Hello anyone who is reading this. I am nintendosegapokefan and this is my first fiction on fan-fiction. It is about Max's journey through Hoenn ,3 years after Battle Frontier. But I guess that is a long enough introduction, let the story begin!
Disclaimer: I don't own Pokemon
Petalburg 7:00am
Max POV
Hello, my name is Max Maple and this is the story of my journey through the Hoenn region with Pokemon, man am I excited!Today I am ten I'm shorter and therefore lighter than most my age being 3ft 5 inches. But that doesn't matter for I will become the Hoenn champion one day"Max it's time to go get your starter!" my mum called from downstairs. "Coming mother!"I shouted. I closed my journal(not diary mind you) packed it in my rucksack and ran downstairs. Downstairs, waiting for me were my mother Caroline Maple who was average height and a brunette with blue eyes, father Norman maple a tall man with black hair and navy eyes, sister May maple who was a tall blue eyed brunette and friend Pokemon, Ralts who had a white dress like body and green bowl like hair that covered its eyes and two antennae sticking out of it's head where waiting "Sister? I thought you where in Johto?" I said, surprised "I was" she replied "but what sort of sister doesn't see off her brother to get his first Pokemon?". "Anyway since this is your Tenth birthday you do still get presents." dad said. "here you go." he presented me with a box containing 4 pokeballs and 2 great balls as well as... a new Pokenav(my other one was rusty and outdated)"thanks dad!" I said giving him a firm hug. "Here's my present Max" my mum said to me handing over a box containing.. a pair of running shoes, my trainer and an Acro bike!"thanks mum!" I said giving her a big hug. "this is my present Max!"she said giving an item-finder and good rod to me "thanks sis" I said while giving her a bear hug. I turned to look at Ralts, holding a pokeball "Ralts" I said "I need to do this"
Ralts simply nodded as I threw a pokeball and captured her. I quickly called her out again. "okay, good bye everyone" I said finally "good luck bro/son" They said as I walked off
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route 101 12:00 pm
"hey you" a familiar voice called from behind me I turned around to see my friend, rival and doppelgänger Max Ample! Max ample looked just like me but had brown hair instead of blue, was an inch taller and had different glasses and clothes. "I see you are on your way Littleroot as well" he continued "why yes I am going to Littleroot" was my reply. "Good so am I" he continued "which starter will you pick" he questioned me. "Treecko" "guess I'll get Torchic then" "I'll still probably beat you" "Na my Torchic and Surskit will beat Ralts and Treecko" "no they won't" we continued like this until we got to Birches lab in Littleroot. "okay lets go" we both yammered opening the door. Prof. birch was a tall man with brown hair wearing a lab coat, blue shirt and green shorts. "professor we are ready to get our Pokemon" Max stated "aright but first.." he gave us our trainer cards and pokedexes "okay Max" he said pointing at me "pick your starter" he showed me a container with the pokeballs containing the three Hoenn starters, Treecko, Torchic and Mudkip. "I choose Treecko!" I exclaimed "And I choose Torchic" Max said "aright here you go he said, giving me Treecko's pokeball and Max Torchics "okay it's time to start my journey!" I declared "right after you battle me" Max contradicted "Right after we battle" I sighed Impatiently
We quickly ran outside with our starters "Go Torchic!" "Treecko I choose you!" we yelled
Treecko was a small green Pokemon with a red stomach, small pouch and a leaf tail and 2 legs Torchic was a small red and roundish Pokemon with a yellow beak and small yellow wings and two clawed feet "Torchic start with a scratch attack" Torchic jumped at Treecko and raised its talon to attack "Treecko intercept with pound" Treecko span on its arms to smack Torchic from the air. Torchic rolled then jumped up "now agility!" Max said. Torchic started running around quickly "now keep scratching" he commanded. Torchic quickly ran at Treecko and did a hit and run attacking then running then attacking again. When Treecko seemed to be on its last legs Max commanded Torchic to finish it but I wasn't having it "Treecko, use dragon-breath" I commanded Treecko let loose a stream of purple and pink energy that caused Torchic to veer off course and slam into the ground "now crunch!" I aimed to K.O Torchic with this move but Max wanted to do the same to Treecko "reversal now!" Treecko's teeth glowed purple as Torchic's body released several blue orbs, absorbed them to glow the same colour and charged at Treecko. The result was Treecko biting Torchic while taking the brunt of the reversal. Torchic fainted, and Treecko wasn't much better."Finish this Surskit" he called out said Pokemon. Surskit was a Pokemon that was blue, had 4 long legs and a yellow antenna facing backwards"bubble-beam" He commanded and Surskit spat out multiple bubbles" dragonbreath" I retaliated Treecko fired out a beam of purple-pink energy that hit the bubblebeam. For a second it stopped it and popped some bubbles but bubblebeam won and caused Treecko to faint "go Ralts" I shouted sending out Ralts "psychic" Ralts was surrounded by a pink aura which covered Ralts body then Surskits body then slammed it into the floor repeatedly before Surskit broke free. "Signal beam" Max commanded Surskit. Surskit fired a multicoloured beam at ralts "teleport" Ralts disappeared reappearing behind Surskit "Shock wave" I commanded Ralts She made a yellow ball of electricity throwing it at Surskit Surskit took the move, retaliating with a water pulse from its antennae "Signal beam" Max told Surskit. It fired a multicoloured beam at Ralts hitting her solidly and directly
