Hey guys! I'm back with another story and I know that I don't have a very good track record of finishing stories, but I promise that I will work my hardest to finish this story. It's usually after about 10 or 15 chapters that I start to hit a roadblock on this road called creativity. I don't know what to name this story, I am thinking "What's wrong with me?" mainly because that is how I ended all of the character's point of views in this chapter. I don't think I like that title too much though. I hope you guys can give me ideas. THANK YOU!

DISCLAIMER: I DO NOT OWN THE DIVERGENT TRILOGY OR ANY OF THE CHARACTERS...sadly.

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Beatrice's POV:

I don't belong in Abnegation. I know I should stay, though. Caleb's leaving for Erudite when it's our turn to choose, so I should stay. I need to stay for my parents. For Tobias. I can't leave him here with Marcus. I know he's 18 and he is close to being marring and getting his own place, but I feel obligated to stay for him. I love him and when I'm around, Marcus won't hurt him. I feel trapped here, I feel the need to run and to be free. How can I do that if that is condidered to be selfish?

My aptitude test yesterday revealed to me that I am Divergent. They say that it's dangerous for anyone to know. They say that I am dangerous, just for being Divergent. Divergent. Does anyone even know what it means? They just tell us that it means we don't only fit in in one sole faction, we belong in multiple, usually only two. Not me, though, I fit into 3 of the factions: Erudite, Abnegation, and Dauntless. I have already determined that I am not going to Erudite. I can't go to Dauntless because of what I am. If I go there, they will find me and they will kill me. I have to stay in Abnegation if I want to stay safe. I know I should stay, but I NEED to be free, I NEED to feel like I am strong and in control.

"It's okay to be selfish today," a deep gravelly voice says from behind me. I turn and see a handsome Dauntless boy, smiling at me. I nod and then turn back just in time to hear my name being called. I tell myself not to look over at my parents, at Caleb in Erudite now, or at Tobias. I fail. Tobias' eyes are pleading with me to stay, but I can't. I know that now. My mom smiles and nods at me as if she already knows what m decision is going to me. Once I get on stage, I cut my hand and I am staring at two bowls: one with grey rocks, and the other with hot coals. Quickly I thrust my hand out and I hear the sizzle. I did it.

The Dauntless erupt in cheers and yells and Tobias walks out crying. I want to run after him, but I can't. I chose and now I am stuck here. Well, not stuck, I am free here. I just can't walk away. I need to talk to him, to tell him, sorry, to tell him I love him.

"What's wrong? You look like you just signed your death rite," the same voice from earlier says from beside me.

"I think I did," I frown.

"Oh, well I can help you train if you want," he offers. I smile at him but shake my head.

"That's not what I meant. I mean, my best friend and the guy that I was supposed to marry is still in Abnegation."

"Well he could always choose Dauntless when his turn comes around," he wraps an arm around me, comforting me. I lean into him and I think he was surprised because I accepted his comfort and his touch.

"He chose two years ago," I say into his shoulder, and he just holds me for a while.

"Well, then why did you leave?" he asks as he kisses my cheek. I smile a little and then sit up, moving away from him. This is too fast for me. I just left my best friend and future husband. I love him, he's been there for me since before I can remember, and I have been there for him since the beginning. We're supposed to fall in love and get married and have kids. Why did I leave him?

"Because I don't belong there. I don't fit in, I need to be free and I need to feel like I am doing something that will make me happy," I whisper with regret.

"I understand that, but why didn't you want to leave him?" he asks, with confusidon evident on his face.

"The only reason he stayed in Abnegation is that his father forced him to. His father abuses him and he doesn't have the nerve to stand up to him or even report him. I'm no better, I just left him," I look down at my lap. The guy stands up and goes over to the leader of Dauntless, they have an intense discussion that lasts about 4-5 minutes and then they both come over to me.

