Disclaimer: I don't own pikmin, Olimar, the onions, or the distant spring but I do own all original colors, areas, and the story. ENJOY!


It was a sunny day in the Distant Springs. All the pikmin where out collecting treasures for Olimar. A leaf fell on a working white pikmin.

"Man I hate this place," Tox said shaking off a leaf that fell on him, "There's roaming bulbears here, lots of water over there, and a freaking huge spider up there."

"Come on its not that bad the beady long legs won't stomp us if we leave it alone, and the sparkling water is just beautiful," Bubbles replied as she surveyed the landscape.

"It's beautiful to you because you won't drown if you fall in to it," Thunder snapped.

Louie was leading a small team of pikmin to go get a diamond before the sunset, but it was getting close to dark. The sun was shrinking below the mountains causing the sky to turn orange. Sunset was only minutes away and they only just got the diamond. To make up for the lost time Louie decided to take a shortcut.

"Is it me or does this place seem familiar?" inquired bubbles.

"I have a bad feeling about this," Tox said nervously.

The group of pikmin were almost home free, but when they passed under the tree all hell broke loose. A beady long legs crashed through the air landing on the group of pikmin. The long legs stomped around crushing many pikmin. Louie had abandoned the pikmin and took off towards the onion.

"That dolt!" Thunder screamed, "when I get my hand on him I will ki-."

Thunder was cut off as a huge foot slammed down on him killing him instantly. A spirit appeared where Thunder once was flying up into the sky.

"Oh my God Thunder!" Bubbles screamed in terror.

"It's too late for him come on," Tox said as he pulled on Bubbles' arm.

Tox and Bubbles ran away from the beady long legs. They made a mad dash for the onions but when the got up the sandy hill the saw a terrible sight. Bulbear had gotten into the camp and were reeking havoc. The red onion was strewn across the ground in pieces. The yellow onion was being chewed up by the smaller bulbear. The blue onion and the ship were flying up towards the sky.

"There going to make it!" Bubbles exclaimed pointing towards the sky.

As if an insult the blue onion began to shake violently. As the ship reached full speed the onion swerved to the side and crashed into the ship causing a huge explosion.

"No," Tox whispered, "this just cant be happening."

"We have to go now!" Bubbles screamed.

Tox was frozen in place unable to move. He was frozen in place by the sight of the onion crashing into the ship. Bubbles began to pull him away from the carnage but he pulled his hand away.

"There's no use," he said defeated.

"Are you just going to stay here and get devoured?" she asked urgently.

"Yes," Tox replied solemnly.

Bubbles began to run away. She took a look back and then ran as fast as possible. Tox was watching her leave when a bright light caught his eye. The flaming ship was falling back down to the planet.

"Bubbles look out!" he yelled.

Bubbles didn't here him. The ship slammed into the ground right next to her and exploded sending her flying several feet. As if it wasn't painful enough she landed right on top of a pile of honey rocks. Seeing his best friend lying ominously still on top of the honey rocks snapped him out of his hopelessness.

Tox ran at full speed toward Bubbles. He was relieved to see that she was still breathing. When he stopped beside her she opened her eyes.

"G-get to safety," she coughed out weakly as a green liquid formed at the corner of her mouth.

"No your going to be okay Bubbles your going to be ok," Tox whispered as tears formed at his eyes.

"I love you," she said with her last breath and became still.

With tears in his eyes Tox ran. He ran and ran until he came to a loose hill. He dug until he a small tunnel where he curled up in. The last thing he heard before he fell asleep was the screams of dying pikmin.


Wow. Writing this made me feel sad. I will continue this for a long, long time. Please R&R and tell me how you felt or what I can improve on.