This is my very first writing of anything regarding sex, so please review and give pointers!
"Man, I can't believe I found this place!" Alfred squealed as he looked around at the ghost town. The buildings looked like they would fall apart any second, with the rotting brown wood only adding to the atmosphere. A tumbleweed aimlessly rolled in his path, bouncing as if it was led on a string. "This is awesome!" He gave a thumbs up at the town. Walking around, he poked and prodded at various old remains of what was once a prosperous mining town. Stepping out of the decrepit general store, Alfred looked up at the sky from the middle of what was once Main Street. White, wispy clouds gracefully lined the deep cerulean sky and floated on by like bird feathers.
That's what he would have seen, however, if the sky wasn't suddenly dark and menacing.
"Huh… Didn't say anything about a storm today…" Alfred laughed and continued strolling through what was once the bustling street of the town. As he stepped on a twig, the snapping sound alerted him to another sound, this one more sickening. It sounded as if someone's wet, moldy boots stepped into a pile of soured pudding. Turing around, he took one look at the maker of the broad shadow and screamed in horror.
The gargantuan thing that stood before him was an abomination in every sense of the word. Its body, or lack thereof, was just a green pulsating sphere with a mass of long, writhing tentacles extending from it. It had no mouth to speak of, just a large red eye. It seemed to look around the deserted town for something. And then its eye met Alfred's bright blue ones, somewhat hidden behind his glasses. The monster had found what it was looking for.
Seemingly moving at the speed of light, it wrapped one of its appendages around the man, immobilizing him. "What the hell do you want?" Alfred screamed, struggling against its strong grip. "Shouldn't it be obvious?" The thing whispered, despite having no visible mouth. Reaching another tendril over and stroking Alfred's chin, he whispered, "I want you." His azure eyes widened, and he continued writhing vainly in the grasp. "Oh, you can't escape, and don't even think about screaming, you poor thing." A green tentacle whipped itself around and shoved itself into the man's mouth. The young man gagged as the tentacle exerted more pressure down his throat. "Got it?" Alfred frantically nodded as best as he could, letting his glasses fall off in the process. "Good." The creature let his voice ring throughout the town with its sickeningly sweet poison as he took the appendage out of his mouth. The town resumed its desolate state, seemingly ignoring the massive elephant in the room. A tumbleweed aimlessly rolled by the abomination. Oh God, Alfred thought, please let this be the end of it, oh God please! "Let's get down to business, shall we?" The thing whispered, stretching one of its many tentacles to Alfred's shirt. The personification could only look at it in horror, his bright azure eyes laced with fear meeting the solid red one brimmed with pure lust. "Oh, do stop struggling…" It adjusted itself, unwrapping Alfred and giving him a breath of fresh air. He tried to run away, only for the thing to grab onto his arms and legs and spread him like a starfish. The tentacles began clumsily unbuttoning the shirt. As they unbuttoned a button, the tendrils would then ooze over the exposed skin. Alfred restrained a moan as they got closer and closer to the final button, and down near his penis. Finally, the brown shirt lay splayed open, revealing muscular chest that lay beneath the layer of pesky clothing. "Oh my, you are indeed magnificent…" "Sh-shut up!" Another appendage burst out of the monster's back and lunged for Alfred's chest, secreting ooze as it touched it. "Are you sensitive… there?" A tentacle flicked across the man's perky nipple, causing a rough gasp to escape his lips. "You… bastard…" Alfred panted, trying to hide the mere fact that he was feeling himself harden.
He crossed his muscular legs, but the beast noticed this and wrapped them with his slimy appendages, pulling them apart in the process. "Now now, we can't have any of that…" It whispered, flicking a small tendril against the young man's ear as he shivered in the beast's tentacles. The beast slid yet another of his tendrils down Alfred's body, taking his time to touch every piece of skin. "Mm? Did you say something?" It stopped moving and looked at the strained face of the young man. "N-nothing!" Alfred blushed, trying to forget that he tried to encourage the thing to just hurry up and fuck him already. "Very good…" It then shoved two tentacles down. One began unzipping the khaki pants, exposing his crisp white boxers, and the other shoved itself down said boxers and began to play with the ever-hardening penis. Alfred restrained a moan as the appendage twirled itself around and squeezed ever so slightly. "Feel free to make all the noise you want." The monster uttered, pulling off the pesky boxers and revealing Alfred's cock, wrapped up in a green tentacle. He couldn't help but moan as the two tentacles began stroking his cock. A third extended itself to play with his nipples, flicking them in all directions rapidly. Alfred moaned, much to his horror, and begged the thing to play with him faster. "As you wish."
It began to rub up and down, occasionally vibrating against his cock. The ooze secreted onto it acted as a lubricant, causing the young man to writhe in pleasure. He forgot entirely about the abomination that was treating him like nothing more than a sex toy, he just wanted this moment to last. Pre-cum began to leak out, which the monster flicked away, sending a shiver of pleasure up Alfred's spine. "Oh God…" He whispered as the monster's tentacle slithered against his testicles. He was so intoxicated by the pleasure that he didn't see yet another appendage feel around his anus. It plunged in, causing Alfred to scream in a mix of agony and euphoria. He could feel himself reaching his climax, and he tried to tell the beast that, but the sheer pain from the tentacle shoving itself in and out of his anus kept him from doing that. As the beast felt around inside of him, it felt his prostate and pushed against it. At that point, Alfred screamed, his mind nothing but pleasure and pain mixed up in a cacophony of lust. His body arched as his cock extruded cum everywhere. Alfred writhed in the beast's arms once more, and finally calmed down, leaving him panting and blushing profusely.
"You make a good pet…" The thing whispered, looking at the panting, cum-stained body of the personification. "I'll make sure to take you home where I can play with you whenever I want."
An exhausted scream rang through the town.
Again, please comment with whatever I could do better!
