so here's the first chapter, I hope you like it :)

I don't own Harry Potter :(


It is cold, ice cold on platform 9 ¾. Melina had put her long brown hair in a cap. She looked at the wizards and witches in their colourful clothing. Melina pulled the shawl of her sister Adora for a while, who was rubbing her hands. Adora has ice crystals in her blonde hair and looks with her light blue eyes to her sister.

'What's up?'

Melina laughed, 'you look like a ice cube!'

'I can't help it that I'm so pale!'

'Spend more time in the sun, vampire.'

'What's family for...' Adora muttered.

At that moment they hear the whistle of the train and look at the train in front of them. They run to the train like crazy people and jump in the hallway. In the Hogwarts Express is it luckily pleasantly warm, so Melina takes off her cap. The train started driving and Adora walked further through the hallway.

'I'm happy that we already had put our suitcases in the train, we're always late.'

'We stay in the cold too long.'

'Yes,' Adora smiled, 'quite ridicoulous actually.'

'Yeah, I don't even like cold.'

'I don't really mind it.'

'Yes but you're a dementor.'

They smiled weakly and look at the compartments they walk by.

Adora looked at her sister who looked for the compartment of her friends. Blaze probably saved her a seat. The Slytherins were quite to each other, compared to others.

Melina walked through the warm aisle and looked as inconspicuous as possible, but that wasn't very easy, it costs quite a lot of attention if you walk by the compartments by staring into to it. She heard Adora laugh behind her about her posture and turned around. Adora gestured to Melina's hunched postion towards the windows.

'Who was the dementor again?'

Melina puffed, 'you, always.'

Then she heard a noise of a door opening and turned around. She looked right into Benno Zabini's eyes. Benno smiled friendly to Melina and ignored her sister.

'Melina, were you lost? It took so long, haha!'

Melina looked at his beautiful brown eyes that matched his dark skin and smiled lightly. 'The aisle is straight, Benno, I'm not that stupid.'

Adora saw how Benno pulled her sister into the compartment he just opened. The door shut with a bang and the curtains closed while Adora heard her sister laugh and fooling around with Benno. Adora sighed and walked further. She might be in Slytherin, but she'll never be a real one. Melina was a real "Slytherin Princess" wheras Adora was befriend with the Weasleys .While she walked further she looked into the compartments she walked by: happy faces and waving people. She toke a white chocolate bar out of the pocket of her cloak and walked on, searching for the losercompartment, the compartment for vampires and pale zombies: her compartment.


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