So I decided to start a KimKin big story thing. I already have a Corney one underway, but I'm not really sure if I'm going to share it on here. It's gone over well on Tumblr and Wattpad.

So this came to me suddenly when I was thinking about my past summer cause a friend called me. And so this came up. So sorry if it gets really sad though!


The first time I saw her was when I was told to take her best friend a blanket. The first time I saw her she looked horrible.

"Kin, take a blanket to room 150 Kagami for me please," I saluted the nurse and added a nod.

"Yes ma'ma!" This was the first day I saw her, "Yo Core!" I fist bumped another volunteer as he also came out of the blanket room, "Taking Lanes a blanket?" His face turned a bit red and he smiled. Corey, my brother Kon, and I had started volunteering in the hospital last year. During his first couple weeks he met Laney, a cancer patient. This part of the hospital we were in was filled with several different types of patients, so we didn't expect to meet someone like Laney Penn. She has minor cancer, though, so it's curable. She's suppose to get out soon. Corey and Laney fell in love toward the beginning of this year. I tease him all the time for it, so it was ironic that I would meet the girl of my dreams here in the hospital.


I squeezed some hand sanitizer out of the holder in front of the door that said Kagami. I then knocked.

"Come in, loser," I frowned. Loser? I opened the door to see a girl quietly playing a guitar and two others quietly playing instruments as well.

"Uh, sorry to say this," I spoke, "But you can't play those in the hospital," They glared at me.

"For one, close the door. Kim's in totally bad shape," I did what the blue haired girl asked, "And it helps her know we're here, loser," I rolled my eyes and then looked at the girl in the bed. She looked really bad, worst than some of the cancer patients that Corey had taken me to see. She was deathly pale and looked like she could die at any moment. I asked the question that I wasn't suppose to ask.

"What happen to her?" I looked at the three and one started to cry. The other two hugged the girl and then I noticed she was covered in markings. The boy looked at me.

"Someone was bullying Konnie and Kim protected her. They beat her into a coma," My eyes widened in surprise as I looked at her. I would never have guessed that. I would have at least thought she was in a car crash. A knock sounded at the door.

"Kin!" Corey's voice called, "We need you out here!" I gave them a smile.

"Here's your blanket. I hope she gets better," The blue haired girl rolled her eyes.

"Whatever loser," I glared at her before leaving the room. Corey was waiting for me.

"You took a while, find the girl of your dreams?" He teased. I punched him in the shoulder.

"Let's get back to work," I responded as I got some more hand sanitizer. As I rubbed it on my hands, Corey and I headed to the main desk where the head nurse was waiting.

"Corey, go to room 135 and make sure they don't need anything. Kin, go bring the people in room 139 their food," We nodded and parted ways.


When the day was done, I met Kon down stairs. We waited for our mother to arrive. She was always pretty slow, since my father died. She also thought we were a bit crazy for volunteering at this hospital, since this is the place my father died in. I sighed as we sat outside the hospital.

"I don't know. I'm starting to lose hope," I heard a familiar voice say. I turned toward it to see Konnie and her two friends leaving the hospital, the red haired boy holding the hand of the blue haired girl, "Kim's been like this for days now. I don't think she's going to wake up," Konnie stopped walking when the other girl said that. The other two stopped as well.

"Don't say that!" She growled, "You're just as bad as those who put her into that coma!" Konnie looked like she was about to cry, "You're right though. If she doesn't wake up soon, we're going to have to take her off life-support," Kon looked at me and he could tell I knew them. I put a finger in front of my mouth.

"Yeah. I know it's sad that you don't have enough money cause your dad is all that you have," The boy spoke as he put his free hand on the girl's shoulder. He smiled at her, "Maybe we can find a way to save her. Just believe in the Newmans for now, okay?" Konnie nodded as a car, my mother, pulled up. Kon pulled me up and we walked to the car. I glanced at them one more time, thinking about the girl who might die soon because her father can't pay for her to be in a coma.


That night I had nightmares about kids trying to beat Kon into a coma. Kim's fate turned into mine. I woke up, wide awake at midnight.