Hey – My 1st Primeval story, Please review and tell me what you think of it! (It's gonna be mainly centred on Becker but will include the rest of the team too!)
Gone Forever Part One -
- Becker stood, in the dark and icy cold, his gun raised, aimed at the large moonsterous Smilodon, which growls, and sneers. Jess Parker lied on her back, screaming and panicking, she was lying less than a metre away from the giant growling beast, Becker shoots, but his gun was jammed, the Smilodon pounced, and ripped Jess to shreds, faster than light,tearing her apart. She was dead instantly. Blood seeping from her bright orange skirt, her face, mangled, unrecognizable. Becker's heart sank, he'd failed at his job, and the job to protect the rest of the team, how many more people has to die? Stephen, Cutter, Capt. Ryan, Sarah, countless soldiers, and now Jess, beautiful Jess, gone forever. Becker fell to his knees and screamed . . . . .
-Becker wakes up, nearly screaming, his heart racing a million miles a minute. He remembered that dreadful night, the night that Jess died, and it was his fault. He sits up, and holds his sweaty face in his large hands, whilst the images of Jess playback in his mind, again and again and again.
Becker gets up, gets ready for work, and soon heads off.
He marches into the hub of the ARC. The empty red chair sits there, without an owner. Becker sighs, how he misses Jess since the accident. His memories play back in his mind, "Nothing with orange in, right?" But now she's gone, gone forever. Becker frowns, as he hears the blaring sound of the ADD saying there was another anomaly. Great, all he needs right now
They head off in the SUV's. Becker's radio crackles, "Guys, there's reports of an Allosaurus on the A25! You'd better hurry!" The New field coordinator, Alice Williams says through the radio.
Not long later, they arrive at the scene; Connor switches into Science geek mode, and starts to tell everyone about the rampaging dinosaur
"Right, Allosaurus, about 12 metres high and 8 metres in length, Theropod, Late Jurassic period. Big, strong, fast predator. Be careful guys." Connor states
Becker jumps into action, taking his favourite gun and raising it high, "Matt, what's the plan?" He asks, not quite knowing what to do with the huge beast.
Matt sighs, "Right, this creature is big, really big, so, we use the largest EMD's on the highest setting, Connor, you find the anomaly and lock it, Me, Becker, Abby and Emily will go after the creature. We shoot to kill ok?" Matt orders
A look of disappointment crosses Abby's face, "Look, I really don't want to have to . . . . " She starts
"I'm sorry, but the Allosaurus is way too big! It's killing people! I'm sorry" Matt says
"But . . . ."
"We shoot to kill . . . . Okay? . . . . We shoot to kill . . . . . . . . "
Okay! So sorry the 1st chapter was short! (Wanted to leave it on a bit of a cliff-hanger!) anyways, hope you guys like it! Please review and tell me what you think! :D Thanks x (Feel free to suggest improvements etc. but no nasty reviews please! Thanks xxxx)