Ok so I am back with another random poem. I know. I have better things to write. This was actually a school assignment and I thought it turned out ok so I was like "What the heck?" So if you like it, please tell me. If goes against your religion, I don't wanna hear about it. Enjoy my short poem!


The birth of sin

Began very long ago

In a garden green

With many trees that did grow

By temptation, did it start

The fruit from the forbidden tree

Changed their minds and their hearts

Cursed where they and their ancestor's

For pain and labor was now theirs

Death was certain

But new life come through prayers

Though life was hard

And things went wrong

God gave all men a way to pick a new card

And now angels sing when humans make a choice

For He died on the cross

So we could be saved

And forget our loss

We are not alone in this dark world

Because Someone will always be on side

Even when things become a blur

So when this life is over

And we believers ascend into the clouds

We become one with heaven

And lose all of our doubts

We are changed forever within

Because He loved us

Our story should be of Redemption after Sin


Thanks for reading! I'd like your thoughts so please review if you have a sec! You'll get strawberry cake.