First off, this is my first story. Please read and review and tell me if I should continue. On in the story I begin writing what people are saying different. Please tell me if it is getting annoying, and I will try and write it as it is in the beginning. The story is in Belle's POV, so when I write "me" or "I" I am talking about Belle. Anyways, here ya go!
"I thought you said you're shift ended at midnight." Dave said as he leaned against the bar while looking at his watch, which now read 12:55. "It was, but some people called in sick, so I have to cover their shift, plus, I thought you said you would be here at 11:50, what happened?"I said. "Well, things ran a little late on Smackdown."
Hi, my name is Isabelle, but people call me Belle. I have a twin sister names Shaul. We practically do everything together. We have the same jobs, go almost everywhere together. Anyways, we have black hair that is a little below shoulder length, brown eyes, and average height and weight. We just turned 22. We both work as bartenders at a club at night, and work at Burger King in the day, and are both dating WWE wrestlers. I am dating Dave Batista, and sissy is dating Chavo Guerrero.
"Look who's coming in" Said Dave. I look at the door and see Shaul and My long time enemies, Eric and Anthony.
Well, well. Look who we have here, our favorite bartender. What do you say about getting us some free drinks, hun?" said Eric
I look at the clock, which now reads 1:00. "I'd say my shift is over." At that, sissy and I got out of the bar and went to the dance floor with out boyfriends to look for Stacy and Randy.
Randy: What's up?
Shaul: Nothing much, just trying to get away form Eric and Anthony. Those guys get on my nerves.
Stacy: They get on everyone's nerves, just try to ignore them.
We danced for a while. Stacy got tired and she sat down for a little bit. Eric came up to her and started flirting with her. She told him to quit and go away, but he wouldn't
"Eric, STOP!"
"No, come here."
"No Eric, you're drunk, you don't know what you are doing."
"Oh, I know what I want and its..."
About that time, Randy came up behind him, turned. Him around and punched him. Eric Punched Randy back, and they started to fight.
Dave: You guys stop, someone is calling the police!"
We heard sirens. We all left, got in our cars, and drove home without looking back.
Well, what do ya think? Im going to put up 3 chapters to get it going good. Please read all 3 chapters and tell me what ya think. If ya like it, I will write more. I promise it is better as it goes on. I have had this story in my head for a while, but am just writing it, I promise it gets better! Thanks!