Summary :Hinata is weak, her clan looks down on her, and Naruto flat out rejected her. No one will know if she's gone. She decides to end it all...until a familiar blond man stops her. DeixHina
Sorry for the lame title, lol.
Unless I change my mind later, this entire thing's gonna be in Deidara's POV. My first time trying it from 1 char's POV only. and second time in POV style in general. I'm also pretty stupid so sorry for any grammer fails or spelling errors. This is set soon after the Gaara vs Deidara arc. And despite the suicidal Hinata, This wont be a horribly sad type fanfic. I can't write stuff with unhappy endings.
And you're probably wondering why I'm writing multiple fanfics at once. Answer: Idea wouldn't go away and it keeps me from getting bored with one.
By the way the rating may change later, if I can go through with what I have planned. not sure yet though. Also, I am terribly sorry for the crappyness, I had updated this when I first uplaoded it but it apparently didn't save ._. and I firefox crashes when i try editing from there, so I ahve to use IE and...I practically dissconnect from it upon opening, so it's not real fun. and now I can't remember what I changed either.
My last mission for the month had just ended, I was about to head off to enjoy my hard earned vacation. When I saw her...I surely didn't recognize this woman, but there was something very off about her. Something that really bothered me for some reason. I decided to follow her. Despite the fact that it had been raining, I could clearly make out that she was crying, she was also talking to herself but. I couldn't hear her over the sound of the rain. Then it happened...She stood up, and headed right for the edge of a nearby cliff. She showed no sign of stopping at all, her eyes looked almost emotionless as she put one foot over the edge and- Bang. I jumped down from my perch on a tall tree and grabbed her arm. Why? Like hell I know, I didn't have the luxury of time to think this over. I just acted...It was then I noticed that she had passed out. Deciding that if I left her she'd probably kill herself, I took her to the inn I'd been staying at in the village a few miles back.
Once I arrived with her, I was greeted by an array of questions as to why I was carrying an unconscious woman, It was highly annoying...Brushing of the onlookers I headed upstairs to my room, and sat her down on my bed. Even inside the warmth of the inn room, she was shivering, badly, I wondered to myself how long she had been out in the rain. She was now showing obvious symptoms of hypothermia, and the fact that her clothing was completely soaked...didn't help. But I really had no right to undress her...So I proceeded to finding one of the female staff at the inn, and having them help.
She seemed a bit more stable now, she was dressed in some of my spare clothing, which, was quite a bit too large. But I didn't have the kind of extra money to buy anything for her, so it was the best I could do. Now to wait...This is not how I had planned my time off the Akatsuki to be... I sighed then went downstairs to see if anyone recognized the girl. after about an hour of asking around to no avail, I returned to my room and waited for her to regain consciousness.
It was about 2 hours or so before she finally woke up too.
"Mmm..."
"Oh, so you're awake at last, un?"
"Eh? W-Where am I. W-who are you? W-wait I...the cliff..why...alive..." She ranted in a panic.
"Calm down will ya, un." I grabbed her shoulders and shoved her back into a laying position. Thinking that it was probably not a good idea to let a suicidal person flail about. She went silent and just stared at me, with her eyes full of apparent sadness. "Alright, now, if you're finally calm, I'll explain, but you have alot of explaining to do yourself miss, you're screwing with some of what little vacation time I have, un..." I paused. "Anyway, I'll make this short cause it's annoying to have to explain. I saw you try and walk of the cliff...and for some reason I ended up stopping you without thinking. You fell unconcious, and I brung you back here, un." I stopped, "Oh, and before you call me a perv or some shit, I had one of the female staff change your clothing, un..." I added before waiting for her response.
"O-oh...I see...But..I..I have no reason to live. no one will even realize I'm gone...Y-You should have just..."
"Let you kill youself?" I finished for her. "Why would you think your so useless anyway, un?"
"..." She was quiet.
"C'mon, you owe me at least that, un." I gave her an annoyed glare.
"But...it will..j-jsut seem silly to you..."
"So? Tell me anyway, Or you're not leaving here, un."
"What? B-But that's..."
"What? If I let you go your obviously gonna go suicidal, thus meaning my effort was a waste of time, un."
"..." she was silent for a good several minutes, "I...I was rejected...and...my clan thinks I'm just a weakling not worthy of being in it..." She looked at her lap, having moved back into an upright position.
"Is that all? If they think you aren't worthy, then get better and show them off, and there are plenty of guys that I'm sure would go for someone like you, un. Whoever rejected you must've been retarded." I refrained from mentioning how pretty she actually was, I hardly needed to end up with her thinking I'm some perv who saved her to hit on her. She seemed to be speechless at this, and just stared at me for the longest time...It was getting annoying. "Would you quite staring at me already, un, it's kinda annoying."
"Oh..I-I'm sorry..just...maybe you're right...I-I was so caught up in m-my obsession that...I-I wasn't thinking straight...T-Thank you..um..." She titled her head as she looked at me. I supposed she was waiting for my name.
"Deidara" I told her, deciding that she was unlikely to know the names of any Akatsuki. "How about yours, un?"
"T-Thank you then...D-Deidara-san. M-My name is...H-Hinata." She smiled, and it seemed as tho some of the sadness in her eyes faded. "So...um...w-where exactly am I?"
"In a inn, in a small village a few miles from where I found you, un."
"I see..." She looked saddened again.
"Gotta problem with that. un?" I was getting a bit annoyed at her lack of explanations.
"Oh..Um. I Uh...Just...I had some..comrades in the village I was in...and ..." she trailed off.
I sighed. "I asked around the inn, and no one remembers seeing you, un, so this is probably not the village you came from."
"Oh...I guess I'll go then...I'm sure I can find my way back, I-I don't want to burden you anymore.." She got out of bed and attempted to exit.
I grabbed her arm. "It's storming pretty bad you idiot. The hell do you think your doing, do you WANT to get sick, un?" I pulled her back to the bed and sat her down. "You're staying here at least until it stops raining, un" I held a firm tone in my voice. and gave her a 'don't try anything or else' look. "Understand?"
"Y-yeah..." she looked into her lap.
there was an awkward silence for awhile. I just sat in a chair near the desk while she sat on the bed looking out the window. It was still storming pretty bad, and getting late to...I didn't see her leaving anytime tonight, that's for sure. which led to the issue of sleeping. This was a pretty small room...with a wooden floor. I guess I'd have to lay on a blanket or something. Tonight was going to be very uncomfortable... But this wasn't really the time to worry about that. I had to write a report on my mission. and turn it in to Zetsu. Something I really couldn't risk while she was awake. so I just told her to get some sleep, and after a 30 minute argument of how unfair it is for me to sleep on the floor, and how indebted she was to me, she settled down in bed, and I began digging though my bag for paper and a pencil. I really needed to organize my crap.
It was 11pm by the time she fell asleep. Meaning I was probably not gonna get much tonight...I started writing the damn report. Then silently left the hotel to deliver it to Zetsu. After delivering it to said plant man, I silently crept back in the room, and laid on the floor. It was 4am at this point, and I was gonna feel like crap tomorrow...
And that's all for this one so far xD I think it's written better then my other one. I treid to make it more serious, for now, it's gonna be a romantic comedy like all my other works soon enough xD.