Why?

Okay, so this is my first time writing Harry Potter Fanfiction.
This is quite a bit different to the scene from the movie (Half Blood Prince) but it's still centred around Draco bleeding in the bathroom after Harry hits him with the Sectumsempra spell.
Obviously in this Ron has feelings for Draco.
There's a lot of dialogue in this, but I think it turned out alright.
Tell me what you think, but please don't be don't too mean =)

Ron walked down the corridor and heard a shout before Harry came running out of a door on the right and nearly knocked him to the ground.
Harry was pale and looked like he might pass out at any second.
"Are you alright Harry?" Ron asked.
"Fine." Harry said quickly before he walked off quickly, nearly running.
Ron stood in the middle of the corridor for a second and then opened the door of the room Harry had just run out of.
It was the boy's bathroom and Ron nearly turned and walked out but he heard a choked cry and stopped. He listened and when he heard it again, he pulled his wand out of his pocket and walked forward slowly. He rounded the corner and saw Draco Malfoy lying on the floor, choking and crying, in a pool of water and blood. Ron dropped his wand and rushed forward, dropping to his knees and lifting Draco off the floor and into his arms.
"Ron…help." Draco choked out, trying to grab at Ron's shirt.
Ron was stunned for a moment because Draco had used his first name.
"How? I don't know any healing spells." Ron was trying not to let his panic show through. "I can take you to Madam Pomfrey…maybe she can help?"
"No, don't take me there…"
"But, you'll die if I don't."
There was no answer from the blonde boy and when Ron looked down he saw Draco's eyes were nearly completely closed and his breathing had slowed.
"Drake, please! Let me take you to Madam Pomfrey." Ron was now fighting back tears.
"Why?" Draco asked.
"Why what?"
"Why…is this happening to me? I never wanted to be like my father."
"I know, and you don't have to be. Draco? Let me take you to Madam Pomfrey, please? There might still be time." Tears were sliding down Ron's face now as Draco struggled for each breath.
"…'s too late." Draco whispered.
"No, maybe it's…"
"Stay…with me?"
"Okay."
Ron shifted back against the wall behind him and pulled Draco closer to him.
He didn't pay attention to the blood that soaked through Draco's shirt and onto his. He just listened to each breath Draco took until they stopped altogether and the room was silent.
Ron let out a sob and kissed the top of Draco's head.
"I'll never forget you." He whispered.