"Beatrice, we're going to need you to take us to Tobias," Max comes over and pats my back reassuring me that everything is going to be okay. I nod and get up slowly, taking them to our little hideout as kids, knowing that's where he went. The boy who's walking beside me grabs my hand and walks beside me. Max goes in and talks to Tobias for a bit, I stay outside becuase I know that Tobias doesn't want to see me right now. A few minutes later, Tobias and Max come out. I look at them both, waiting for someone to say something.

"He's coming home with us, temporarily anyways," Max says. "We will put Marcus under truth serum tomorrow and then convict him. Then Tobias will go back to Abnegation and resume his life there."

"B-but, can't he stay?" I ask incredulously.

"I'm sorry, but no, he made his choice two years ago, and despite the circumstances, it must stay that way," Max looks between us apologetically.

Tobias pulls me into a hug, telling me that it will all be okay, that we can still write to each other, and that he will visit me on visiting day. He tells me that he loves me like his own sister and that I saved his life from the devil himself. I just cry and cry into his chest, not wanting him to leave me, but it's my choice, I made my decision and I will stick to it. I will stay in Dauntless and I will make it here. I will not die, like many before, I will not fail, like many before.

I pull away from Tobias and kiss his cheek, earning a smile from him. "Thank you, Beatrice."

"Don't thank me for looking out for you. You mean the world to me and I would do anything for you," I whisper.

[TIME LAPSE: 2 days later, I now go by Tris, the boy I met has been identified as Uriah, Marcus has been incarcerated, and Tobias is back in Abnegation, arranged to marry Susan Black, a young girl from his year, with whom he has been courting for quite a while without my knowledge.]

Training has been a bit tough since I got here, but it's only pushed me to work harder for what I want. What I hate the most is that I am the who gets picked on by Eric, who is actually pretty attractive. He's been through so much, and he's told me a few things about him that I don't think he meant to tell me and for that, I will not speak a word of it to anyone. I know that he used to be Erudite and although I do not agree with anything that they are publishing, I know that not all Erudites are the same and that he came to Dauntless for a reason, maybe for the same reason I did. I don't know, but I know that although he is attractive, I have my sights on another guy.

Uriah is really handsome, too, and I like him, a lot, but I think him and Marlene have something going on. Otherwise, they're just really close, which I really hope is the case. I don't know. I mean I don't want to make a move on him, mostly because I don't know how I just really like him. Without knowing me, he was there for me and he made me feel better about what was going on. I know it's only been a couple of days, but man he is attractive and I always find myself watching him train on the other side of the training room with the Dauntless-born initiates. He's like the only friend I have here, all the transfers hate me because I am from Abnegation. They think that all the rumors that Erudite is spreading are true, and so far only one of them has been proven to be true.

"Hey, Uri?" I lean towards him while the rest of the 'gang' continues eating. He looks at me with curiosity in his eyes and I decide, this is my chance, this is what will make or break me emotionally. "I wanna take you up on that offer to help train me," I whisper as my hand inches closer to his on the bench. He smiles and nods at me as I grab his hand and interlace our fingers.

"Meet me in the training room at 7 tonight, we can train until 8 or 9, up to you, because curfew is 10," he winks. I smile and nod, placing our hands in my lap, rubbing my thumb across the back of his hand. He just smiles and continues eating. Marlene takes note that our hands are in my lap and she glares at me. I shrug and keep eating with a smile on my face.

A part of me still feels guilty for leaving my parents, but I'm beginning to overlook that little detail because here, I belong and I fit in.

What's wrong with me?

Uriah's POV:

She's gorgeous, but she doesn't know it. I first saw her sitting in front of me at the choosing ceremony, her leg was bouncing up and down and she was constantly readjusting her seating position. I knew she was nervous about her choice, I could just tell. It's almost as if we were connected somehow, but I just knew that she was conflicted about her decision. She was scared. She wanted to choose for everyone else's pleasure, not her own. She kept looking over at some guy in the Abnegation section, probably her boyfriend, but then she'd look further up, to who I assumed were her parents. Her mother, I think, smiled at her and she relaxed a little, but when she turned back around, she looked tense again. I decided that I was going to tell her something, so I leaned forward to tell her that it is okay to be selfish every once in a while and she gave me a tight-lipped smile and a nod and turned back. Then her name was called. Beatrice Prior. Such a gorgeous name for such a gorgeous girl. The grey clothes do her no justice. It is obvious that she has a good looking body underneath it all, but it would be 'selfish' to show it off.

