll just say it . I really fancy you , Lily . And I know that you thought I was such an arrogant prick last year . And I tried really hard to change for you . And now Sirius thinks I ' m totally whipped . Normally , I ' d punch him for saying something like that , but I guess I kinda am whipped , Lily . But I don ' t really mind , if I ' m whipped for you . Look , I know I ' m not great with words . I tried treating you like every other girl in the school . I tried getting over you . But you ' re so…different from every other girl I ' ve met and you deserve to be treated better . And , let ' s face it: I ' ll never get over you . You ' re beautiful , you ' re smart , you ' re so kind and patient and you help people . You ' re just too damn amazing . And I love you for all those reasons and reasons I can ' t even explain . Merlin , it feels so good to just say it . I love you Lily Evans , and I always will even if you don ' t love me back .
"I guess what I ' m trying to say is…well , I ' m going to ask you one last time . And if you say no , then I ' ll never bother you again . Lily , will you go out with me?"
James was very interested in the grass . Lily looked up at him from her position under the willow tree and grinned widely .
" Well , I never really wanted to snog the giant squid . . . "
I thought i was going to write more but let's face it , I ' m too lazy . : )