"lets end this" Max said to me "yes" I smirked at him "Ralts shock wave" "Surskit signal beam" Ralts charged a yellow ball and threw it at Surskit while Surskit fired a multicoloured beam. They both met in the middle pushing with maximum force in a stalemate however for just a second Surskit let up and the shock wave hit Surskit knocking it out I "Guess you win Max" Max said to me while returning Surskit "yeah, that was a good battle" I said to him "now lets heal your Pokemon" Prof. birch said. We headed inside the lab to heal our Pokemon "professor Birch I have a question" Max spoke to the professor "yes?" he replied "well. how did Treecko and Torchics get those moves, I thought at this point they should only have scratch growl or leer and pound" he inquired "yes well your Pokemon moves where egg moves, moves gotten from the father of the Pokemon your Torchics agility and reversal, your Surskits signal beam and Treecko's dragonbreath and crunch are egg moves" Birch explained "and my Ralts' shock wave is a TM move" I added. "anyway Now my Pokemon are healed I will be leaving" Max stated. He quickly picked up his pokeballs and ran off. "bye professor birch" I said before wearing my running shoes and sprinting back through route 101 "finally I can go somewhere" I thought.;but then I saw A traffic jam and thought "maybe not" before joining a 3 hour queue
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Oldale town 3:00 pm
?POV
I quickly ran away from the cops holding the artefact I swear, they will not take this Item from me I cannot fail this mission."stop return that artefact to the museum" one Officer called to me "No this Object is mine!" I turned a corner and bumped into someone, a short boy with blue hair and a pair of glasses. "excuse me" I said pushing the guy aside. "hey!" the boy exclaimed "what do you want" I hissed, dropping my normal act. "don't push me" he growled. "shut up brat" I hissed again running to the drop point. I opened a pothole and a very large flying Pokemon took to the skies, It was a tropius, a four legged Pokemon with a tail, 4 leaf wings, a long neck and a beard of bananas with me and another member, a top rank grunt took to the skies on it's "did you succeed? He asked me in a curious tone" "yes, my promotion to General is certain." good" he replied. Suddenly our Tropius was hit on one wing with a fuchsia beam of light and was paralysed on that wing, staying airborne using the other three wings. "nice shot Treecko" ugh, It was the same kid as earlier "Ralts, psychic" "now, Mightyena, incinerate" great and the police are here too mightyena, a dog like Pokemon with four legs,2 strips of black fur from heaf to tail fired a beam of fire at tropius while the Ralts was surrounded by a pink aura and fired it at tropius. "go swellow, use brave bird" my Pokemon, a swellow which was a Pokemon with two white and blue wings, a white body and a red head came out, it's burn orb setting it on fire, activating guts. Then it was surrounded by white flames and smashed into the Ralts, Treecko and Mightyena, defeating them just as they made their moves Injuring Tropius and being knocked out themselves. I quickly took out a hyper potion and sprayed it on Tropius however these guys still weren't done an officer sent out a Grumpig to use bounce but it got hit by a façade from swellow. I felt like something was in my hair but it was nothing.
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unknown location? POV 6:30 PM "WHAT how could you lose It!" I roared at a grunt "we d-don't know sir" the grunt muttered "go find it now" "yes general" the grunt obeyed. I sighed. "at least we started to produce some time oil from that rock" I thought "yes, if the grunts fail, we can use our duplicator to get more time oil and..." "he-heh"I started laughing "heh-heh-heh..AHAHAH we will conquer all!" I sounded completely Insane so I decided to stop cackling and start contacting the commanders and my fellow generals to tell them about this. I must say, being a general is sweet. I have so much power..almost too much...
-scene change--Oldale town 7:00pm Max's POV I booked a room at the Pokemon centre in Oldale to sleep. As I lay I thought about the days events: I had left home got my official trainers license, official starter and Pokedex, then had my first trainer battle, bumped into a criminal, battled and lost to said criminal helped the police apprehend the criminal(by getting his clefable to use minimize, then when grumpig bounced It jumped into his hair).and stayed In a Pokemon centre for the first time. aren't I a great trainer? Not even ash could do this in one day, Especially not on his first day! Tomorrow I would get to Petalburg and say hi to Mum and Dad, but I will not challenge dad, he is just too good and I only have 2 Pokemon
-Author notes-
Character listings: Max Maple: Ralts lvl10,modest nature moves: psychic, teleport, shock wave, safeguard/Treecko lvl6,Hasty nature, moves: pound, leer, dragonbreath, crunch
Max Ample: Surskit: lvl10:mild nature, moves: water pulse, bubblebeam, agility, signal beam./Torchic naughty nature, moves: scratch, growl, agility, reversal
General?: swellow lvl?,? nature: moves: brave bird, façade,?,? item: burn orb
What do you think, do you think Max is a Gary Stu? well don't worry, he will more overconfident, impatient and show his noobishness next time.
This is my first FanFiction so please Read and review with constructive criticism(also I apologize for any typos that may be in there, when a newbie proofreads 2000 words, there is usually bound to be some typos)
this is nintendosegapokefan signing out Peace! (I just made that up)