I remember thinking that she shouldn't stay in Abnegation, because then it would mean she would have to hide her beauty and she would have to hide. She doesn't deserve that. For that reason, I hoped and prayed that she would choose Dauntless. At least that's the reason I kept telling myself.

Later I held her hand as she cried for who I thought was her boyfriend, but was really just a close friend that she didn't want to leave behind. He hugged her and I hate myself for it, but I eavesdropped a little and heard him tell her that he loved her like a sister, and that got me really happy, and it kind of made me think that he was an idiot for not loving her as more. Internally, I was throwing a party.

I feel kind of bad because Marlene likes me and yeah, I kind of liked her too, but it wasn't anything I thought would be worth making a move on, so I never did.

I am sitting here at lunch and Tris leans over towards me and tells me that she'll take me up on my offer to help train her. I smile and nod at her telling her to meet me in the training room at 7 and then she grabs my hand and places our hands in her lap. My heart is literally soaring and I feel like I am smiling like a buffoon. I notice that Marlene is glaring, but I don't even care, because, in all honesty, she never had a chance, especially after I saw Tris. If she would have chosen different, so would I. If she's there, I don't care where I am. Just looking into her eyes, that are a stormy blue, I feel at peace. As if her eyes were the literal eye of the storm. She calms me and she seems to find a way to make me laugh all the time. When I'm around her, I don't feel the need to run and party and get crazy. I feel at peace and calm and I feel like I could lay by her side forever.

I don't know what she's doing to me, but I can't say that I don't like it.

What's wrong with me?

Eric's POV:

I don't know who she is, and I don't like that she fascinates me. She defies me and she is determined to prove all the harsh and degrading comments wrong. She works harder than the rest of the initiates. They throw one punch and she throws two twice as hard. They run ten laps and she runs thirty more. She stays after training to workout more. She shows up early. She is the hardest working initiate and for some reason, she makes me want to cut into her brain to see how she works. To see what pushes her. I constantly yell at her and call her out for being weak. I don't do it to make her feel bad, I do it because I know it scares her a little and fear doesn't shut her down, it wakes her up. It fuels this fire deep within her, it makes her strong and it makes her work harder for what she wants. I want to see her succeed, but not as much as I want to see her fail. I want to see her fail because it would mean that she wasn't worth it. It would be a reason for me to stay away from her. If there is a possibility that she will fail, I want it to happen, because she's reaching this place inside of me that no one else has ever reached. I don't want her to leave, but I want her gone. I don't want her here because she's slowly tearing down my walls. The other day, I accidentally slipped up and told her that I am originally from Erudite and that my parents disowned me when I left. She already knows enough to make me lose all respect that I have earned here in Dauntless as a leader. If people remember that I am from Erudite, they will hate me and they will taunt me. I can't have that, and for that reason, I make Zeke, their instructor pair her with the Candor, Peter. He is vicious and he hates her the most. I can't have her here tearing me down. She has a grudge against Erudites, I wouldn't blame her if she hated me and she wanted to destroy me. I would if I was in her place.

I groan in frustration and punch the punching bag that I have hanging in my house. I can't let her get to me, I can't let her tear me down. I don't want her to go factionless, but I hate that there is a possibility that I will end up giving her more power over me than anyone else has ever had. I feel bad for pairing her with Peter and I even begin to regret it, but I can't go back now. I can only hope that she can pull through with the fight and survive.

What's wrong with me?

HEY GUYS! SORRY FOR ANOTHER AUTHORS NOTE. Please let me know how you guys want this story to end. I don't know whether to make it an EricXTris or an UriahXTris.

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