New Revaluations

Chapter: One

~Hinata~

Ever sense I first saw him at the chounin exams I was petrified of him. My father warned me to stay far away from him, if he ever caught me anywhere near him it would mean terrible punishments.

I mentally scoffed!

As if I why would I ever have a reason to go near him in the first place. I nearly fainted and peed myself when I saw him. Sadly enough I was 15 and I had to participate in the jounin exams today and he as well as his sibling's would be there. I pulled my head band over my head and down to rest around my slim neck before I, opened my door attempting to sneak passed my father's door.

"HINATA!"

Ahh Crap!

I chewed a hole through my lip as my father yelled at me. I was crying like the pathetic child I was. My knees and body shook terribly, the closer and louder he became. My onii-san and nii-san watched silently as he beat me harshly and yelled orders at me. Whimper's and cry's released themselves from my lips at the pain coursing through my feeble body.

That only egged him on more.

"Weak! SO weak! You are completely pathetic! IF YOU EMBARRASS ME TODAY I WILL KILL YOU!"

He centered his chakra at his palm as he smacked me, sending me through the hallway of the huygua compound. Everything blurred around me until I saw a angry figure hovering over me. I screamed loudly when I felt cold metal pierce my skin. My father had stabbed me in the leg with a kunai.

That fucking bastard….

"I'll be watching you...Disappoint me…And I'll see you in my office... My eyes grew big as I remembered what he did to me last time. I knew he could kill me if he wanted to but couldn't...or at least he wouldn't for now. I slowly pulled myself up and dragged myself to my room to heal. I knew I would be late. I cringed as I heard Hanabi's scream's echo throughout the house next...

No one ever got a break around here…

~~~~~~~Jounin Exam's~~~~~~

~Hinata~

My eye's bulged out my face slightly as my ex-crush Naruto uzaumaki gushed about how Sabaka no Gaara was now kazakage of suna!.

I nearly fainted again.

I blushed as I remembered how I fainted from my loss of blood right on the battle field where Temari-san and Kiba-chan battled disrupting everything. I knew my father would be upset. Hanabi had a black eye and Neji had a cut on his brow.

Not a good way to start off the day at all.

I had a freaking gash! I'd rather have one of those, but I knew Neji most likely got a broken bone or two like usual. He used to protect me, but after our mother passed he stopped and started to hate me, only for Hanabi too slowly follow after him. I gave them no sympathy of any sort anymore. I turned away from their harsh glare's and responded to Sakura.

"Y-yes Sakura-cha-an? I sputtered lightly.

"Are you okay? She asked softly. I blushed a dark crimson at that realizing all eyes were on me but I nodded my head slowly anyway.

"Aye! Hinata-chan! How would you like to go out with Sasuke-teme and Sakura-chan and I later for ramen!?"

All the blood drained from my face at his close proximity.

Didn't he ever hear of personal space?

I-I-I! M-maybe..." I squeaked raising and dropping my shoulders quickly.

He nodded and slowly but surely backed away from me staring quite hard. I placed my hand to my checks hoping I covered that bruise well en-"Hinata Hygua! And Ino yakmana! Battle now!"

I gulped audibly and nervously made my way to the arena. I looked on nauseously eyeing everyone around me. My palm's where so clammy, my heart thumping, my mouth so dry that I couldn't even think straight.

I knew I would lose I ju-…Oh dear Jesus….

"GO HINATA YOU CAN DO IT!" Naruto screeched.

"YEAH! I BELIVE IN YOU HINATA CHAN!" Lee followed.

I looked up to see Lee and Naruto cheering for me with few others's smiling encouragingly. I took a deep breath and prepared myself as it all began.

"FIGHT!" The announcer ordered instructively into the microphone.

I centered my power as the fight began...

```````The Fight```````

~Sakura~

I really was afraid as I watched Hinata and Ino fight. I wasn't sure how much more either could take but my focus was more on Hinata. She looked horrified each time Ino got close to catching her in a finishing move.

We'll shit I would be too, with a family like hers...

