I would like to thankfor giving me some more ideas to use. I've worked some of them into my redone story. Misato thinks boy instead of Shinji because she doesn't really know him yet.
Chapter 1
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"Due to an emergency all trains are currently closed. For your safety, please head to the closest shelter," repeated the phone in next to the boys ear, but he just stood there with glazed over eyes. He slowly crumpled to the ground, ending in a fetal position. Tears streamed down his face without notice.
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Misato drove up. She stepped out of her car and looked around for the boy she was supposed to pick up. Worried at not seeing anyone at the train station Misato started to head back to her car to prepare to drive around incase the boy had went somewhere else when she heard someone crying.
Following the crying she found a boy curled up in a fetal position. Recognizing him as the boy she was sent to pick up she kneeled down next to him.
"Um…hello, I'm Misato. I was sent to pick you up," She said, but the boy just laid there crying.
"Are you ok…we really need to get out of here," Misato said, hoping he would reply but he again didn't respond.
Still not getting any response Misato decided that she would have to carry him to her car. Reaching down she grabbed the boy under the armpits trying to lift him up. Once she got to the car, the boy suddenly stuck an arm out, stopping Misato from pushing him into it.
"Aaargh," Misato screamed in frustration dropping the boy to the ground after yet another failed attempt to get him into the car.
Suddenly she heard a whining noise in the air. Turning towards the noise she saw a flaming VTOL falling straight towards her.
"Oh shi…," Misato said just before the burning plane crashed, killing her and Shinji.
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Misato drove up. She stepped out of her car and looked around for the boy she was supposed to pick up. Worried at not seeing anyone at the train station Misato started to head back to her car to prepare to drive around incase the boy had went somewhere else when she heard someone crying.
Following the crying she found a boy curled up in a fetal position. Recognizing…
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Misato drove up. She stepped out of her car and looked around for the boy she was supposed to pick up. Worried at not seeing anyone at the train station Misato started to head back to her car to prepare to dri…
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Misato drove up. She stepped out of her car and looked around for the boy she was supposed to pick up. Worried at not seeing anyo…
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Misato drove up. She stepped out of her car and looked around for the boy she wa…
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Misato drove up. She stepped out o…
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