This is my first attempt at poetry, please give honest reviews
There is no courage to be found
I don't have the wits or skills to be sound
Opportunities are throwing themselves at me
And I seem to miss them because I can't see
But I look back and I see them now
This I cannot take
How could I have missed them
I guess I'm not good enough
Or have any of the stuff
Decisions are coming, they are going to suffocate me
In that split second I cannot see
I make one hoping its right
But I'm going to be caught in the blight
I'm going to never see the light
I wallow in darkness and I think
In all of this darkness I'm going to sink
There is not any hope now
I am a nobody without know-how
I guess someone else will have to be the hero
Thanks for reading! Please give tips for improvement.
From,
A Beginning Poet Named LionHunter