Hey guys ... I wanted to thank you guys for reading my first story and for the reviews (there's not a lot but I'm extremely greatful for each) The reason I posted that one is to test if my writing skills are compatable for this site and also to invite my character... THIS will be my best attempt at a long story with possible sequels.I will stop chatting so you can read on... ENJOY!(BTW... this isn.t the sequel to Lost and Found.. This is a whole new story)
Etiennes POV
Where am I?... The last thing I remember is a bear, then falling down this cliff and blacking out.I tried to get up but I couldn't.I lost a lot of blood and was too weak and I was in an unbelievable amount of pain and I think my ribs were broken, I couldnt yell for help no matter how hard I try,all that comes out was a dry whisper followed by a cough which hurt my torso even more.I began to crawl as far as I could, hoping to find some form of life before I lose vision started fadding and soon enough I past out right after I howled as loud as I could before dropping to the floor.I felt death embrase me in my slumber and woke up to find a siloette walking past.
"Heey!' I wheezed out,hanging on my life that was slipping figure stopped.He heard me! Theres still hope! I thought.
"Where are you?who are you?" The figure sounded like pup.
"Over here!" I coughed which also helped him locate me and came dashing towards me
"Golly Sir!Are you okay?" The pup asked looking at me.
"Get help...please.I can't hold on any longer..." I said. body getting weaker everytime I delay, he ran as fast as he could to get help.I slowly slipped into darkness again,but I faintly heard him yell"Guys there's a wolf who needs help here!"and everything was dark.
Zoms POV
Where the hell is he?! I asked myself while serching for my last saw him when we came across that bear and he just ran off with were injured and couldn't follow him,and now he's nowhere to be found, Hope he's okay though...
"Find anything?!" I asked to the other two.
"Nothing yet but I wont give up" Slash said looking down in disappointment.
"Same here..." said only reason we are out here is because our pack wouldn't accept us for liking the same pisses me off to see how judgemental some wolves are...
"Hey I found his scent!" Shane said pointing to the north.
"Lets go!" I yelled runing in that direction... he was definately here... along with other wolves...
Etiennes POV
*groans* Where am I? why... why am I.. I was rocking back and forth and was getting nausious.
"I'm... I'm gonna..." I tried to roll off whatever it is that was carrying me before I threw up on it.I just got off before I started puking out blood...
"Hey... we're almost there... just hang on a bit longer...Looks like internal bleeding." I heard someone say.I only noticed then that I was surrounded by a small pack of wolves.
"Where *cough out more blood* where are you taking me?" I asked the pack.
" we're taking you to our pack... you need to get some help. You're pretty beaten up"One of them was well built but quite short.
"Okay" I said as I allowed him to carry me. The only thing I had in my mind was.I hope Zom is okay...
I slipped in and out of conciousness on the way there and felt my body go limp.I was going to die...I placed me on the ground and spoke to someone I couldn't identify through my blurry vision but sounded female.
"What happened?!" She demanded
"We're not sure, we found him like have internal blee..." I couldn't hear what they said as my vision faded again...
And thats Chapter 1 of my new story...sorry it was extremely short but I promise to make the next chapter EXTREMELY long... thanks...Review and PM any questions
LATER!