She was badly wounded but it was if she didn't notice how badly she was wounded. She had shut had down several of Ino's chakra point's and broke her elbow but Ino kept at it desperately. I watched Naruto and Lee as they screamed for her. Naruto seemed as though he would cry if she didn't win. I snapped out of my thoughts when I heard a loud crash.

"ICE DEMON TAJUSTU!"

Hinata's entire body flared in a blue aura as she charged at Ino. My eye's could barely follow her movement's, as she kicked and punched at Ino with one hand, pressed behind her back. I squinted to see around her right hand was the head of a dragon. She jumped back after keening Ino in the head sending her flying into the arena's walls. The crowd grew silent and watched intently as Hinata preformed hand sign's, her hair whipping around wildly with her as her hand's flew with increasing speed.

"BAYUKAGAN!"

Hmm family technique…

Veins extended in her eyes. I couldn't believe it...Ino hadn't returned but soon as she did...My stomach twisted in not's at the incredible chakra level Hinata was at...If she strikes Ino with all of that...She could possibly be killed.

Don't get me wrong….I despise Ino strongly….but still.

Ino stepped back into the clearing running at Hinata with several kunai's, gripped tightly in her left hand. Hinata crouched down and took off towards Ino with the same speed.

"GENTLE STEP TWIN LION FIST'S!" Hinata screamed, her usual calm features completely hysterical as she attacked her.

Both her fist's rammed into Ino's body knocking the wind out of her.

"AAH!"

Ino was propelled upwards with the first hit. Hinata running and jumping flipped in the air and continuously kicked her around. I watched in amazement as Ino crashed to the ground. I heard several gasps erupt throughout the stadium. I snapped my head back up to see Hinata twirling in the air only to flip downwards her left fist aimed high right for Ino's stomach. The attack was so strong she and Ino both disappeared within the arena ground's...

Oh god no…..

~Neji~

I composed my facial expression but inside I was in shocked..I could not understand how the weakling of the family...the very person to spit on our name...could contain so much rage and power...from the looks of it...father was...Actually impressed...I...As well.

Hm….

~Hanabi~

I clenched and unclenched my fists tightly.

I was beyond angry.

How could she!? How can she be this strong! She can't be… she's the weakling! If she wins father…..will turn on me more! And poor Neji-nii-san! I turned to him in silent panic speaking with urgency.

"N-neji-nii-san!? She can't possibly with hold this much power can she!? Please! Ni-"

"Hanabai!" He yelled; spit dribbling off his bottom lip. I jumped back slightly afraid of his tone.

"Stop making a fool of yourself before father sees!" He insisted, fixing his exterior again.

But I refused to give this up.

"H-he'll beat u-us more I-

"If you don't shut your fucking mouth and be silent he will! If you break your arm he will! If your break a vase he will! If you do anything beyond breathing or fighting PERFECTLY!...ANY Flaw's WHAT SO EVER! HE STILL WILL HANABI! So shut up now or so help me GOD.! I'll make you!"

I could only sit there with wide eyes and obediently turn my attention to the match at hand stiffly as the winner was announced.

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~Hizashi~

I could only wait until we got home to deal with...this properly as I watched...I was...perplexed... where had all this came from? Why had she hidden it...

~Hinta~

I was worried. I had seriously injured Ino-san and couldn't find the light at the start of this crater yet. I knew she needed medical attention and so did I. I found a small crack spraying in some light so I took a kunai and picked with it until it crumbled. I shoved Ino's unconscious form through the hole first, dragging my own beaten body through afterwards. Loud cheers erupted once I shakingly stood up tall.

"AND THE WINNER IS HYUGUA HINATA!" He yelled grabbing my wrist and pulling my limp arm up to raise up high in the air, with pride I never managed to create alone for myself.

"W-what...Wh…-

What had the m-man said j-just now?

The excitement and reality of it was too much for me to comprehend and I finally blacked out.

I'm re-editing this entire story instead of just taking it down. I recently gained another fan and I only write to gain the approval and enjoyment of those who read. I hope you enjoyed the new and improved version of this chapter….There is more to come. Check me out on .com ! That's where I've been. I have seven stories on their total…my name is B-BlossomGirl….

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